ghazal ki zidd ..sheba

by Sheba on March 14, 2013, 04:01:56 AM
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                                   use zar-o-zamin ki padi hai!
                                   aur saamne maut khhadi hai!!


                                   socho to kuch nahin kaha usne.
                                   per baat uski  bahut   badi  hai!


                                   be-aabru hote dekh ablaa ko.
                                   ye raat  sharm  se  gadi   hai!

                          
                                   nikle rooh jab jism se tere.
                                   samjho ye hijr ki ghadi hai!


                                   tambhi ustaad ki mujh ko.
                                   sabse badi chhadi hai!


                                   kisne jaani mohabbat maa ki.
                                   kaisi phhuhaaron si jhhadi hai!


                                   hote hain surkh rukhsaar aksar.
                                   jab se ye aankh ladi hai.


                                   hai ghazal apne sher pe qaayam!
                                   aur sheba apni baat pe adi hai!
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«Reply #1 on: March 14, 2013, 04:21:20 AM »
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Behtreen Andaz,
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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2013, 04:34:34 AM »
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                                   use zar-o-zamin ki padi hai!
                                   aur saamne maut khhadi hai!!


                                   socho to kuch nahin kaha usne.
                                   baat  per uski  bahut   badi  hai!


                                   be-aabru hote dekh ablaa ko.
                                   ye raat  sharm  se  gadi   hai!

                          
                                   nikle rooh jab jism se tere.
                                   samjho ye hijr ki ghadi hai!


                                   tambhi ustaad ki mujh ko.
                                   sabse badi chhadi hai!


                                   kisne jaani mohabbat maa ki.
                                   phhuhaaron si jhhadi hai!


                                   hote hain surkh rukhsaar aksar.
                                   jab se ye aankh ladi hai.


                                   hai ghazal apne sher pe qaayam!
                                   aur sheba apni baat pe adi hai!
!
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nikle rooh jab jism se tere. samjho ye hijr ki ghadi hai!

kya kahne mohtarmaa....
achy khyaal haiN ...

zara behr pe dhyaan deN ..

kuch aur hi baat hogi phir

" hai ghazal apne sher pe qaayam"

ye misraa bhi jaan leba hai... kyunki tumhara naam sheba hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2013, 09:21:21 AM »
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boht khub sheba ji
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«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2013, 09:37:34 AM »
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                                   use zar-o-zamin ki padi hai!
                                   aur saamne maut khhadi hai!!


                                   socho to kuch nahin kaha usne.
                                   per baat uski  bahut   badi  hai!


                                   be-aabru hote dekh ablaa ko.
                                   ye raat  sharm  se  gadi   hai!

                           
                                   nikle rooh jab jism se tere.
                                   samjho ye hijr ki ghadi hai!


                                   tambhi ustaad ki mujh ko.
                                   sabse badi chhadi hai!


                                   kisne jaani mohabbat maa ki.
                                   kaisi phhuhaaron si jhhadi hai!


                                   hote hain surkh rukhsaar aksar.
                                   jab se ye aankh ladi hai.


                                   hai ghazal apne sher pe qaayam!
                                   aur sheba apni baat pe adi hai!
!
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kya baat hai sheba jee umda bohut umda ghazal kahi hai,


aur khas taur se in ashaar ka to jawab nahi,



be-aabru hote dekh ablaa ko.
ye raat sharm se gadi hai!

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nikle rooh jab jism se tere.
samjho ye hijr ki ghadi hai!

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hai ghazal apne sher pe qaayam!
aur sheba apni baat pe adi hai!!

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DherooN daaad qubool kareN
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«Reply #5 on: March 14, 2013, 11:14:37 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: March 14, 2013, 12:03:22 PM »
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bahut khoob , sheba ji.bahut khubsurat ghazal
kahi hai.sabhi ashaar khoob rahe. mubarakbaad
aur daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #7 on: March 14, 2013, 12:29:12 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaah WAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah buht hi Khoob, Buht hi Umda Ghazal kahi Sheba g apnay har shair buht pyara aur kamal ka hai


Dheeron Daad Qabool Kijeye
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«Reply #8 on: March 14, 2013, 12:41:45 PM »
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bahut sunder sheba ji is ladee men ek rau jod detaa hoon hameshaa khush raho
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«Reply #9 on: March 14, 2013, 02:00:30 PM »
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Wah.Wah.Wah Shebaji,
Such me bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai aapne.Mubarak ho aapko. Ye sher bahut pasand aaye-
nikle rooh jab jism se tere.
samjho ye hijr ki ghadi hai! 
 hai ghazal apne sher pe qaayam!
aur sheba apni baat per adi hai.
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«Reply #10 on: March 14, 2013, 02:37:30 PM »
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Bohat Khub!!!

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«Reply #11 on: March 14, 2013, 02:42:59 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob sheba ji. bahut achcha likha hai aapne. aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho.
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«Reply #12 on: March 14, 2013, 04:44:26 PM »
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वाह वाह .......बहोत उम्दा
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«Reply #14 on: March 14, 2013, 05:41:04 PM »
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kisne jaani mohabbat maa ki.                                    kaisi phhuhaaron si jhhadi hai!


ye panktiyan bachpan yaad dila gayi...
aap aise hi hamare ateet ke jharokhon me hame kuchh rang dikhaate rahen...bahut bahut dhanyavaad!
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