Fariyad Sun le gareeb ki.... soudagar

by soudagar on July 27, 2012, 05:23:13 PM
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Ae dunia ke rakhwale kabhi to sunn gareeb kii
kar hum par meharbani badal de rekha naseeb kii

sone ya chandi ka chhatr nahi chadhane ko tujhko
ek phool hai pas isi se fariyad sunn le gareeb kii

nahi mangtaa main tumse koi sone chandi ke sikke
do pal ki khushiyan jholi mein daal de fakeer kii

gar tu suntaa hai fariyad keemat ki adayagi par
to kuch to keemat laga mere aansuon ke neer kii

hum bhi hai insan, hum bhi to hai teri santaan
phir kyun deewar khichi hai tere dar par ameer gareeb kii

humne to har pal sir jhukaya hai tere charnoo mein
par lagta hai tere yahan to chalti hai sirf ameer kii

sunn le rabb mere kab se khada hoon choukhat pe teri
ab main thak gayaa na le aur pariksha mere dheer ki
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2012, 01:03:11 AM »
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nicely composed
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2012, 02:11:55 AM »
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nice creation , very good
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2012, 02:18:03 AM »
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Par kar sakoon mila
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2012, 02:51:44 AM »
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bahut vadhiya fariyad kitti tussi........
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2012, 04:02:20 AM »
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Shukriya saini sir
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2012, 06:15:29 AM »
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khooob ... bahut gehraaa he....
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«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2012, 09:30:22 AM »
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Bahut , bahut , bahut  khubsurat  faryaad .  Nicely  written  in beautiful  
words . soudagarji , bahut  mubarakbaad  aur  duaaein.
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«Reply #8 on: July 28, 2012, 01:59:51 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya aarish jii
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«Reply #9 on: July 28, 2012, 03:34:52 PM »
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Bahut barhiya likha hai..
bahut khoob Saudagar jee.
very very nice.
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«Reply #10 on: July 28, 2012, 04:24:14 PM »
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bahut  bahut shukriya sushil ji
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«Reply #11 on: July 28, 2012, 04:59:15 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya ripan dev ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 29, 2012, 02:54:17 AM »
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baht bahut shukriya dilshah ji...
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«Reply #13 on: July 29, 2012, 09:44:15 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya siddiqui sir..
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«Reply #14 on: July 30, 2012, 08:58:00 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya mkv ji
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