farmaan.......A.B

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                      hue ruswaa to khud ki pahchaan badall dalaa,
                      daulat ke junoon mein mizaan badall dalaa,

                      na hui takleef kabhi bechare usss chiraag se,
                      zara roshni kya dikhi makaan badall dalaa,

                      rahe saath sabhi waqt-e-ghurbati mein unke,
                      raees-e-shahar kya hue mehmaan badall dalaa,

                      sambhala safina unkaa toofaan mein nakhuda ne,
                      pahunch kar saahil pe armaan badall dalaa,

                      rahe insaaf pasand wo ta'umr bechain...!
                      lagaa khud pe ilzaam to farmaan badall dalaa..!



safina= ship

nakhuda = sailor, mallah, navik

mizaan= taraazu, balance

                  
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«Reply #1 on: March 27, 2011, 05:45:15 PM »
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aapki dilkash shayri ne
humara imaan badal dadla

aapki gahri baato ne
nirala ko ekdum se khamosh kar daala
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2011, 04:05:07 AM »
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good one

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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2011, 05:28:07 AM »
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bahot khoob bechain sahab ......dil le gayi apki ye shayari......

"   sambhala safina unkaa toofaan mein nakhuda ne,"
                      saahil per pahunch kar armaan badall dalaa,"

ise kya kahe ab........apne jis gahrayi me jakar aur jis andaaj me likha he ....bas i m wordless....mindblowing he sahab.thx for shairng it
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2011, 06:28:53 AM »
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wah bhai adil jii..

maza a agya padhkar..

bahut khoob sabda or zazbaat kahe aapne..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2011, 07:58:47 AM »
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too good to comment....
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«Reply #6 on: March 28, 2011, 09:44:38 AM »
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aapki dilkash shayri ne
humara imaan badal dadla

aapki gahri baato ne
nirala ko ekdum se khamosh kar daala

thank you nirala ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 28, 2011, 09:45:17 AM »
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bahot khoob bechain sahab ......dil le gayi apki ye shayari......

"   sambhala safina unkaa toofaan mein nakhuda ne,"
                      saahil per pahunch kar armaan badall dalaa,"

ise kya kahe ab........apne jis gahrayi me jakar aur jis andaaj me likha he ....bas i m wordless....mindblowing he sahab.thx for shairng it

thank you matrix ji
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wah bhai adil jii..

maza a agya padhkar..

bahut khoob sabda or zazbaat kahe aapne..

dher saari daad~

thanks abhi ji
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«Reply #9 on: March 29, 2011, 09:53:18 AM »
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thank you tamanna ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 30, 2011, 05:25:52 AM »
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bahut khub adilji...

badiya.....
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bahut khub adilji...

badiya.....

shukria manjum ji
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«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2011, 12:37:12 PM »
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too good to comment....

thanks kul
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«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2011, 01:16:19 PM »
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                      hue ruswaa to khud ki pahchaan badall dalaa,
                      daulat ke junoon mein mizaan badall dalaa,

                      na hui takleef kabhi bechare usss chiraag se,
                      zara roshni kya dikhi makaan badall dalaa,

                      rahe saath sabhi waqt-e-ghurbati mein unke,
                      raees-e-shahar kya hue mehmaan badall dalaa,

                      sambhala safina unkaa toofaan mein nakhuda ne,
                      pahunch kar saahil pe armaan badall dalaa,

                      rahe insaaf pasand wo ta'umr bechain...!
                      lagaa khud pe ilzaam to farmaan badall dalaa..!



safina= ship

nakhuda = sailor, mallah, navik

mizaan= taraazu, balance

                 

Mind blowing Creation .. Ak Ak Sher mein Chupa Dard or Jazbaat bakubi byaan hue hai.. ak ak sher bahoot Umda likha hai.. bahoot Bahoot Khoob !!!
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«Reply #14 on: April 11, 2011, 01:47:27 PM »
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bht bht khoob adil ji...
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