**Ghareeb ki zindagi**:Miscellaneous Shayri

dead heart

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Doston...ek ghareeb ki dastaan ya dard sunana chahta hoon...Iss rachna main ek ghareeb baap ki awaaz bhi dalne ki koshish ki hai maine...Main ko pata nahin ke main kahan tak kamyab ho paya hoon...Iss poem ki kabilyat se zada jazbaaton ko dhyan main rakhiyega padte waqt..Main isse complete nahin kar paya kyun ki ro pada likte likte...Toh jo koi bhi chahe isse complete kar sakta hai...

Ek aur personal request aur sandesh dena chahunga unn logon ke liye jinke maa baap itne amir nahin hai...Please please apne maa baap ko paison ki nakamyabi par tokiyega mat...galti se bhi nahin aur gusse main bhi nahin...aap toh keh jaenge par unn par kya bitegi yeh soch bhi nahin sakte aap...Main yahan yoindia par kayi logon se chota hoon toh yeh mat samajiyega ke Rahim bada ban ne ki koshish kar raha hai..main toh bas ek sandesh ponchana chah raha hoon...

Mujh jaise ghareeb ki zindagi bhi ajeeb hoti hai...

Mujh jaise ghareeb ki zindagi bhi ajeeb hoti hai,
Kabhi iske haath toh kabhi uske haath main jhulti hai,
Thokre khata rehta hoon do waqt ki roti ke liye,
Mujh jaise ghareeb ki zindagi bhi ajeeb hoti hai...

Paison ki khoj main har hadd se guzar jata hoon,
Khud bhale roun par apne parivar ko hasata hoon,
Bas kuch yehi alam rehgaya hai meri zindagi ka doston,
Mujh jaise ghareeb ki zindagi bhi ajeeb hoti hai...

Jab kabhi bhi mere bachon ke rote chehre nazar ate hai,
Sach kahoon toh hum bhi andar hi andar toot jate hai,
Kisse acha lagta hai pyaare masoom bachon ko udaas dekhna,
Mujh jaise ghareeb ki zindagi bhi ajeeb hoti hai...

Jab kabhi bhi apne bachon ke liye saste khilone lata hoon,
Unka bigda hua chehra dekh ke bas roo padta hoon,
Kaise bataun main unhe apni majburian doston,
Mujh jaise ghareeb ki zindagi bhi ajeeb hoti hai...
***Rahim***


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k.shael

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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2009, 07:42:04 AM »

Bahut Khoob Bahut Bhadiya, daad dene ki chah hai!! garib ke baare me soch kar khud ki halat nazar andaaj nahi kar paati mein..kuch likhne ki gustakhi kar rahi ho,

Aaj phir se jhagda hua maa-bouji ke beech me,
Aaj phir se kisi ne subah se ann ka ek dana na khaya,

Bhookh to bardasht karte lekin jhagdo ne rulaya,
Aaj ek jidd, ek jarurat ne phir se sabko bhookhe pet sulaya,

Kyun ye garibi sirf mukaddar me mere hai khuda,
Kya banate waqt taqdeer meri tujhe taras na aaya,

Har cheez ki chah thi,lekin khud ko samjhaya,
Sirf ek cheez nahi, kayii baar khud ke mann ko tarsaya,

Tamam dukh jhele, ro li aankhein bhi bahut baar,
Jaane kyun aab talak ye garibi ka manhoos saya na hatt paya.

Shally.


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dead heart

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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2009, 10:04:01 AM »

Shukriya Shally jee padne ke liye...Aapne bhi bahaut bahaut bahaut acha likha hai...


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poppoetry

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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2009, 12:20:46 PM »

Kya kahu aapse Rahim ji.....bahut sacha aaina dikhaya h aapne....bahut acha sandesh diya h hum sabko..... Applause

ek baat baar baar dil me aa rahi h...mata-pita
chahe khud kitni bhi garibi me jee le apne bache ko kabhi us garibi ka aehsaas nahi hone dete...wo khud apne shauk pure na kare lekin apne bache ka har shauk pura karte h.


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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2009, 12:23:02 PM »

Quote from: k.shael on June 20, 2009, 07:42:04 AM

Bahut Khoob Bahut Bhadiya, daad dene ki chah hai!! garib ke baare me soch kar khud ki halat nazar andaaj nahi kar paati mein..kuch likhne ki gustakhi kar rahi ho,

bahut ache shally ji....khoob darshaya h aapne garib insaan ka dard
Applause


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k.shael

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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2009, 12:24:38 PM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on June 20, 2009, 10:04:01 AM

Shukriya Shally jee padne ke liye...Aapne bhi bahaut bahaut bahaut acha likha hai...

