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by klaskar on August 30, 2010, 07:52:31 AM
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koi pyaar ki band kitaab tu mere naam kar de,
mere khuda tu bas itna sa mera kaam kar de,

lagaake seene se us kitaab ko mehek jaane de mujhe,
tu kisi khoobsurat gulaab ko mera anjaam kar de,

tadapta hoon main dusron ki baahon me dekh logo ko,
kisi mehekte huye phool ko mere baahon me bhar de,

raahen sooni hain meri aur har shaam andheri hai yahaan,
tu kisi ki pyar ki roshni se jagmag meri har shaam kar de,

tanha hoon main is duniya ki anjaani ajnabi bheed me,
mere khuda tu kisi apne ka saath aaj mere naam kar de...



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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2010, 08:01:10 AM »
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Ameen..!
Dil ki fariyaad likh di dost..
Dua hai yeh porri hojaye..
badi khubsoorat aur masoom nazm hai yeh..
dil choo gayi..!

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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2010, 08:04:00 AM »
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bas dost yunhi flow me likh gaya .. achcha lagaa janke ki aapko pasand aaya ..... aur isse jyada khushi ki bat kya ho sakti hai mere liye ki meri nazm aapke dil ko chhoo sake... shukriya dost....!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on August 30, 2010, 08:01:10 AM
Ameen..!
Dil ki fariyaad likh di dost..
Dua hai yeh porri hojaye..
badi khubsoorat aur masoom nazm hai yeh..
dil choo gayi..!

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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2010, 08:14:45 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 30, 2010, 07:52:31 AM

koi pyaar ki band kitaab tu mere naam kar de,
mere khuda tu bas itna sa mera kaam kar de,

lagaake seene se us kitaab ko mehek jaane de mujhe,
tu kisi khoobsurat gulaab ko mera anjaam kar de,

tadapta hoon main dusron ki baahon me dekh logo ko,
kisi mehekte huye phool ko mere baahon me bhar de,

raahen sooni hain meri aur har shaam andheri hai yahaan,
tu kisi ki pyar ki roshni se jagmag meri har shaam kar de,

tanha hoon main is duniya ki anjaani ajnabi bheed me,
mere khuda tu kisi apne ka saath aaj mere naam kar de...



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KYA BAAT HAI ....KLASKAR JI ....YE TARAP...JAYAZ HAI....

 ZINDAGI GUZAR TO JAATI HAI SEHRA KI TARAH
 KOI ISE GULSHAN BANAA DE TO AUR BAAT HAI
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2010, 10:49:58 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya K ji...!!!

Quote from: kameeney on August 30, 2010, 08:14:45 AM
KYA BAAT HAI ....KLASKAR JI ....YE TARAP...JAYAZ HAI....

 ZINDAGI GUZAR TO JAATI HAI SEHRA KI TARAH
 KOI ISE GULSHAN BANAA DE TO AUR BAAT HAI
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2010, 01:01:16 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2010, 01:01:53 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 31, 2010, 01:01:16 AM
Bahut khoob Kapil
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«Reply #7 on: September 01, 2010, 11:37:16 PM »
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KAPIL JEE !AAJ APNAA HEE LIKHAA EK SHER MUJHE YAAD AA GAYAA........PESH E KHIDMAT HAI.....

DARD KE JAAM SE DO BOOND IDHAR BHEE KAR DE
PYAAS MUDDAT KEE NAZAR EK IDHAR BHEE KAR DE

BHAGWAAN SE PRAARTHNAA HAIAAP KEE MANOKAAMNAA JALD HEE POOREE HO......
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2010, 01:47:02 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Mamta ji... aur bahut pyaara sher share kiya hai aapne....!!!


Quote from: mamta bajpai on September 01, 2010, 11:37:16 PM
KAPIL JEE !AAJ APNAA HEE LIKHAA EK SHER MUJHE YAAD AA GAYAA........PESH E KHIDMAT HAI.....

