Fir Milunga.......

by jaindost on May 20, 2009, 06:50:03 AM
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Main chalta hu dost,
tumhe main fir milunga.
Ek arsa hua maa ki god mein soye,
jara sa so lu, tumhe main fir milunga.
Umar beet gayi papa ki ungli thamme,
jara sa sang unke ghoom lu,
tumhe main fir milunga.
Wo rasta taakk rahi hai mera,
usse gale ek pal laga lu,
tumhe main fir milunga.
Jara thak sa geya hu bhai,
sula diya jamane ne chitta par,
jara agni tum dikha do,
Tumhe main fir milunga,
fir milunga agle janam mein........
'JAIN' Tumhe main jarur milunga..........
-JAIN DOST
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2009, 06:52:58 AM »
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Quote from: jaindost on May 20, 2009, 06:50:03 AM
Main chalta hu dost,
tumhe main fir milunga.
Ek arsa hua maa ki god mein soye,
jara sa so lu, tumhe main fir milunga.
Umar beet gayi papa ki ungli thamme,
jara sa sang unke ghoom lu,
tumhe main fir milunga.
Wo rasta taakk rahi hai mera,
usse gale ek pal laga lu,
tumhe main fir milunga.
Jara thak sa geya hu bhai,
sula diya jamane ne chitta par,
jara agni tum dikha do,
Tumhe main fir milunga,
fir milunga agle janam mein........
'JAIN' Tumhe main jarur milunga..........
-JAIN DOST

GUD GUD..
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2009, 07:01:40 AM »
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jian ji bahut khoob yeo hi likhte rahow..

Quote from: jaindost on May 20, 2009, 06:50:03 AM
Main chalta hu dost,
tumhe main fir milunga.
Ek arsa hua maa ki god mein soye,
jara sa so lu, tumhe main fir milunga.
Umar beet gayi papa ki ungli thamme,
jara sa sang unke ghoom lu,
tumhe main fir milunga.
Wo rasta taakk rahi hai mera,
usse gale ek pal laga lu,
tumhe main fir milunga.
Jara thak sa geya hu bhai,
sula diya jamane ne chitta par,
jara agni tum dikha do,
Tumhe main fir milunga,
fir milunga agle janam mein........
'JAIN' Tumhe main jarur milunga..........
-JAIN DOST
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2009, 08:28:11 AM »
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Wah Jain tumhara yeh style bohat bohat khoob hain ise kayem rakhna......I just love the way you connect the whole story.
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2009, 09:16:02 AM »
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Bahaut acha likha hai Jain Jee... Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2009, 09:52:09 AM »
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shukriya friends
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2009, 10:07:49 AM »
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Jaindost,

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Abhi abhi aapki kuch poems padhi... behad pasand aayi !

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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2009, 10:08:54 AM »
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Quote from: jaindost on May 20, 2009, 06:50:03 AM
Main chalta hu dost,
tumhe main fir milunga.
Ek arsa hua maa ki god mein soye,
jara sa so lu, tumhe main fir milunga.
Umar beet gayi papa ki ungli thamme,
jara sa sang unke ghoom lu,
tumhe main fir milunga.
Wo rasta taakk rahi hai mera,
usse gale ek pal laga lu,
tumhe main fir milunga.
Jara thak sa geya hu bhai,
sula diya jamane ne chitta par,
jara agni tum dikha do,
Tumhe main fir milunga,
fir milunga agle janam mein........
'JAIN' Tumhe main jarur milunga..........
-JAIN DOST

 Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Jain Dost Ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2009, 10:16:28 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
Wonderful creation and Welcome to Yoindia.
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«Reply #9 on: July 06, 2009, 07:50:01 AM »
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GOOD COMPOSITION JAINDOST JI Applause Applause
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thank u all........ tahe dil se shukriya.......
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bahut badiya jainji.... khub........
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«Reply #12 on: March 31, 2011, 02:51:58 AM »
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shukriya janab!!!!!!!! Usual Smile
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