Gale Laga Lega Dushman--(Riyaz)

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Dosto ek arsey ke baad aapki khidmat mein ek nai ghazal pesh kar raha hun. Ummeed hai pasand aayegi.
GHAZAL
Mujhe saath har dam tera chahiye
Tu mil jaaye to aur kya chahiye
Paresha.n hain sab shahr ke shor se
Muhabbat bhari ek sada chahiye
Gale se laga lega dushman tujhe
Magar tujh mein aisi ada chahiye
Fasadon ko bhadkana mushkil nahi
Unhen to bas ek mud-da-aa chahiye
Wo har ek buraai se muh mod lein
Jinhen bhi khuda ki raza chahiye

Riyaz Ashna
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2010, 12:41:44 PM »
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Dosto ek arsey ke baad aapi khidmat mein ek nai ghazal pesh kar raha hun. Ummeed hai pasand aayegi.
GHAZAL
Mujhe saath har dam tera chahiye
Tu mil jaaye to aur kya chahiye
Paresha.n hain sab shahr ke shor se
Muhabbat bhari ek sada chahiye
Gale se laga lega dushman tujhe
Magar tujh mein aisi ada chahiye
Fasadon ko bhadkana mushkil nahi
Unhen to bas ek mud-da-aa chahiye
Wo har ek buraai se muh mod lein
Jinhen bhi khuda ki raza chahiye

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Waah Waah Waah....

Bahut bahut Khoob Riyaz Bhai..

"Gale Se Laga Lega Dushman Tujhe
Magar Tujh mein Aisi Ada Chahiye"..

Bahut Ache  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2010, 01:13:31 PM »
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Khwaish ji aapka bahot saara shukriya. Aap hausla afazaai karte hain, bahot achha lagata hai. Khush rahiye.
Quote from: khwaish on June 01, 2010, 12:41:44 PM
Waah Waah Waah....

Bahut bahut Khoob Riyaz Bhai..

"Gale Se Laga Lega Dushman Tujhe
Magar Tujh mein Aisi Ada Chahiye"..

Bahut Ache  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2010, 01:16:28 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2010, 01:26:16 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI        RIYAZ106 JI......

MUJHE SAATH TERA CHAHIYE
TUJHE SAATH MERA CHAHIYE
MAT KAR YAKEEN BEKAR KI BAATON PAR
HUM DONO KO EK DUJE KA AITHBAR CHAHIYE
GALE LAGA LEGA DUSHMAN BHI
MOHABBAT BARI NIGHA CHAHIYE....
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2010, 02:01:02 PM »
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BOhat Achche Riyaz Bhai,.
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2010, 02:05:23 PM »
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buhat khoob.. !! achha laga parh kar..
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2010, 03:03:49 PM »
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wah riyaz saheb , bade dib baad apki koi taqleeq padne ka itefaq howa apke kya kahene saheb hamesha hi lajwab kahete ho ,, dad hazir hai apki is umda ghazal pe qubool karen .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..



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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2010, 06:48:36 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Riyaz ji...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 01, 2010, 07:39:07 PM »
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"Gale se laga lega dushman tujhe,
Mager tujh main aisi ada chahiye..."

Bahaut khoob...Behad khubsoorat... Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 01, 2010, 07:53:47 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on June 01, 2010, 12:26:09 PM
Dosto ek arsey ke baad aapki khidmat mein ek nai ghazal pesh kar raha hun. Ummeed hai pasand aayegi.
GHAZAL
Mujhe saath har dam tera chahiye
Tu mil jaaye to aur kya chahiye
Paresha.n hain sab shahr ke shor se
Muhabbat bhari ek sada chahiye
Gale se laga lega dushman tujhe
Magar tujh mein aisi ada chahiye
Fasadon ko bhadkana mushkil nahi
Unhen to bas ek mud-da-aa chahiye
Wo har ek buraai se muh mod lein
Jinhen bhi khuda ki raza chahiye

Riyaz Ashna

Waah!! Riyaz sahab, kya kahney. Hazaron daad pesh karta hun kabool farmayen...  aapke duvaon aur ghazal ke inspiration ne majboor kar diya hai ki kuchh pesh karun.. Khar matla arz kar deta hun aapki khidmat mein..

Ishq had tod nasihat pe utar Aata hai,
Husn ka saath fazihat sa nazar Aata hai !!
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«Reply #11 on: June 01, 2010, 08:09:51 PM »
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Wah wah Riyaz bhai,bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne.great lines by Pandey ji.mindblowing creation.excellent Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 01, 2010, 09:59:44 PM »
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bahot din baad nazar aae ho riyaz bhai ,behetreen paiskash ,3rd and 5th shair bahot hi umda hai,hamari janib se daad khobol karein,5th shair masha Allah bahut hi khoob kaha hai.
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«Reply #13 on: June 02, 2010, 04:11:51 AM »
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   Waah Riyaz ji bahut achha likha hai aapne.Bahut maza aaya padh k. Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: June 02, 2010, 05:22:21 AM »
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Clapping ke liye bahut shukriya Adil sahab.
Quote from: adil bechain on June 01, 2010, 01:16:28 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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