Gam na kar --haalaat waqt se hain badlne lage .........bansi

by BANSI DHAMEJA on October 23, 2012, 01:27:33 PM
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Hasan ji ne kuchh likha hai
Jinko   unglee   pakad   kar    chalaaya   'Hasan' ,
Haath ,  abb   woh  ,  hamaara   jhatakne   lagay

Main kuchh likhne ki koshish kar raha hoon. Arz hai
 
Jinko unglee pakar kar chalaya kabhi
Aaj haath hain hamara jhatkne lage

Dil hi dil men socha na tha kabhi
Jo aaj ham apni ankhon se dekhne lage

Wo barhe ho gaye hain job bache they kabhi
Ab Auron ka haath khud thamne lage

Gam na karo is ka kabhi
Haalaat jo hain waqt se badalne lage

Khushi se ‘bansi’ Khuda se dua mango unke liye  
Jo aaj hain itne barhe dikhne lage

Jinko unglee pakar kar chalaya kabhi
Aaj haath hain hamara jhatkne lage
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«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2012, 02:59:43 PM »
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bahut khoob bansiji
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«Reply #2 on: October 23, 2012, 03:08:36 PM »
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bansi ji nahut sahi farmaya aapne.
bahut khoob
likhte rahiye.

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«Reply #3 on: October 23, 2012, 03:15:44 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on October 23, 2012, 02:59:43 PM
bahut khoob bansiji
aqsh ji bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2012, 03:16:37 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 23, 2012, 03:08:36 PM
bansi ji nahut sahi farmaya aapne.
bahut khoob
likhte rahiye.

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
suresh ji bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2012, 05:06:37 PM »
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Madhur ji v v nice.....
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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2012, 05:23:19 PM »
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Quote from: gaytri gupta on October 23, 2012, 05:06:37 PM
Madhur ji v v nice.....
gaytri ji bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2012, 07:07:04 AM »
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bansi ji achha izafa kiya hai aapne
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2012, 08:18:41 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on October 24, 2012, 07:07:04 AM
bansi ji achha izafa kiya hai aapne
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sahal ji bahut bahut shukriay
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«Reply #9 on: October 24, 2012, 09:09:04 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: October 24, 2012, 09:38:02 AM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on October 24, 2012, 09:09:04 AM
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anmol ji bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: October 25, 2012, 01:36:29 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #12 on: October 25, 2012, 03:59:38 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on October 25, 2012, 01:36:29 AM
very nice
nandbandhu ji bahut bahut shukriya
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