Shukriya Raheem Ji..

Shally.


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k.shael

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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2009, 12:25:31 PM »

Quote from: poppoetry on June 20, 2009, 12:23:02 PM

bahut ache shally ji....khoob darshaya h aapne garib insaan ka dard
Applause

Shukriya Pooja ji, ye garib insaan jiska dard likha hai wo shayad mein hi hoon..


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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2009, 12:32:49 PM »

Quote from: k.shael on June 20, 2009, 12:25:31 PM

Shukriya Pooja ji, ye garib insaan jiska dard likha hai wo shayad mein hi hoon..

aise mat kahiye dear shally ji...aapke paas to hum sab k pyar ka khjana h....jo hmesha aapke pass rhega


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dead heart

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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2009, 12:56:00 PM »

Shukriya Pooja jee..


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dead heart

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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2009, 01:00:03 PM »

Quote from: k.shael on June 20, 2009, 12:25:31 PM

Shukriya Pooja ji, ye garib insaan jiska dard likha hai wo shayad mein hi hoon..

Bas yehi kehna chahunga..

Uske lagta hai ke woh paise kama kar amir bangaya hai,
Mujhe lagta hai usne dosti todkar ghareebi hasil karli...

Shally jee doston ke hote hue koi insaan ghareeb nahin toda...Paisa aaj hai kal nahin hoga par dosti paki ho toh woh janmon tak rahegi...Jab tak hum hai aap apne aap ko ghareeb mat samajiye...Arey apke pas dil ko doulat hai,kalam ki takkat hai..Bas iske sahare bhale yahan ghareeb ho par Khuda ke darbaar main amir kehlaoge...God bless you!!!


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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2009, 01:07:00 PM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on June 19, 2009, 10:05:41 PM

maaf kijiye Rahim Bhai
mere paas lafz hi nahin hai aapke is kalaam ke liye
kuch aisa likha hai jise padhkar i am just speechless
i am sorry....
lekin itna kehna chahungi ki yeh ek aisi haqeeqat hai jis se sabhi ko rubaru karaya hai aapne bahut bahut shukriya...
bahut khoob.... Applause


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diya786

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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2009, 01:08:21 PM »

Quote from: k.shael on June 20, 2009, 07:42:04 AM

Bahut Khoob Bahut Bhadiya, daad dene ki chah hai!! garib ke baare me soch kar khud ki halat nazar andaaj nahi kar paati mein..kuch likhne ki gustakhi kar rahi ho,

too good Shally dear
aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai Applause


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dead heart

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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2009, 01:24:25 PM »

Quote from: -Kashish- on June 20, 2009, 01:07:00 PM

Bahaut bahaut shukriya!!Arey di maafi kis baat ki yaar...Apne pada aur tariff ki yehi bahaut hai Rahim ke liye..Aur kehte hai na "lavzon se zada sandesh khamoshi deti hai"...Thanks a lot for reading and commenting..


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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #13 on: June 21, 2009, 07:17:33 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on June 19, 2009, 10:05:41 PM

Rahim Bhaiiiiiiiii..... Kya Kahun aapke Is Qalaam Ke Liye Dost.. Lafz nahi mil rahe hain mujhe Iski Taareef ke Liye.. Har Lafz ek Succhaai kaha raha hai.. aur Jumla ek Sandesh hai aaj ke insaan ke liye.. Lajawab Likha hai Dost.. Applause

LAJAWAB, BEHTREEN, KHUBSOORAT... Clapping Smiley

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: **Ghareeb ki zindagi**

«Reply #14 on: June 21, 2009, 07:19:51 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on June 20, 2009, 07:42:04 AM

Bahut Khoob Bahut Bhadiya, daad dene ki chah hai!! garib ke baare me soch kar khud ki halat nazar andaaj nahi kar paati mein..kuch likhne ki gustakhi kar rahi ho,

Shallyyyyyyyyy dear.. Lajawab Likha hai Dear.. Sucche aur Asardaar Lafz Likhe hain.. jo Sidha Dil Tak Utar gaye.. Har lafz Ek apni Kahani kaha raha hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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