GEELI MITTI (vikk):Miscellaneous Shayri

Vikk

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Marudhara ka raahi main,
mrigtrishna ummeed jagati hai,
neer ka kahi koi nishan nahi,
par kahi se geeli mitti ki khushboo aati hai.

Ambar ko dekho to meghon ka nishan nahi,
bas dehakte suraj ki jalan chubhti hai,
nain dhul se dhundhla chuke,
par kahi se geeli mitti ki khushboo aati hai.

Chatra ka kahi koi nishan nahi,
pedon ke naam par thuhar ki kaliyan milti hain,
dehakti ret me jal raha hu,
par kahi se geeli mitti ki khushboo aati hai.

Ret ke bavandar me bhi bad raha,
in toofano me vo khushboo tez ho jati hai,
ye garm hawa ke thapede tadpate hain,
par ye hi to apne sang geeli mitti ki khushboo laate hain.


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madhuwesh

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Re: GEELI MITTI (vikk)

«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2009, 09:05:49 AM »

Wah Vikk ji bahut acha likhte ho,lagta hai paheli baar aapka kavita padi.
second verse mujhe bahut pasand aayee,lovely creation,excellent icon_thumleft


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Vikk

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Re: GEELI MITTI (vikk)

«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2009, 09:46:09 AM »

thank u madhu ji...par main pehle bhi kuch posts kar chuka hu...plz acknowledge


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: GEELI MITTI (vikk)

«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2009, 11:13:29 AM »

Quote from: Vikk on October 01, 2009, 09:00:31 AM

Bahut khub vikky ji nice creation beautiful execllent jitni tarif ki jaye wo bhi kam h ji Applause


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Vikk

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Re: GEELI MITTI (vikk)

«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2009, 12:38:39 PM »

rishi ji


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deepika_divya

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Re: GEELI MITTI (vikk)

«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2009, 12:46:11 PM »

Bahoot bahoot Khoob Vikk.. Bahoot hi Khoob Likha hai.. Good Work Dear keep writing.....


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Vikk

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Re: GEELI MITTI (vikk)

«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2009, 12:49:18 PM »

very much sophi


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