faraamosh...............A.B

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                   koi  mujhe, koi tujhe , koi  sab ko  sataaye...,
                   rahe  khamosh  koi,  kare  koi   haaye-haaye...,

                   hai   hunar   ye  bhi  jo  jaante nahin subb...,
                   alfaaz dhoondhe koi,koi ishaare mein bataaye...,

                   rakkhe  moqaam  ab naabinaa  bhi  shahr mein...,
                   aankh walon ko jo mukhtalif khawaab dikhaaye...,

                   rahein  chaand  taare bhi gumsum se falak pe...,
                   taarik raaton mein jab'WO' ghoonghat hataaye...,

                   bhool   gayaa  dard  bechain  ye  jism  apna...,
                   dil-o-jigar  ne jaane kitne  zakhm khaaye...,

                  

                  
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2013, 10:18:07 AM »
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waah waah waah! behad khoob likha hai aapne
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2013, 10:36:45 AM »
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                   koi  mujhe, koi tujhe , koi  sab ko  sataaye...,
                   rahe  khamosh  koi,  kare  koi   haaye-haaye...,

                   hai   hunar   ye  bhi  jo  jaante nahin subb...,
                   alfaaz dhoondhe koi,koi ishaare mein bataaye...,

                   rahein  chaand  taare bhi gumsum se falak pe...,
                   taarik raaton mein jab'WO' ghoonghat hataaye...,

                   bhool   gayaa  dard  bechain  ye  jism  apna...,
                   dil-o-jigar  ne jaane kitne  zakhm khaaye...,

LAJAWAAB BECHAIN SAHAB,,
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2013, 11:19:36 AM »
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bahut khoob.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2013, 11:23:57 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2013, 01:10:06 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2013, 03:06:49 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2013, 08:28:13 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2013, 06:23:23 AM »
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waah waah waah! behad khoob likha hai aapne

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«Reply #11 on: January 15, 2013, 06:47:17 AM »
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                   koi  mujhe, koi tujhe , koi  sab ko  sataaye...,
                   rahe  khamosh  koi,  kare  koi   haaye-haaye...,

                   hai   hunar   ye  bhi  jo  jaante nahin subb...,
                   alfaaz dhoondhe koi,koi ishaare mein bataaye...,

                   rakkhe  moqaam  ab naabinaa  bhi  shahr mein...,
                   aankh walon ko jo mukhtalif khawaab dikhaaye...,

                   rahein  chaand  taare bhi gumsum se falak pe...,
                   taarik raaton mein jab'WO' ghoonghat hataaye...,

                   bhool   gayaa  dard  bechain  ye  jism  apna...,
                   dil-o-jigar  ne jaane kitne  zakhm khaaye...,

Wah wah bahut khoob likha hai aapne
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2013, 04:54:12 PM »
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waah waah.. bahut bahut khooooooooooob......
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«Reply #14 on: January 21, 2013, 05:40:12 PM »
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bahut khoob.. Applause Applause Applause

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