ghar apne parindon ne banaye hain ,,,,,,,,,,sunil

by sunildehgawani on October 21, 2011, 10:24:55 AM
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                 hadien haiwaniyat ki paar karta gaya hai aadmi
                                      isse kab kisi ke khilte hue gulshan suhaye hain
                 apne pet ki kahtir unhein bhi kaat daala hai
                                      jin dalion pe ghar apne parindon ne banaye hain  
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2011, 12:40:23 PM »
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                 hadien haiwaniyat ki paar karta gaya hai aadmi
                                      isse kab kisi ke khilte hue gulshan suhaye hain
                 apne pet ki kahtir unhein bhi kaat daala hai
                                      jin dalion pe ghar apne parindon ne banaye hain 
bahot ache janaab--
likhte rahen
khus rahen
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2011, 01:48:28 PM »
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                 hadien haiwaniyat ki paar karta gaya hai aadmi
                                      isse kab kisi ke khilte hue gulshan suhaye hain
                 apne pet ki kahtir unhein bhi kaat daala hai
                                      jin dalion pe ghar apne parindon ne banaye hain 

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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2011, 06:33:24 PM »
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Bahut khoob Sunil Jee...

Kafi achcha likha hai daad... Usual Smile

YouN toH hadh se hum guzar gaye lekin
Unke zabt e mayaar tak pahuNch paye nahi   
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2011, 07:13:15 PM »
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Kya baat hai Sunil bhai...mast likha hai..!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2011, 04:53:33 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on October 21, 2011, 12:40:23 PM
bahot ache janaab--
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tnkhs sarfira ji
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Quote from: usha rajesh on October 21, 2011, 01:48:28 PM
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dhanawad usha ji ,,,yuhi sath dete rahiye
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«Reply #7 on: October 23, 2011, 04:55:38 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 21, 2011, 06:33:24 PM
Bahut khoob Sunil Jee...

Kafi achcha likha hai daad... Usual Smile

YouN toH hadh se hum guzar gaye lekin
Unke zabt e mayaar tak pahuNch paye nahi   

kyaa khub likha hai sarfira ahahab ..aapka shukriyaa.
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«Reply #8 on: October 23, 2011, 04:56:53 AM »
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Quote from: Gyan Prakash on October 21, 2011, 07:13:15 PM
Kya baat hai Sunil bhai...mast likha hai..!!
thnks gyan praksh ji ,,,,aaap bhi to bahut achha likhte ho,,aap ki taraf dekha jaye to hum kuchh nahi hai  ,,,
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