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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2012, 06:50:30 AM » |
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bahut hee laajwaab pesh kash dheron daad aur ek rau qubool kare
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2012, 07:04:18 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2012, 07:25:01 AM » |
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bahut hee laajwaab pesh kash dheron daad aur ek rau qubool kare
Shukraguzaar hoon Saini Bhai! |
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2012, 07:28:42 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2012, 07:53:50 AM » |
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Aapne to aaj gaanv ki yaad dil di bhai quateel........ bahut khub yaar...
Seher ke aage bebas pade hain gaanv
Wahan chalti un hawaon ki.
mushkhurate chali gayi
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2012, 10:37:18 AM » |
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Waah bhai Quateel saheb . Jawaab naheen . Eik pal ke liye us khubsurat mahaul mein le gaye jis ko taraste taraste abb bhool chuke hain . Bahut bahut shukriyaa . 'Aandhi mein bagh rakhai ...' waah kitni yaadein taaza ho gayeen . phir se hukriya .
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«Reply #7 on: May 10, 2012, 06:44:03 PM » |
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Aapne to aaj gaanv ki yaad dil di bhai quateel........ bahut khub yaar...
Seher ke aage bebas pade hain gaanv
Wahan chalti un hawaon ki.
mushkhurate chali gayi
Bahot Shukriya Pramod ji! |
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«Reply #8 on: May 10, 2012, 06:46:22 PM » |
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2012, 06:48:55 PM » |
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Waah bhai Quateel saheb . Jawaab naheen . Eik pal ke liye us khubsurat mahaul mein le gaye jis ko taraste taraste abb bhool chuke hain . Bahut bahut shukriyaa . 'Aandhi mein bagh rakhai ...' waah kitni yaadein taaza ho gayeen . phir se hukriya .
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2012, 06:52:07 PM » |
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Bahot bahot shukriya Shebaji!
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«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2012, 02:12:12 PM » |
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bahut achhe quateel ji, maja aa gaya bachpan ko yaad karke,ek ek line jaise yadon ki parat kholti gayee bahut bahut badhai aur shukriya humse share karne ke liye
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2012, 03:30:32 PM » |
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bahut achhe quateel ji, maja aa gaya bachpan ko yaad karke,ek ek line jaise yadon ki parat kholti gayee bahut bahut badhai aur shukriya humse share karne ke liye
ghansham das ahuja
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