Ghamsaar aur bhi hoNge naa

by ParwaaZ on January 21, 2011, 07:07:00 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 04, 2011, 06:14:38 PM »
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Sameer Ji ! Aadaab !!

bahut khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne ... sabhi ashaar umdaa soch ke saath likhte hai ... matlaa aur maqtaa mujhe khaas taur bahut pasand aaye ... iss khoobsurat ghazal par tahe dil se humari daad ... qubuul farmaayeN ... Applause Applause Applause khush rahen ... !

aate rahen aur likhe rahen aage bhi .. !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #16 on: February 04, 2011, 07:43:46 PM »
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«Reply #17 on: February 18, 2011, 07:42:00 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 21, 2011, 07:07:00 PM
Ladkhadate kadmoN ko ab jamaa ke dekhte haiN
Paimaana kisi aur ki taraf badhaa ke dekhte haiN

DekheN nasha sharaab meiN hai ke uski baat meiN
Kuch din hum bhi khudko aazmaa ke dekhte haiN

Be bher hi sahiN abke hume kahna hi hai Ghazal
Chubhate lafz gale meiN phir bhi Gaa ke dekhte haiN

KoyiN bhi nahi aayeNga ab apni mazaar par
Tanhaai ki hi sahiN mehfil sajaa ke dekhte haiN

Ghamsaar aur bhi hoNge naa "ParwaaZ" jahaaN meiN
DhueN meiN gham O dard ko udaa ke dekhte haiN

Sameer Ji ... Aadaab !

Masti ke aalam me bahut asardaar ashaar likhe hai aapne ... fikR ki
gehraai ne ghazal ki uunchaai kaafi badhaa di hai ... bahut khoobsurat peshkash rahi janaab ... dil se daad qubuul farmaayeN humaari bhi ... khush rahen ... yunhi likhte rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #18 on: February 18, 2011, 07:58:19 PM »
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Nice One Parwaaz Sahab
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«Reply #19 on: June 14, 2011, 03:44:25 PM »
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Sundar Ghazal

Bahut acchi likhi hai..... hello hello
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«Reply #20 on: June 20, 2011, 12:24:38 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 21, 2011, 07:07:00 PM
Ladkhadate kadmoN ko ab jamaa ke dekhte haiN
Paimaana kisi aur ki taraf badhaa ke dekhte haiN

DekheN nasha sharaab meiN hai ke uski baat meiN
Kuch din hum bhi khudko aazmaa ke dekhte haiN

Be bher hi sahiN abke hume kahna hi hai Ghazal
Chubhate lafz gale meiN phir bhi Gaa ke dekhte haiN

KoyiN bhi nahi aayeNga ab apni mazaar par
Tanhaai ki hi sahiN mehfil sajaa ke dekhte haiN

Ghamsaar aur bhi hoNge naa "ParwaaZ" jahaaN meiN
DhueN meiN gham O dard ko udaa ke dekhte haiN



bahut khoob parwaaz sahab
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«Reply #21 on: June 28, 2011, 05:44:59 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 21, 2011, 07:07:00 PM
Ladkhadate kadmoN ko ab jamaa ke dekhte haiN
Paimaana kisi aur ki taraf badhaa ke dekhte haiN

DekheN nasha sharaab meiN hai ke uski baat meiN
Kuch din hum bhi khudko aazmaa ke dekhte haiN

Be bher hi sahiN abke hume kahna hi hai Ghazal
Chubhate lafz gale meiN phir bhi Gaa ke dekhte haiN

KoyiN bhi nahi aayeNga ab apni mazaar par
Tanhaai ki hi sahiN mehfil sajaa ke dekhte haiN

Ghamsaar aur bhi hoNge naa "ParwaaZ" jahaaN meiN
DhueN meiN gham O dard ko udaa ke dekhte haiN



bahut khoob
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«Reply #22 on: August 11, 2011, 06:10:23 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 21, 2011, 07:07:00 PM
Ladkhadate kadmoN ko ab jamaa ke dekhte haiN
Paimaana kisi aur ki taraf badhaa ke dekhte haiN

DekheN nasha sharaab meiN hai ke uski baat meiN
Kuch din hum bhi khudko aazmaa ke dekhte haiN

Be bher hi sahiN abke hume kahna hi hai Ghazal
Chubhate lafz gale meiN phir bhi Gaa ke dekhte haiN

KoyiN bhi nahi aayeNga ab apni mazaar par
Tanhaai ki hi sahiN mehfil sajaa ke dekhte haiN

Ghamsaar aur bhi hoNge naa "ParwaaZ" jahaaN meiN
DhueN meiN gham O dard ko udaa ke dekhte haiN



Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Aapke Kya Kehne parwaaz Ji...Vaqai Lajawab Likhte hai aap

Har ek A'shaar ek se badhkar ek..

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«Reply #23 on: August 11, 2011, 06:43:58 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 21, 2011, 07:07:00 PM
Ladkhadate kadmoN ko ab jamaa ke dekhte haiN
Paimaana kisi aur ki taraf badhaa ke dekhte haiN

DekheN nasha sharaab meiN hai ke uski baat meiN
Kuch din hum bhi khudko aazmaa ke dekhte haiN

Be bher hi sahiN abke hume kahna hi hai Ghazal
Chubhate lafz gale meiN phir bhi Gaa ke dekhte haiN

KoyiN bhi nahi aayeNga ab apni mazaar par
Tanhaai ki hi sahiN mehfil sajaa ke dekhte haiN

Ghamsaar aur bhi hoNge naa "ParwaaZ" jahaaN meiN
DhueN meiN gham O dard ko udaa ke dekhte haiN


Parwaz bhai naam ki tarah aap ki parvaz be baut bulund hai
Khuda aap ko khush rakhe.Asghar
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