ghalti----------------MARHOOM BAHAYAAT

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                       gar meri shakhsiyat ka khud pe asar rakhta!
                       phir  to  wo mujh  jaisi  hi  nazar rakhta!

                       unn na jalti jhopdiyaa.n ghareeb ki aag mein!
                       jo  aane  waale  uss tufaan ki khabar rakhta!

                       khadsha  girne  ka  zameen pe na rahta kabhi!
                       karke  aashnaa jo khaaksaari se basar rakhta!

                       nahin hoti zarurat khidkiyo.n ko band karne ki!
                       gar   imaabdaari   se wo   apna  ghar  rakhta!

                    laout aata waapas shaam dhale 'MARHOOM' ghonsle pe!
                       qaayde se jo apne parwaaz ka safar rakhta!


                      
                      
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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2013, 07:49:16 PM »
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waah ,.........bohat c daad,..........
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2013, 08:08:50 PM »
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Bahut khoob MMB jee
Maqta khoob kaha aapne.
mubarakbaad
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2013, 09:22:41 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob ek rau bhee
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2013, 10:02:21 PM »
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bahut khoob M B ji .mubarakbad.
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«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2013, 10:47:03 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: April 13, 2013, 11:48:25 PM »
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Waaaaaaah. behad umda kalaam hai. mujhe bahut pasand aayi. har ek sher khoob hai. bahut bahut mubarak ho.



















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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2013, 12:51:05 AM »
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gar meri shakhsiyat ka khud pe asar rakhta!
phir  to  wo mujh  jaisi  hi  nazar rakhta!                       
unn na jalti jhopdiyaa.n ghareeb ki aag mein!                       
jo  aane  waale  uss tufaan ki khabar rakhta!                       
khadsha  girne  ka  zameen pe na rahta kabhi!                       
karke  aashnaa jo khaaksaari se basar rakhta!                       
nahin hoti zarurat khidkiyo.n ko band karne ki!                       
gar   imaabdaari   se wo   apna  ghar  rakhta!                     
laout aata waapas shaam dhale 'MARHOOM' ghonsle pe!                       
qaayde se jo apne parwaaz ka safar rakhta! 

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Wah,Wah,Wah,Bahut hi bahtreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen ghazal kahi hai aapne.Mubarak ho Mehroomji.             
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2013, 01:21:06 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2013, 02:25:38 AM »
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M B Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob.. bade hi umdaa aur khoobsurat ashaar kahe haiN aapne..
Matle se lakar maqte tak sabhi ashaar kafi gehre aur khoob rahe..

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2013, 09:58:06 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2013, 09:59:48 AM »
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                       gar meri shakhsiyat ka khud pe asar rakhta!
                       phir  to  wo mujh  jaisi  hi  nazar rakhta!

                       unn na jalti jhopdiyaa.n ghareeb ki aag mein!
                       jo  aane  waale  uss tufaan ki khabar rakhta!

                       khadsha  girne  ka  zameen pe na rahta kabhi!
                       karke  aashnaa jo khaaksaari se basar rakhta!

                       nahin hoti zarurat khidkiyo.n ko band karne ki!
                       gar   imaabdaari   se wo   apna  ghar  rakhta!

                    laout aata waapas shaam dhale 'MARHOOM' ghonsle pe!
                       qaayde se jo apne parwaaz ka safar rakhta!


                       
                     


Naam hi waahyaat hai baaki sab khoob hai sahab
Bahut acha likha hai 
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«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2013, 07:41:48 PM »
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                       gar meri shakhsiyat ka khud pe asar rakhta!
                       phir  to  wo mujh  jaisi  hi  nazar rakhta!

                       unn na jalti jhopdiyaa.n ghareeb ki aag mein!
                       jo  aane  waale  uss tufaan ki khabar rakhta!

                       khadsha  girne  ka  zameen pe na rahta kabhi!
                       karke  aashnaa jo khaaksaari se basar rakhta!

                       nahin hoti zarurat khidkiyo.n ko band karne ki!
                       gar   imaabdaari   se wo   apna  ghar  rakhta!

                    laout aata waapas shaam dhale 'MARHOOM' ghonsle pe!
                       qaayde se jo apne parwaaz ka safar rakhta!


                       
                       


Bahut Bahut Khoob M.b Ji..

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«Reply #13 on: April 17, 2013, 06:01:58 PM »
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waah ,.........bohat c daad,..........

thank you,ma'am
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«Reply #14 on: April 17, 2013, 06:05:55 PM »
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marhoom saaheb bade lambe arse ke baad padh raha hun aapko, aur yakeen maaniye bada mazaa aaya, khaas taur pe matla mujhe behad pasand aaya, bas aage v aap yuNhi likhte rahiye aur bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
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