Faqat kuchh saal hen jaanaan! (by vb)

by vb on July 03, 2012, 03:06:17 PM
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Faqat kuchh saal lagnay hen
Tumhen sub kuchh bhulanay men
Faqat kuchh saal hen jaanaan!
Faqat kuchh saal lagnay hen
Tumhen sub kuchh …

Meri baaten, mera lehja
Meri aankhen, mera chehra
Meray tootay huvay sapnay
Meray roothay huvay naghmay
Tumhen sub bhool jaayay ga
K ik naakaam sa shaair
Najaanay kitni chaahat say
Tumharay saath ki khaatir
Tumharay pyaar ki khaatir
Adhooray geet likhta tha
Tumhaari narm baanhon k
Sahaaron ko tarastaa tha
Usay ik baar sunena thaa
Tumhen us say mohabbat hay
Tumhen us say mohabbat hay

Hamaray garm jazbon ne
Ye jo sadiyaan taraashi hen
Junoon k kaarkhaanay men
Faqat kuchh saal lagnay hen
Tumhen sub kuchh bhulanay men
Faqat kuchh saal hen jaanaan!
Faqat kuchh saal lagnay hen
Tumhen sub kuchh …

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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2012, 03:50:27 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne
jabardast najm pesh kee hai.
Bahut bahut mubaarakbaad.
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2012, 05:23:04 PM »
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 Applause
 bahut  khoob , vb ji .
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2012, 05:24:34 PM »
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wah bahut khoob likha vb jee Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2012, 01:32:49 AM »
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la jwab bemisal, bohut khoob , kya alfaz piroye hai aapne , waqai bohut shandar nazm hai meri dili mubarakbaad qubool karen
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2012, 01:39:56 AM »
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Andaaz-e-bayaan aapka alag hai sabse. .bahot khoob. .
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2012, 01:42:53 AM »
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baht khub bahut hi umda qalaam likha aapne vb ji... bahut bahut mubarakbaad....

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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2012, 03:00:22 AM »
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BAhut Khub Vb Ji Daad Hazir Hai Qabul Kijye
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«Reply #8 on: July 04, 2012, 03:10:00 AM »
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Faqat kuchh saal lagnay hen
Tumhen sub kuchh bhulanay men
Faqat kuchh saal hen jaanaan!
Faqat kuchh saal lagnay hen
Tumhen sub kuchh …

Meri baaten, mera lehja
Meri aankhen, mera chehra
Meray tootay huvay sapnay
Meray roothay huvay naghmay
Tumhen sub bhool jaayay ga
K ik naakaam sa shaair
Najaanay kitni chaahat say
Tumharay saath ki khaatir
Tumharay pyaar ki khaatir
Adhooray geet likhta tha
Tumhaari narm baanhon k
Sahaaron ko tarastaa tha
Usay ik baar sunena thaa
Tumhen us say mohabbat hay
Tumhen us say mohabbat hay

Hamaray garm jazbon ne
Ye jo sadiyaan taraashi hen
Junoon k kaarkhaanay men
Faqat kuchh saal lagnay hen
Tumhen sub kuchh bhulanay men
Faqat kuchh saal hen jaanaan!
Faqat kuchh saal lagnay hen
Tumhen sub kuchh …

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Faqat kuchh saal lagnay hen
Tumhen sub kuchh bhulanay men
Faqat kuchh saal hen jaanaan!
Faqat kuchh saal lagnay hen
Tumhen sub kuchh …

Meri baaten, mera lehja
Meri aankhen, mera chehra
Meray tootay huvay sapnay
Meray roothay huvay naghmay
Tumhen sub bhool jaayay ga
K ik naakaam sa shaair
Najaanay kitni chaahat say
Tumharay saath ki khaatir
Tumharay pyaar ki khaatir
Adhooray geet likhta tha
Tumhaari narm baanhon k
Sahaaron ko tarastaa tha
Usay ik baar sunena thaa
Tumhen us say mohabbat hay
Tumhen us say mohabbat hay

Hamaray garm jazbon ne
Ye jo sadiyaan taraashi hen
Junoon k kaarkhaanay men
Faqat kuchh saal lagnay hen
Tumhen sub kuchh bhulanay men
Faqat kuchh saal hen jaanaan!
Faqat kuchh saal lagnay hen
Tumhen sub kuchh …

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very brilliant ji aapko yahaan dekh k mujhe bahut khushi hui hai...
Aap kafi dino tk aaye nhi...
Aap lafjon ko jis andaaj me bayaan krte hain...wo mujhe attract krta hai...
Mai b seekh rhi hoon is andaaj me likhna...sayad likh skun...
Aapki ye najm dil k kreeb mehsoos hui...
Bahut bahut khoob...
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«Reply #9 on: July 04, 2012, 03:24:27 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: July 04, 2012, 05:34:11 AM »
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thanx...
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2012, 05:49:25 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Vb ji,heart touching creation.superb. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2012, 10:11:45 AM »
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thanx....
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