Ghar ka rasta bhool gai thee (by vb)

by vb on October 11, 2010, 02:40:51 PM
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Ik nanhi maasoom si larki
Ghar ka rastaa bhool gai thee
Jaanay kitna ghar ko dhoonda
Baal pareshaan, aankh bhari thee
Ghar ka peechha kartay kartay
Ik jungle main aa nikli thee
Ik nanhi...

Ake puraanay pair k neechay
Us ne kuch bisraam kiya thaa
Shaakhon ki uljhi baanhon main
Kuch lamhay aaraam kiya tha
Itna khailee pair k neechay
Saans he us ki phool gai thee
Ghar ka rastaa bhool gai thee
Ik nanhi...

Apnay baalon say pin lay kar
Pair k boorhay say seenay par
Apnay nanhay say haathon say
Us ne apna naam likha thaa
Jhoom rahi hain aaj bhe shaakhen
Jin par jhoola jhool gai thee
Ghar ka rasta bhool gai thee
Ik nanhi...

Jaanay kab wo uth kar chal dee
Puhnchi ghar? kya wo zinda hay?
Kitnay saavan, kitnay bhaadon
Pair ka har pattaa roya hay
Garche bahaaron ne zakhmon ko
Halka halka bhar saa diya hay
Lakin aaj bhe pair k ooper
Us larki ka naam likha hay

Ik nanhi maasoom si larki
Ghar ka rastaa bhool gai thee
Ik nanhi...

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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2010, 07:08:37 AM »
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Ek alag andaaz ek nayaa jaadu aur dil ko lubhaa lene ki ek aur khoobsurat si nayi koshish... dil se daad Vb ji... bahut bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki....!!!

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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2010, 07:18:57 AM »
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bahut badhiya vb jii.. mst likha he apne~...jaisa kapil ji ne kaha bahut alag kism ka likha he par hriday sparshi likha he ...dil se daaad dheeer saaari~
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2010, 08:59:01 AM »
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bhut hi badhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaa vb jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii


tarif ke liye shabd nahi hai

reply de raha hu bataiye ga kaisa hai


bhul gayi thi jo apne ghar ko
aaj lout ke aai dar ko
kabhi maan ke gale lipat.ti
kabhi chume bhai ke sar ko

aaj din hua bada nirala
sabko khushiyan dene wala
kahin giry jo aansu aankhon se
wo bhi the khushi ke dar ko

kabhi na jaon akele ghar se
kahti hai wo larki darr se
bada bhayanak tha wo lamha
jab bhatki thi mai dar dar ko


hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm likhne ki icha khatam

ab baki ka aap log hi jod len

agar pasand na aaye to dnt mind

aap ka raahiiiii
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«Reply #4 on: October 13, 2010, 10:39:57 AM »
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Buhat shukriya ~Hriday~ jee aap ka...
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«Reply #5 on: October 13, 2010, 10:40:55 AM »
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AbhiTamrakar jee buhat shukriya...
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«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2010, 10:42:05 AM »
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Rahi2001 jee! buhat shukriya...

achi poetry hay... pasand aaeee hamen..
thanx again...
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«Reply #7 on: October 15, 2010, 02:54:03 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat andaaz mein gila kiya gaya hay is kavita mein, words mein shudhta (purity) nazar aati hay, bahut khoob...
isay parh ke larki pe kuch gila karnay ka mann hua...

bahut zaalim see taasir uski
pairh pe usko taras na aaya?
kaash yehi ho uskay bhi sang,
saath na kabhi uska saaya...
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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2010, 10:47:48 AM »
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buhat shukriya aap ka.. saans jee.. k parha aap ne and comments chhoray.. aap ne jo sher chhoray... buhat achhay hain.. likha kejay.. achha laga hamen parh kar.

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Aye saans jee! Dekho jo bhe ho
Us larki ki na baat karo

Wo kya jaanay k pairon k
Bhi dil main armaan hotay hain
Ye pair bhe saavan, bhaadon main
Ku itna chham chham rotay hain

Gar khel usay kuch soojha tha
Tu is main us ka doshe nahi
Wo ik nanhi si larki thee
Us ko tu apna hoshe nahi

Ik pair ka nanhi larki say
Kya mel bhala ho sakta hay?
Ye pair bhe vb k jaisaa
Paagal hay rota rehta hay

Ilzaam do tu us pair ko do
Us larki ko tu kuch na kaho

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«Reply #9 on: December 06, 2010, 01:43:29 AM »
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Hi Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: December 13, 2010, 04:38:32 AM »
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good long work hahahaha.

nice one vb ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 02, 2011, 07:48:48 PM »
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missing VB ji ki poems.........
kahan gayab ho gaye aap vb ji.........
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«Reply #13 on: January 02, 2011, 07:56:15 PM »
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Bahut khoob vb Ji
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