ghazal kavita maksad sabka itna hi hai

by @kaash on July 23, 2009, 01:31:56 PM
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kavita ek udgaar hai khud ko vyakt karne ka
apne ehsaason ko jazbe se likh jaane ka

kavita ek maadhyam hai khud se roobaru hone ka
ye ek zariya hai kalpanaon ki shakti pehchanne ka


kavita sirf apne liye hi nahi likhi jati
ek silsila hai ye auron ke ehsaas chhoone ka

kalaam mahaz apne aur doosron par hi nahi likhe jate
tasavvur kalam ka bana har shay pe likhne ka


ghazal kavita geet maksad sabka itna hi hai
insaano me apnapan aur insaniyat badhane ka



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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2009, 01:32:39 PM »
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Bahut sahi kaha aapne @kaash ji. Good work  Applause
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punam
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«Reply #2 on: July 23, 2009, 01:39:55 PM »
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right ..bahut khoob..@kaash ji..
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2009, 03:42:56 PM »
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wah kya baat hai  kaash ji....

GHAZAL KAVITA MAKSAD SABKA ITNA HI HAI...........

KHAAS ANDAAZ SE DIL KI BAAT JUBAAN PAR LAANA,

AAP-BHEETI DUNIYA KO SUNAANA,

KISI BHI SHAY PAR LIKHE KAR,DUNIYA KO BATAANA,

AAJ-KAL KI HAQEEKAT SE RU-BAHRU KARAANA,

GHAZAL KAVITA MAKSAD SABKA ITNA BHI HAI,
DUNIYA KA MANORANJAN BHI KARNA.

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«Reply #4 on: July 23, 2009, 04:10:05 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khob Kaash ji...
nice line cara ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 23, 2009, 04:24:17 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot khoob Kaash ji.. Waakai bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: July 23, 2009, 05:26:37 PM »
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bahut sahi kha aapne Kaash ji...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ghajal kavita zariya hai apni dil ki baat kehne ka....
Kabhi kabhi gajal kavita me hum wo baatein bhi likh dete hai jinhe shayad hum khud se hi kehne se darte hai...ya jinhe hum sunna hi nahi chahte...jin par dhyan nahi dena chahte....bahut khub kha aapne....gajal kavita khud se rubru hone ka madhyam hai.....bahut behtrin Kaash ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2009, 05:28:03 PM »
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wah kya baat hai  kaash ji....

GHAZAL KAVITA MAKSAD SABKA ITNA HI HAI...........

KHAAS ANDAAZ SE DIL KI BAAT JUBAAN PAR LAANA,

AAP-BHEETI DUNIYA KO SUNAANA,

KISI BHI SHAY PAR LIKHE KAR,DUNIYA KO BATAANA,

AAJ-KAL KI HAQEEKAT SE RU-BAHRU KARAANA,

GHAZAL KAVITA MAKSAD SABKA ITNA BHI HAI,
DUNIYA KA MANORANJAN BHI KARNA.


very very nice lines cara ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2009, 05:36:34 PM »
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Yash Bhai.. Lajawab Likha hai dost.. ek ek Lafz such Likha hai.. Bahut Khoob Soch ke sath likha hai.. great work.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2009, 06:19:03 PM »
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Bohot achche ehsasat Kaash Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bohot Khoob !

Nice lines Cara   icon_thumleft
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«Reply #10 on: January 08, 2010, 10:48:49 AM »
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Wah wah Kaash Ji Kavita aur Ghazal ke baare bahut achhi tarah bataya aapne. Dono ka hi maqsad dil ki aur Sammaj ki baat kehna hai.
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