...gaya...

by dead heart on January 15, 2009, 06:14:31 PM
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ek chehra humari zindagi main ujala kar gaya,
unse baat kar pate usse pehle hi woh hume tanha chodd gaya...

zindagi ka toh dastoor hai ke log milne ke bad ansuon ka tofa de jate hai,
humse toh koi rishta banae bina hi hume tabah kar gaya...

nazrein bichae baitha hoon uske intezar main,
ek anjaan chehra shayad phir se hum kisi ka intezar karna seekha gaya...

waise toh woh koi bewaffa nahin humara dildar hi tha,
itefaq toh dekho doston ke woh hume bina ansu diye hi rula gaya...

uski khubsoorati ne mere dafan dil main ek chirag jala diya,
jo chirag deta mujhe roshni usse woh ajnabee hi buja gaya...

uski aankhon ki gherai main doob gaya mera dafan dil,
ek noor sa chehra humare dafan dil ko jeena seekha gaya...
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2009, 06:48:11 PM »
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Wah i lovedddddddddddddddd the second sher the most too good dear may god bless u  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2009, 06:53:49 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on January 15, 2009, 06:14:31 PM
ek chehra humari zindagi main ujala kar gaya,
unse baat kar pate usse pehle hi woh hume tanha chodd gaya...

zindagi ka toh dastoor hai ke log milne ke bad ansuon ka tofa de jate hai,
humse toh koi rishta banae bina hi hume woh tabah kar gaya...

nazrein bichae baitha hoon uske intezar main,
ek anjaan chehra shayad phir se hum kisi ka intezar karna seekha gaya...

waise toh woh koi bewaffa nahin humara dildar hi tha,
itefaq toh dekho doston ke woh hume bina ansu diye hi rula gaya...

uski khubsoorati ne mere dafan dil main ek chirag jala diya,
jo chirag deta mujhe roshni usse woh ajnabee hi buja gaya...

uski aankhon ki gherai main doob gaya mera dafan dil,
ek noor sa chehra humare dafan dil ko jeena seekha gaya...

wah DH wah, kyaaaaa khooobbb, very nice

jasbir singh
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«Reply #3 on: January 15, 2009, 07:07:26 PM »
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thanx guys..neva expected such a response from u guys...i appreciate it...

May God bless u too!!!
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #4 on: January 15, 2009, 07:10:47 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on January 15, 2009, 07:07:26 PM
thanx guys..neva expected such a response from u guys...i appreciate it...

May God bless u too!!!

OH KI HOYA DH, why you so sounded so pessimist and why such a sarcastic remark ? humsey koi galti ho gayi hai kya dost ?
You have written such a wonderful poem yaar.


jasbir singh
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«Reply #5 on: January 15, 2009, 07:15:32 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 15, 2009, 07:10:47 PM
OH KI HOYA DH, why you so sounded so pessimist and why such a sarcastic remark ? humsey koi galti ho gayi hai kya dost ?
You have written such a wonderful poem yaar.


jasbir singh


no man...i neva thot u guys wuld like it that much...u cnt do sumthn rong wen ur praising me man...u guys r true frendz....atleast there is sumone who cn appreciate me...a dead heart!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: January 15, 2009, 07:28:01 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on January 15, 2009, 07:15:32 PM

no man...i neva thot u guys wuld like it that much...u cnt do sumthn rong wen ur praising me man...u guys r true frendz....atleast there is sumone who cn appreciate me...a dead heart!!!!


hey comeon yaar .... You dont have a dead heart ... u have such a soft and caring heart ... and infact, if u trust me, we all over here are in the same boat as you but when we are here, we tend to forget our sorrows and try to bring some solace and smile to our face ... kuch toh gum halta hota hai naa mere dost ........ aap sab ki mehfil hai hi itni pyari...


jasbir singh
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«Reply #7 on: January 15, 2009, 07:34:03 PM »
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Nice one Deadheart Ji
Bahut hi achchi peshkash hai
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«Reply #8 on: January 16, 2009, 02:11:36 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on January 15, 2009, 06:14:31 PM
ek chehra humari zindagi main ujala kar gaya,
unse baat kar pate usse pehle hi woh hume tanha chodd gaya...

zindagi ka toh dastoor hai ke log milne ke bad ansuon ka tofa de jate hai,
humse toh koi rishta banae bina hi hume tabah kar gaya...

nazrein bichae baitha hoon uske intezar main,
ek anjaan chehra shayad phir se hum kisi ka intezar karna seekha gaya...

waise toh woh koi bewaffa nahin humara dildar hi tha,
itefaq toh dekho doston ke woh hume bina ansu diye hi rula gaya...

uski khubsoorati ne mere dafan dil main ek chirag jala diya,
jo chirag deta mujhe roshni usse woh ajnabee hi buja gaya...

uski aankhon ki gherai main doob gaya mera dafan dil,
ek noor sa chehra humare dafan dil ko jeena seekha gaya...
GREAT POEM, MAZA AAH GYA.ASGHR
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«Reply #9 on: January 16, 2009, 07:50:56 PM »
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thnx everyone...i appreciate it...

ohh Jasbir jee...i know we all are in a same boat and i surely smile everytime i visit this site coz their r great writers here...GOD BLESS EVERYONE AND MAY EVERYONE KEEP SHARING THEIR PAIN!!!!
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