|| Fikr.....Priya... ||

by manzil-e-ishq on February 23, 2011, 04:22:27 AM
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Aagaz se pahle hi anzaam ki fikr
karte hai log kyu yun din-raat ki fikr...
 
dhalti hai shaam jab bhi to khawab ki fikr
hoti hai subaho jab to halat ki fikr....
 
Marne kaha deti hai ghar baar ki fikr....
jeene nahi deti hai jajbat ki fikr...
 
har umr pe chayi hai banke nasha fikr....
kahe kare hai 'Manzil' tu fikr ki fikr...
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2011, 06:11:59 AM »
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ab aapki peshkash ko parhta hun--
aapki fikr ke kya kahne--
bhot khub hai aapka topic aur andaaz bhi achha hai janaab.
'l
marne kahan deti hai jazbaat ki fikr
jeene kahan deti hai Mehtaab ki fikr
'l
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fikr ki fikr kaahe kare tu 'Manzil'----
na ho fikr to fir na pale dil me 'Armaan ' koi  !!!!
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don mind
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2011, 06:19:39 AM »
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Hmm.priya………….
Bahot hi gehara aur umda Applause Applause Applause Applause likha he dear…..har line me maja aaya……….
Kisi ek line ya para ko behtar kahna mere liye to mumkin nahi he……..
Keep it up dear……..ese hi likhti raho……….

Few lines from myside

Kis par kare fakr khuda jane
Kis ki karu fikr khuda jane

Hume to bas ishq hi sujta he
Kyu har baar ye hi jikr khdua jane
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2011, 01:54:22 PM »
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thanx nirala ji....

Quote from: nirala on February 23, 2011, 06:11:59 AM
ab aapki peshkash ko parhta hun--
aapki fikr ke kya kahne--
bhot khub hai aapka topic aur andaaz bhi achha hai janaab.
'l
marne kahan deti hai jazbaat ki fikr
jeene kahan deti hai Mehtaab ki fikr
'l
""
fikr ki fikr kaahe kare tu 'Manzil'----
na ho fikr to fir na pale dil me 'Armaan ' koi  !!!!
"
don mind
"
thanx
"
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2011, 01:55:44 PM »
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thanx alot mg....
aapka reply to hamesha ki hi tarah bht mast hai...

Quote from: Matrix Guy on February 23, 2011, 06:19:39 AM
Hmm.priya………….
Bahot hi gehara aur umda Applause Applause Applause Applause likha he dear…..har line me maja aaya……….
Kisi ek line ya para ko behtar kahna mere liye to mumkin nahi he……..
Keep it up dear……..ese hi likhti raho……….

Few lines from myside

Kis par kare fakr khuda jane
Kis ki karu fikr khuda jane

Hume to bas ishq hi sujta he
Kyu har baar ye hi jikr khdua jane
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«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2011, 03:12:03 PM »
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Bahut khoob priya ji...
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«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2011, 06:58:26 PM »
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Bahut Khub Priya Ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 23, 2011, 07:15:06 PM »
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Mast khayaal priyaji...........  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Likha aapne achha kalaam
Ab taali bajaane ki fikra.....

Response mai likhu kuchh mein bhi
Kya likhu ess Ba'ath ki fikra......

Ruthin hai meri priyatama
Issei manaane ki fikra......


Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on February 23, 2011, 04:22:27 AM

Aagaz se pahle hi anzaam ki fikr
karte hai log kyu yun din-raat ki fikr...
 
dhalti hai shaam jab bhi to khawab ki fikr
hoti hai subaho jab to halat ki fikr....
 
Marne kaha deti hai ghar baar ki fikr....
jeene nahi deti hai jajbat ki fikr...
 
har umr pe chayi hai banke nasha fikr....
kahe kare hai 'Manzil' tu fikr ki fikr...
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2011, 02:43:40 PM »
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thanx alot geet ji....

Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 23, 2011, 03:12:03 PM
Bahut khoob priya ji...
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2011, 02:44:10 PM »
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shukria rishi ji.....

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 23, 2011, 06:58:26 PM
Bahut Khub Priya Ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2011, 02:46:14 PM »
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ohhhhoo.... badi gahri hai aapki fikr to anaam ji....
chalo jaldi solve kar lena....
& thanx for liking my effort....

Quote from: ANAAM on February 23, 2011, 07:15:06 PM
Mast khayaal priyaji...........  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Likha aapne achha kalaam
Ab taali bajaane ki fikra.....

Response mai likhu kuchh mein bhi
Kya likhu ess Ba'ath ki fikra......

Ruthin hai meri priyatama
Issei manaane ki fikra......
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«Reply #11 on: February 24, 2011, 02:47:03 PM »
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shukria shihab ji.....
khush rahiye....

Quote from: Shihab on February 24, 2011, 03:16:49 AM
Kahe Kare Hai Manzil Tu Fikr Ki Fikr
Wah Ji Wah Kya Baat Hai Bahut Khub Manzil e Ishq Ji...

Humsha Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~
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«Reply #12 on: February 24, 2011, 02:48:16 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on February 23, 2011, 04:22:27 AM
Aagaz se pahle hi anzaam ki fikr
karte hai log kyu yun din-raat ki fikr...
 
dhalti hai shaam jab bhi to khawab ki fikr
hoti hai subaho jab to halat ki fikr....
 
Marne kaha deti hai ghar baar ki fikr....
jeene nahi deti hai jajbat ki fikr...
 
har umr pe chayi hai banke nasha fikr....
kahe kare hai 'Manzil' tu fikr ki fikr...


Waah Waah Waah!!!!

bahut Bahut Khoob Priya Ji...Lajawab Likha Hai Aape

Aapko bahut kam Padha Hai, Aage Zaroor aapki kalaamo ko padhta rahunga..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: February 24, 2011, 02:55:46 PM »
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nazar-e-inaayat ka shukria khwaish ji......
expecting more comments frm ur side nw.... Winking

Quote from: khwaish on February 24, 2011, 02:48:16 PM
Waah Waah Waah!!!!

bahut Bahut Khoob Priya Ji...Lajawab Likha Hai Aape

Aapko bahut kam Padha Hai, Aage Zaroor aapki kalaamo ko padhta rahunga..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: February 25, 2011, 10:44:58 AM »
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wah kamaal karte ho aap bhi Manzil ji--
itni saari Fikr !!!
khoob likha aapne Daad dil se.
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kya milegi 'Haan' iss baat ki fikr
ya fir hogi 'naa' iski bhi fikr
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khus rahiye
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