FAQEER...sheba

by Sheba on January 16, 2011, 07:04:01 PM
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                              har andaaz tera juda kyon hai,
                              khamoshi teri ek sada kyon hai,

                              nahin haseen meri tarah phir bhi,
                              bahaar ye tujh pe fida kyon hai,

                              hai  buland hausle tere lekin,
                              nazuk  teri ye adaa kyon hai,
                              
                              nazar aati miskeen si zindagi teri,
                              phir tujhe khushi zyada kyon hai,

                              nahin karta izzat gar zamaana sheba,
                              phir turbat pe teri ye sajda kyon hai,
                              
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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2011, 07:58:39 PM »
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Shibaa jee Aadaab!

Waah jee badi jaldi hi aapki dusri kalaam se ruberu
hone ka mouka mil gaya hme.. Usual Smile

Chaliye aapki kalaam par aate hai..         


Quote from: Sheba on January 16, 2011, 07:04:01 PM
                             
                              har andaaz tera juda kyon hai,
                              khamoshi teri ek sada kyon hai,

Achcha sher hai... Usual Smile         

                              haseen nahin meri tarah phir bhi,
                              bahaar ye tujh pe fida kyon hai,

Waah jee kia baat hai daad hazir hai.. Usual Smile         

                              hai shaksiyat buland hausle ki lekin,
                              nazuk per teri ye adaa kyon hai,
                           
Hmmm Yeh to jiske bare meiN aapne kaha wohi jaane tongue3         
   
                              hai dikhti miskeen si zindagi teri,
                              na jaane tu khush zyada kyon hai,

Waah janab waah kia kahne hai... daad daad daad Usual Smile         

                              nahin hai izzat gar zamaane mein sheba,
                              turbat pe teri phir ye sajda kyon hai,
                              Hmmm Kia kaheN... achcha hai daad Usual Smile         


Sheebaa jee kalaam to padh lii humne..
aur ashaar ke ahsaas bhi samajh gaye par yeH nahi
samjhe ke aapne tittle kis bina par aisa rakha hai.. ?

Khair ..

Likhate rahiye..
Khush o aaaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2011, 08:35:06 PM »
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khubsurat likha hai aapne sheba ji... bas title samajh nahin aaya...

Intezar !
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2011, 03:59:41 AM »
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bht khub sheeba ji...
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«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2011, 04:33:38 AM »
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hum batate hain inke Title ka matlab.
inke har ashar ki pahli line ko samjhiye---
Shayd mai hi sahi hun.
may be.
Lekin Mashaallah shandar peshkash sheba ji.
achha lagta hai padh kar--
ek sawaal bhi uthta hai.
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«Reply #5 on: January 17, 2011, 06:13:03 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 16, 2011, 07:58:39 PM
Shibaa jee Aadaab!

Waah jee badi jaldi hi aapki dusri kalaam se ruberu
hone ka mouka mil gaya hme.. Usual Smile

Chaliye aapki kalaam par aate hai..         


Sheebaa jee kalaam to padh lii humne..
aur ashaar ke ahsaas bhi samajh gaye par yeH nahi
samjhe ke aapne tittle kis bina par aisa rakha hai.. ?

Khair ..

Likhate rahiye..
Khush o aaaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         


Pawaaz sahab adab arz hai, shukriya,

' FAQEER' se murad kisi bhikhari se nahin hai. ye wo zahid shakhs hai zo khuda ki qurbat mein hai aur duniya mein rahte hue bhi duniyawi lazzaton se door hai. ye mera apna khyal hai jis cheez ke peeche mujh jaisa nakis shaks hai phir bhi tasalli aur khushi nahin hai aur ALLAH ka ye banda to ALLAH se qareeb hai wahi behtar hai aage kya kahoon aap MASHA ALLAH khud danishwer hain saare ashaar usi baat se vabasta hain . agar koi ghalat lage to mujhe maaf karen kyon ki aap ka khyal iss baare mein mokhtaleef ho sakta hai
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2011, 06:35:42 AM »
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Nice work Sheba Jee.
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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2011, 06:48:11 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2011, 10:03:01 AM »
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bht khoob sheeba ji....
i lyk 1st one alot....
do lines meri taraf se bhi....

muhbaat hoti hai jab teri ibadat E-khuda...
ishq ye mera fir saja kyu hai...
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2011, 10:24:42 AM »
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mast likha hai je....sheeba ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2011, 10:46:01 AM »
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bahut khoob sheba ji..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2011, 01:04:57 PM »
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Quote from: Intezar on January 16, 2011, 08:35:06 PM
khubsurat likha hai aapne sheba ji... bas title samajh nahin aaya...

Intezar !

thank you intezar ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2011, 01:05:31 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 17, 2011, 03:59:41 AM
bht khub sheeba ji...

shukriya kasak ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2011, 01:06:26 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on January 17, 2011, 04:33:38 AM
hum batate hain inke Title ka matlab.
inke har ashar ki pahli line ko samjhiye---
Shayd mai hi sahi hun.
may be.
Lekin Mashaallah shandar peshkash sheba ji.
achha lagta hai padh kar--
ek sawaal bhi uthta hai.

thanks kill ji
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2011, 01:07:05 PM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on January 17, 2011, 06:35:42 AM
Nice work Sheba Jee.
shukriya sajid sahab
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