GHAZAALAA MIL GAYAA.........................SAINI

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Ek bhookhe ko niwaalaa mil gayaa.
Nyooj waalaaoN ko masaalaa mil gayaa.

Chaahiye thaa aur kyaa sammaan meN.
Odhne ko ik dushaalaa mil gayaa.

Chaand baithaa thaa jo mere bazm meN.
Aap logoN ko ujaalaa mil gayaa.

Usne mere betee ko thukraa diyaa.
Rishtaa shaayad kaar waalaa mil gayaa.

Yaad dushman ab bahut aane lagaa.
Dost jab se ik rizaalaa mil gayaa.

Mast baithaa bhediyaa ab khaa rahaa.
Ghar meN hee jab se ghazaalaa mil gayaa.

ShaayroN meN dam nazar aane lagaa.
Jab se ‘saini’ kaa hawaalaa mil gayaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


एक भूखे को निवाला मिल गया ।
न्यूज वालों को मसाला मिल गया ॥

चाहिए था और क्या सम्मान में ।
ओढने को इक दुशाला मिल गया ॥

चान्द बैठा था जो मेरी बज़्म में ।
आप लोगों को उजाला मिल गया ॥

उसने बेटी को मेरी ठुकरा दिया ।
रिश्ता शायद कार वाला मिल गया ॥

याद दुश्मन अब बहुत आने लगा ।
दोस्त जब से इक रिज़ाला मिल गया ॥

मस्त बैठा भेड़िया अब खा रहा ।
घर में ही जब से ग़ज़ाला मिल गया ॥

शायरों में दम नज़र आने लगा ।
जब से 'सैनी ' का हवाला मिल गया ॥

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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2013, 05:05:43 PM »
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waah waah sir ji.. behad khoobsurat kalaam.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2013, 05:57:48 PM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2013, 06:09:32 PM »
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Saini Sahaab Aadab!

WaaH waaH janab kia kahne bahut khoob... badi taNziyaa aur tez khayaaloN waali kalaam kahi hai janab...

Behad khoob aur asardaar ashaar rahe... is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2013, 06:27:49 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob sirjee..bahut umda peshkash hai..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2013, 07:16:04 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2013, 07:22:23 PM »
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Bahut badhiya Sir
ShaayroN meN dam nazar aane lagaa.
Jab se ‘saini’ kaa hawaalaa mil gayaa.

उसने बेटी को मेरी ठुकरा दिया ।
रिश्ता शायद कार वाला मिल गया ॥
Bahut Umda Sir
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2013, 07:25:42 PM »
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Sirji ye to ultimate raha ekdam....bahut hi badhiya ghazal hui hai daad aur badhaiii dono sweekar kareN
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2013, 07:28:10 PM »
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Usne mere betee ko thukraa diyaa.
Rishtaa shaayad kaar waalaa mil gayaa.
bahot khooooob Dr. Sahab - is sher pe wo geet yaad aagaya...
Dulha bikta hai bolo khareedoge
Ye wo sansar hai choor bazar hai, dhoka bikta hai bolo khareedoge...
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2013, 09:47:07 PM »
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waah waah sir bahut hi khoob 4th aur maqte ke sher bahut pasand aae. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN.
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2013, 02:21:09 AM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2013, 02:23:33 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2013, 07:33:16 AM »
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Touhid bhai shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: August 17, 2013, 01:08:17 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #14 on: August 17, 2013, 01:18:37 PM »
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Ek aur dhamake daar peshkash saini sir.. achchi lagi aapki yeh tanziya kalaam.. sabhi ashaar khoob hai .. dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaad...
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