DARD KE JAAM SE DO BOOND IDHAR BHEE KAR DE
PYAAS MUDDAT KEE NAZAR EK IDHAR BHEE KAR DE

BHAGWAAN SE PRAARTHNAA HAIAAP KEE MANOKAAMNAA JALD HEE POOREE HO......
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2010, 09:20:21 PM »
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Kapil ............ Tumari haar tamna puri hogi ..... God bless u ......... Bhut hi khoob likha hai .......

Jst WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2010, 10:06:19 PM »
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Klaskar Jee aadaab!

Brhad achchi duaa ki hai janaab .... adaygi bhi achchi rahi... Khuda aapki duaa kabool kareN...
     


Quote from: klaskar on August 30, 2010, 07:52:31 AM

koi pyaar ki band kitaab tu mere naam kar de,
mere khuda tu bas itna sa mera kaam kar de,

tanha hoon main is duniya ki anjaani ajnabi bheed me,
mere khuda tu kisi apne ka saath aaj mere naam kar de...



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Above quoted sher are good...... Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez......     
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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2010, 07:04:26 AM »
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bht khubb  likha hai kapil tumne..kuch meri bhi dua tumhare sath kubul ho jaye to likhdi hain...

Khushnuma si rangeen ek shaam tu mere naam kar de
Aaja janu ek bar  fir se tu khudko mere kareeb karde

Dhadkane meri be kaabu hui jaati hain tujhe dekh kar
Kisi aur k sath na tu iss tarah apne subaho shaam kar de

Jaagti raaton ko meri rangeen khwabon k hawale karde
Mere jeewan me tu kuch yun apni mahobbat ka rang bharde

Maine likh di hai ye jawani ye zindagani tere naam kabse
Mere jeewan me tu apne pyaar se jine ki ik nai umang bhar de...
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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2010, 08:11:00 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji....!!!

Quote from: neelgold on September 02, 2010, 09:20:21 PM
Kapil ............ Tumari haar tamna puri hogi ..... God bless u ......... Bhut hi khoob likha hai .......

Jst WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2010, 08:11:52 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya  Parwaaz ji...!!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 02, 2010, 10:06:19 PM
Klaskar Jee aadaab!

Brhad achchi duaa ki hai janaab .... adaygi bhi achchi rahi... Khuda aapki duaa kabool kareN...
     


Above quoted sher are good...... Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez......     

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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2010, 08:14:42 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji.. jarur hogi meri, aapki, hum sabki... har duwa poori hogi... aur aapne apne is kavita me bahut hi khoobsurat andaaz me duwa maangi hai... bahut bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne...

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uske jawaab me kuch likha hai maine...ummeed karta hoon aapko achchi lagegi...

tere liye khushnuma main ek nahi har shaam karunga,
apni saansen nahi apni zindagi bhi tere naam karunga,

apni mohabbat ka main kuch aisa haseen anjaam karunga,
tu khil jaaye gulaab ki tarha kuch aisa kaam karunga,

ab to main dil ki har hasrat tere hi naam karunga,
apni mohabbat ka iqraar duniya me sare aam karunga,

ab tak jo kar nahi paaya kaam wo saare tamaam karunga,
apne pyaar ki khushboo se tujhe main gulfam karunga,

apni saansen nahi apni zindagi bhi tere naam karunga,
tu khil jaaye gulaab ki tarha kuch aisa kaam karunga...


Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 03, 2010, 07:04:26 AM
bht khubb  likha hai kapil tumne..kuch meri bhi dua tumhare sath kubul ho jaye to likhdi hain...

Khushnuma si rangeen ek shaam tu mere naam kar de
Aaja janu ek bar  fir se tu khudko mere kareeb karde

Dhadkane meri be kaabu hui jaati hain tujhe dekh kar
Kisi aur k sath na tu iss tarah apne subaho shaam kar de

Jaagti raaton ko meri rangeen khwabon k hawale karde
Mere jeewan me tu kuch yun apni mahobbat ka rang bharde

Maine likh di hai ye jawani ye zindagani tere naam kabse
Mere jeewan me tu apne pyaar se jine ki ik nai umang bhar de...
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