~Gareeb bahaut hai~ by Rahim

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Masoom bache kay fehle hue haath;tadpate bahaut hai,
Bhooki beti ki dukhi maa kay ashk; rulate bahaut hai…

Phate purane kapde pehne kadi dhoop main bhatakna,
Lacharon ki iss duniya main misalein bahaut hai…

Khoon se saje nange paoun liye phirte hai har roz,
Lahu bahate duniya main aise masoom bahaut hai…

Phenk dete hai ek dinn purana khanna yeh amir,
Yahan toh ek gareeb ko roti miljana bahaut hai…

Na kiya kar shikayat itni kay tujhe na mili mohobat,
Mohobat kay ilava; ‘Khamosh’ aur bhi ghum bahaut hai…

‘Khamosh’ kehta hai ek haath se lo toh dusre se dena bhi seekho,
Par afsos hota hai kay yahan toh dehej lene wale gareeb bahaut hai…

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2010, 03:12:33 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI     RAHIM JI.....

DUNIYA MEIN SHAYAD ISILIYE GAREEB BAHUT HAI
KYUN KI AMEERON KE DIL CHOTE BAHUT HAI
AMIR SIRF LENA JAANTE HAI DENA NAHIN
GAREEBON KO JO AMIR MADAT KAREN
DUNIYA MEIN GAREEB DIKHE NAHIN...
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2010, 06:57:27 PM »
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Shukriya Cara jee..
Acha likha hai apne bhi..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2010, 09:11:08 PM »
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Shukriya Shihab bhaijan..
Apka comment dekh wakei dil bahaut khush hua..
Ap bhi sada khush rahein..
Ameen,!
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2010, 02:15:02 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut bahut khoob Rahim bhai... bahut achcha likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2010, 10:31:32 AM »
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its to to too good rahim ji... Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2010, 11:03:57 AM »
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Shukriya Kapil Dost aur Thinkhattk jee..!
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2010, 01:26:01 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on August 07, 2010, 01:51:47 PM
Masoom bache kay fehle hue haath;tadpate bahaut hai,
Bhooki beti ki dukhi maa kay ashk; rulate bahaut hai…

Phate purane kapde pehne kadi dhoop main bhatakna,
Lacharon ki iss duniya main misalein bahaut hai…

Khoon se saje nange paoun liye phirte hai har roz,
Lahu bahate duniya main aise masoom bahaut hai…

Phenk dete hai ek dinn purana khanna yeh amir,
Yahan toh ek gareeb ko roti miljana bahaut hai…

Na kiya kar shikayat itni kay tujhe na mili mohobat,
Mohobat kay ilava; ‘Khamosh’ aur bhi ghum bahaut hai…

‘Khamosh’ kehta hai ek haath se lo toh dusre se dena bhi seekho,
Par afsos hota hai kay yahan toh dehej lene wale gareeb bahaut hai…

~Rahim~

Very Impressive......very nice creation.....yunhi likhte rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2010, 02:18:59 PM »
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Shukriya Naresh jee...
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2010, 06:30:04 AM »
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Bahot khoob, bahot achhi creation hai Abdul Rahim Bhai ye aapki, jo kuch sochne par majboor karti hai. Ek purkashish creation par daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #10 on: August 09, 2010, 06:37:39 AM »
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Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!!

Har lafz Sach ka Aaena Sa Hai,Aapne badi gehri baatein Ki hai iss Peshkash mein..

Bahut Ache Mere Bhai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: August 09, 2010, 11:59:40 AM »
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Shukriya Riyaz jee aur Khwaish Dost..
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2010, 01:15:08 PM »
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BAHUT KHUB YAAR WAH HILLA DIYA.....
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«Reply #13 on: August 17, 2010, 07:00:51 PM »
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Shukriya Dil G Shah.,!
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«Reply #14 on: August 17, 2010, 07:14:44 PM »
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Bhai aapki yeh kalaam kal hi padhi thi humne...
Kuch kahne ke liye lafz hi nahi the...

Aur aaj bhi lafz nahi hai...
Bus itna hi kahenge.... Is jazbe ko thnada na hone deN..
Aise khayaaloN ko likhate rahiye...
Shayad aapke aise kalaam padhker kisi meiN yeh jazbaa aa jaye..
Jo muflisi aur lachari se junjh rahe hai unke liye madat ka
haath bada deN....

Likhate rahiye.....
Dua go.......
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