gahne....................A.B

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                          naa    chhheeno mujhe, mujh  mein  rahne  do tum...,
                          baat apne  andaaz  mein  mujhe   kahne  do   tum...,

                          faaydaa kuch nahin  aansuo.n  ko  pochhne  kaa  ...,
                          dard    kuch  dair  aankho.n  se  bahne  do  tum...,

                          apni  mohabbat se nazaakat naa laao aulaad  mein...,
                          banaao faulaad, ise takleef zaraa sahne  do  tum...,

                          ashiyanaa shaandaar per ghar naa ban sakaa kabhi...,
                          naa  roko  iski  deewaaro.n  ko  dhhahne  do tum...,

                          gar nikhaar naa chaaho  apne  wajood  ko  kabhi ...,
                          ise jazbaa-o-ehsaas-e-insaani ke gahne   do  tum...,
                          
                          karoo.n   khatm  baat  iss   iltejaa  ke  saath  ...,
                          baat  'matle' ki phir  bechain  ko  kahne do tum...,

                          
                          
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2015, 06:38:08 PM »
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waah kyaa baat hai Bechain Sahib waah, dheroooooooonN daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad.
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2015, 07:03:10 PM »
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Adil ji Namaskaar,

sabse pehle to aap meraa RAU sweekar kijiye, aap jaise shreshtha lekhakon kaa likhaa padhke bahut kuch seekhne ko miltaa hai, kuch alag hi baat hoti hai aap ki kavitaaon mein, bheed se bilkul alag, aur bilkul taazaa, mazaa aa jaataa hai padh ke, ek baar padhte hain, do baar padhte hain, baar baar padhte hain, aur jitnaa padho mazaa badhtaa hi jaataa hai, yunhi apni kavitaayein yahaan post karte rahiye jisse hum aapkaa likhaa padh ke aanand le sakein...bahut bahut shukriyaa Adil ji, itni khoobsoorat rachnaa humse share karne ke liye, is rachnaa ki jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai........

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                          naa    chhheeno mujhe, mujh  mein  rahne  do tum...,
                          baat apne  andaaz  mein  mujhe   kahne  do   tum...,


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ji bilkul, aap apne andaaz mein hi kahiye, humein aapkaa andaaz hi bahut pyaaraa lagtaa hai, kyaa kehne...



                          faaydaa kuch nahin  aansuo.n  ko  pochhne  kaa  ...,
                          dard    kuch  dair  aankho.n  se  bahne  do  tum...,


Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
haan yeh baat bhi khoob kahi aapne, dard jitnaa bahegaa utnaa hi kam hogaa, kyun roknaa inhe behne se, kab tak seene par paththar rakhkar baithe rahenge...


                          apni  mohabbat se nazaakat naa laao aulaad  mein...,
                          banaao faulaad, ise takleef zaraa sahne  do  tum...,

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aajkal ke bachche laad pyaar se barbaad hoke reh jaate hain, aur maa baap ise pyaar samajhte hain, yeh nahi dekhte ki bachchaa bigad rahaa hai..


                          ashiyanaa shaandaar per ghar naa ban sakaa kabhi...,
                          naa  roko  iski  deewaaro.n  ko  dhhahne  do tum...,


Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kyaa faidaa aise deewaaron kaa bhalaa....


                          gar nikhaar naa chaaho  apne  wajood  ko  kabhi ...,
                          ise jazbaa-o-ehsaas-e-insaani ke gahne   do  tum...,

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laakh take ki baat kahi hai aapne, magar log samjhein tab naa....

                         
                          karoo.n   khatm  baat  iss   iltejaa  ke  saath  ...,
                          baat  'matle' ki phir  bechain  ko  kahne do tum...,


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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Adil ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, mazaa a gayaa padhke....
                         
                         
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2015, 07:45:35 PM »
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                          naa    chhheeno mujhe, mujh  mein  rahne  do tum...,
                          baat apne  andaaz  mein  mujhe   kahne  do   tum...,

                          faaydaa kuch nahin  aansuo.n  ko  pochhne  kaa  ...,
                          dard    kuch  dair  aankho.n  se  bahne  do  tum...,

                          apni  mohabbat se nazaakat naa laao aulaad  mein...,
                          banaao faulaad, ise takleef zaraa sahne  do  tum...,

                          ashiyanaa shaandaar per ghar naa ban sakaa kabhi...,
                          naa  roko  iski  deewaaro.n  ko  dhhahne  do tum...,

                          gar nikhaar naa chaaho  apne  wajood  ko  kabhi ...,
                          ise jazbaa-o-ehsaas-e-insaani ke gahne   do  tum...,
                          
                          karoo.n   khatm  baat  iss   iltejaa  ke  saath  ...,
                          baat  'matle' ki phir  bechain  ko  kahne do tum...,

                          
                          



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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2015, 03:42:25 PM »
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