Gayi Jawani Bavari

by Roja on April 05, 2009, 05:27:40 PM
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Gayi jawani bavari akhiyan bahaye neer
Ab chahe ser munda le chahe sog manate fir..

Sukh-dukh ki dhoop chav mein julsi jawani teri
Tujhko akela chod gayi phoolsi Rani teri
Bhook se mer gaya Ranja Pyas se mer gayi Heer
Ab chahe ser munda le chahe sog manate fir..

Kamaanse nikla bhaan kabhi vapis nahi aaya hai
Maut ka mehma.n Insaan kabhi vapis nahi aaya hai
Aas ka mara jeevan hai vinash ka hai shareer
Ab chahe ser munda le chahe sog manate fir..

Chand ki raatein alsayi hai sooraj ke hai din thake
Aaj jagat pe chaa rahe hai kaal ke saye bin thake
"Roja" ro rahi aalam jaise fhoot gayi taqdeer
Ab chahe ser munda le chahe sog manate fir..

Gayi jawani bhavari akhiyan bahaye neer..
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2009, 11:25:49 AM »
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A very nice creation indeed  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2009, 08:07:39 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah, ek alag he roop main.... ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai Roja... aor yah line to dil main attak gai...
Aas ka mara jeevan hai vinash ka hai shareer   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2009, 03:24:44 PM »
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Bahut khob Roja ji

AAp ne bahut achcha likha hai

Teer aur baan ke maani aik hi hai .
Teer ki jagah kamaan ker lain

tx


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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2009, 02:43:18 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 07, 2009, 11:25:49 AM
A very nice creation indeed  icon_thumleft

Thanks dear Celmira  Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2009, 02:44:29 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 09, 2009, 08:07:39 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah, ek alag he roop main.... ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai Roja... aor yah line to dil main attak gai...
Aas ka mara jeevan hai vinash ka hai shareer   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob!!


Thank you very much Pooja di..
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«Reply #6 on: April 13, 2009, 02:49:20 AM »
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Quote from: javedarshad on April 11, 2009, 03:24:44 PM
Bahut khob Roja ji

AAp ne bahut achcha likha hai

Teer aur baan ke maani aik hi hai .
Teer ki jagah kamaan ker lain

tx
javed

Thanks Javed ji.. Yeh Line pe Kamaan Karu Likha..

Teer Se Nikla Bhaan Kabhi Vapis Nahi Aaya Hai

(Kamaan Se Nikla Bhaan Kabhi Vapis Nahi Aaya Hai.... Aisa kya?

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«Reply #7 on: April 13, 2009, 08:16:27 AM »
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Bahut khoob Roja Ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 13, 2009, 01:29:34 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: April 13, 2009, 01:54:14 PM »
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Good One, Roja Sis,.
Nice Creation Yaar,.

Waise Bawri Deewaani Ko Kehte Hain Na,.
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«Reply #10 on: April 26, 2009, 04:44:20 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 13, 2009, 08:16:27 AM
Bahut khoob Roja Ji

Thanks Rajesh Harish Ji
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«Reply #11 on: April 26, 2009, 04:47:22 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 13, 2009, 01:54:14 PM
Good One, Roja Sis,.
Nice Creation Yaar,.

Waise Bawri Deewaani Ko Kehte Hain Na,.

Shukriya Azeem brother
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«Reply #12 on: April 28, 2009, 02:26:43 PM »
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Achchha laga Roja Ji, mubarak ho, sunder rachna hai
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«Reply #13 on: May 17, 2009, 05:23:29 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 28, 2009, 02:26:43 PM
Achchha laga Roja Ji, mubarak ho, sunder rachna hai
SARVESH RASTOGI

Shukriya Sarvesh Rastogi ji..  Usual Smile
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