Ghamsaar aur bhi hoNge naa

by ParwaaZ on January 21, 2011, 07:07:00 PM
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Ladkhadate kadmoN ko ab jamaa ke dekhte haiN
Paimaana kisi aur ki taraf badhaa ke dekhte haiN

DekheN nasha sharaab meiN hai ke uski baat meiN
Kuch din hum bhi khudko aazmaa ke dekhte haiN

Be bher hi sahiN abke hume kahna hi hai Ghazal
Chubhate lafz gale meiN phir bhi Gaa ke dekhte haiN

KoyiN bhi nahi aayeNga ab apni mazaar par
Tanhaai ki hi sahiN mehfil sajaa ke dekhte haiN

Ghamsaar aur bhi hoNge naa "ParwaaZ" jahaaN meiN
DhueN meiN gham O dard ko udaa ke dekhte haiN

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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2011, 07:10:54 PM »
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Ladkhadate kadmoN ko ab jamaa ke dekhte haiN
Paimaana kisi aur ki taraf badhaa ke dekhte haiN

DekheN nasha sharaab meiN hai ke uski baat meiN
Kuch din hum bhi khudko aazmaa ke dekhte haiN

Be bher hi sahiN abke hume kahna hi hai Ghazal
Chubhate lafz gale meiN phir bhi Gaa ke dekhte haiN

KoyiN bhi nahi aayeNga ab apni mazaar par
Tanhaai ki hi sahiN mehfil sajaa ke dekhte haiN

Ghamsaar aur bhi hoNge naa "ParwaaZ" jahaaN meiN
DhueN meiN gham O dard ko udaa ke dekhte haiN



acchi ghazal hai parwaaz ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2011, 07:25:59 PM »
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acchi ghazal hai parwaaz ji

Aadaab BechaiN sahaab!

Nawaazish karam janab... Kalaam ko pasand farmane ke
Liye bahut bahut shukriyaa...

Bechain to hum hai... sad5

Kahte hai mohobbat meiN judaai bhi zaruri hai
Jana nahi chahte par door jaa ke dekhte haiN
         

Aate rahiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...
         
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2011, 07:51:07 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Dil ki hasrat ko ab saja k dekhte hain
Kisiki kahi baat pe yakeen kar lete hain

Dhuan aur nashe me beeti jiski zindagi
Use aaj hum apni aagosh me lete hain

Ladkhada rahe the jo kadam nashe me
Unhe apne haathon me thaam lete hain

Bahot umeed jagi hai aaj unki baaton se
Iss umeed pe jaan kurbaan kar lete hain

Na darna na ghabrana ee mere yaar tum
Harpal duaon me hum naam tera lete hain….!!!
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2011, 08:07:11 PM »
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mehfile tanhai ho aur haaatho me jaam ho
dil chahta hai dard se bhari ek shaam ho
har shakhs mehfil me tanha ho
meri khwahish hai ek aisa lamha ho
jaha bas kissa-e-bewafaai ho har lab pe
har shakhs apna dukhda aakhiri baar gaye
pyar ka nasha bhari pad jaye band botlo pe
bas shaam aakhiri ho wo zindagi ki
yahi zindagi ka anjaam ho
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2011, 09:05:24 PM »
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Bahut Khub Parwaz Ji Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Aapne
U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye

Nice Reply Kasak Ji


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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2011, 01:25:22 AM »
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Bahut achha likhte hain aap Parwaz ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

and very apt reply KASAK ji......... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2011, 03:36:43 AM »
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Parwaaz ji--
aap bahut kam likhte hain --
jab likhte hain to kya khub likhte hain. bahut hi gahri aur ehsaas se bhra kalaam aapka.
ummed hai aage bhi aise hi likhte rahenge aap.
khus rahiye
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chalo kuch aur aazma ke dekhte
      mohabbat me zahm sabhi paaye---
hum zakhmon se dil laga kar dekhte hain
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2011, 04:35:14 AM »
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wah ParWaaZ ji.... bhut khub kalam hai aapka....

chubhte lafz gale mai fir bhi gaa ke dekhte hain.

kya baat hai waise saabhi sher kamal hain
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2011, 05:20:41 AM »
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wah Parwaaz wah.
janaab dil baag hua padhkar
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2011, 07:08:00 AM »
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   Waah bahut khoob Parwaaz ji , bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai. icon_thumleft
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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2011, 04:10:38 PM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Aapke jawaaboN ko koi jawaab nahi hai jee...
Aap YO india ke sabse behtreen member hai jinke jawaab ka
waqai aap ka koi jawaab nahi..... Usual Smile

Aapke is khubsurat reply ke liye tahe dil se shukriyaa jee..

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Allah Hafez .... Usual Smile           


Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 21, 2011, 07:51:07 PM
icon_flower happy3 icon_flower love4 icon_flower happy3 icon_flower
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Dil ki hasrat ko ab saja k dekhte hain
Kisiki kahi baat pe yakeen kar lete hain

Dhuan aur nashe me beeti jiski zindagi
Use aaj hum apni aagosh me lete hain

Ladkhada rahe the jo kadam nashe me
Unhe apne haathon me thaam lete hain

Bahot umeed jagi hai aaj unki baaton se
Iss umeed pe jaan kurbaan kar lete hain

Na darna na ghabrana ee mere yaar tum
Harpal duaon me hum naam tera lete hain….!!!
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2011, 04:59:08 PM »
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Aadaab BechaiN sahaab!

Nawaazish karam janab... Kalaam ko pasand farmane ke
Liye bahut bahut shukriyaa...

Bechain to hum hai... sad5

Kahte hai mohobbat meiN judaai bhi zaruri hai
Jana nahi chahte par door jaa ke dekhte haiN
         

Aate rahiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...
         



MEHFIL BHI HAI SAAZ BHI HAI AWAAZ BHI HAI BECHAIN,
CHALO AAJ PARWAAZ KE TARANE KO GUNGUNA KE DEKHTE HAIN..!
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2011, 05:57:00 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 21, 2011, 07:07:00 PM
Ladkhadate kadmoN ko ab jamaa ke dekhte haiN
Paimaana kisi aur ki taraf badhaa ke dekhte haiN

DekheN nasha sharaab meiN hai ke uski baat meiN
Kuch din hum bhi khudko aazmaa ke dekhte haiN

Be bher hi sahiN abke hume kahna hi hai Ghazal
Chubhate lafz gale meiN phir bhi Gaa ke dekhte haiN

KoyiN bhi nahi aayeNga ab apni mazaar par
Tanhaai ki hi sahiN mehfil sajaa ke dekhte haiN

Ghamsaar aur bhi hoNge naa "ParwaaZ" jahaaN meiN
DhueN meiN gham O dard ko udaa ke dekhte haiN



Ji ... nice one ..... dilee daad !
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«Reply #14 on: January 22, 2011, 06:26:46 PM »
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bahoot khoob ParWaaZ ji.behtreen peshkash hai aapki daad kabool karen.

@Apriya ji aapki likhi panktiyan bhi achchi lagi sahab,

@KDK ji, jaisa ki parwaaz ji ne kaha aapka jawab nahi..
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