Gauhar-E-Ghazal Ki Gardoon Gawaah Hoga...........Touhid

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Mere Pyare Yoindia Ke Dosto.. Mera Salaam Kubool Kare... Usual Smile
Apne Ish Peshkash Ke Sath Ish Baar Maine Kuchh Naya Karne Ki Kosis Ki Hai..

English Alphabets Ko Lekar Urdu Ke Shuru Hone Wale Lafzo Ko Milakar Har Ek Sher Likhne Ki Kosis Ki Hai..

Ummid Karta Hoon Aap Logo Ko Mera Ye Alag Kiya Hua Kaam Pasand Aaye..

Kahin Galti Ho To Jarur Bataye.. Aur Pasand Aaye To Bhi Jarur Bataye..

Shukriya.. Usual Smile



Anjaam-E-Aab-O-Gil Aamezish Hoga.,
Baad-E-Sabaa Barkat Bakhshish Hoga..


Chehal-Qadmee Se Chehra Chiraagh Sa Hoga.,
Darakht Ki Duaa Dard-E-Baagh Sa Hoga..


Ehsaan-O-Ehtaram Ka Ehsaas Ek Bar Hoga.,
Faaselah Fanaa Ho To Faraagh Fakhr Hoga..


Gauhar-E-Ghazal Ki Gardoon Gawaah Hoga.,
Hamnasheen Ye Haq Tere Hawaalah Hoga..


Ikhtiyar-E-Ishq Ka Ilm-E-Ittefaaq Hoga.,
Jalwa-E-Jaan Ka Jazbaat-E-Jabal  Jawaab Hoga..


Kaatib Ke Kaf-E-Naazuk Ko Kasak Hoga.,
Lab-O-Lahjah Me Laagoo Ke Lachak Hoga..


Maah-Laqaa Mera Mohabbat Me Maahir Hoga.,
Nadir-E-Rozgaar Naghmah Naasir Hoga..


Oas Ko Odhe Oak Me Oojala Hoga.,
Pehloo Me Panaah Pane Wala Pehla Hoga..


Qamar Ke Qalb Me Qaadir Qaafiyaah Hoga.,
Rooh Tak Raahat-E-Jaan Rishtiyaah Hoga..


Sahn-E-Chaman Me Sanzeedah Saaz-Gaar Hoga.,
‘TOUHID’ Tab Teri Tabassum Ka Talab-Gaar Hoga..


Ubaal Uski Udaasi Ka Ujaagar Hoga.,
Waaqifiyat Wafaa Se Wa’azar Hoga..


Yaqeenan Yahan “YOINDIA” Yaktaa Hoga.,
Zindagi Zeenat-E-Zardaar Zebaa Hoga..



Anjaam=End, Aab-o-gil=Elements of universe, Aamezish=Mixture.
Baad-e-sabaa=Morning breeze, Barkat=Izaafa, Bakhshish=Gift.
Faraagh=Pleasure, Fakhr=Pride
Gauhar=Pearl, Gardoon=Heaven,
Jabal=Mountain.
Kaatib=Writer, Kaf-e-nazuk=Palm of beloved,
Laagoo=beloved or friend
Maah-laqaa=Beloved,
Naadir-e-rozgaar=Unique in the world, Naasir=Helper.
Oak=Cupped Palm
Qamar=Moon,Qalb=Heart,
Wa’azar=Advisor.
Yaktaa=Unique only one
Zardaar=Rich, Zebaa=Graceful.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya... Usual Smile Usual Smile



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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2013, 02:58:45 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Combination Kiya Hai Aapne,Nice.
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2013, 03:13:14 PM »
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nice attempt!
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2013, 08:56:15 PM »
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nice composition touhidji. kaafi mehnat ki hai aapne. muhje achchi lagi aapki heh kalaam. hazaron dili daad qubool kare.
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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2013, 11:11:48 PM »
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Bahut khoob, halaNki apne behad typical alfaaz iste'maal kiye haiN jiski wajah se kaafi dushwaari hui samajhne meiN, lekin phir bhi bahut pasand aaya aapka ye kalaam. Kaafi achha likha hai,bahut khoob mubarak ho.
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wwwaaahhhh !!!! kya kehne Touhid ji !!!! ghazab ka tajurba kiya apne !!!  aur bade fan ke saath nibhaayaa bhi ... iske peechhe kitni mehnat lagi hogi ye andaazaa lagaya hi ja sakta hai ... bahaut anokha qalaam pesh kiya ... aphko dheron daad aur mubaarkbaad is tajurbe ko anjaam dene ke liye

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Bahut Khoob Combination Kiya Hai Aapne,Nice.
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Bahut bahut shukriya Ravi ji... Usual Smile
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bahut khoob

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nice composition touhidji. kaafi mehnat ki hai aapne. muhje achchi lagi aapki heh kalaam. hazaron dili daad qubool kare.

bahut bahut shukriya aqsh ji.. Usual Smile

waise haan mehnat to bahut lagi par ish mehnat me aapka bhi haath hai.. to iske liye aapka tahe dil se shukriya.. Usual Smile
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on June 06, 2013, 11:11:48 PM
Bahut khoob, halaNki apne behad typical alfaaz iste'maal kiye haiN jiski wajah se kaafi dushwaari hui samajhne meiN, lekin phir bhi bahut pasand aaya aapka ye kalaam. Kaafi achha likha hai,bahut khoob mubarak ho.

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Quote from: zarraa on June 07, 2013, 02:04:58 AM
wwwaaahhhh !!!! kya kehne Touhid ji !!!! ghazab ka tajurba kiya apne !!!  aur bade fan ke saath nibhaayaa bhi ... iske peechhe kitni mehnat lagi hogi ye andaazaa lagaya hi ja sakta hai ... bahaut anokha qalaam pesh kiya ... aphko dheron daad aur mubaarkbaad is tajurbe ko anjaam dene ke liye

PS : ab bas us sher ka intezaar hain jismeiN "V" waale misra-e-oola hai aur "X" waala misra-e-saanee Usual Smile Usual Smile ... just joking Usual Smile

hausla afjayi aur apne pyare comments ke liye aapka bahut bahut aur bahut shukriya Zarra ji... Usual Smile

asal me mai khud samajh nahi paya ke v aur x se koi lafz honge kya par nahi mila to maine unhe chhod diya aur jo hai aap ke samne hai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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