ghazal ki zidd ..sheba

by Sheba on March 14, 2013, 04:01:56 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 14, 2013, 05:44:48 PM »
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«Reply #16 on: March 14, 2013, 07:34:33 PM »
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«Reply #17 on: March 15, 2013, 02:55:22 AM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!



WaaH jee waaH kia kahne aapke ... lagta hai is gazal ki zidd meiN aapne apne
khayaalon ke samandar se kayiN nayaab gohar nikaal liye haiN... Usual Smile

bade hi umdaa khayaaloN ko achche ashaaroN meiN dhalaa hai jee..
waise toH sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe par qouted ashaar waqai lajawaab hai jee..

Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
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Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
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Quote from: Sheba on March 14, 2013, 04:01:56 AM


                                   use zar-o-zamin ki padi hai!
                                   aur saamne maut khhadi hai!!


                                   nikle rooh jab jism se tere.
                                   samjho ye hijr ki ghadi hai!

                                   kisne jaani mohabbat maa ki.
                                   kaisi phhuhaaron si jhhadi hai!


                                   hote hain surkh rukhsaar aksar.
                                   jab se ye aankh ladi hai.
                            
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«Reply #18 on: March 15, 2013, 09:27:03 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on March 14, 2013, 04:01:56 AM


                                   use zar-o-zamin ki padi hai!
                                   aur saamne maut khhadi hai!!


                                   socho to kuch nahin kaha usne.
                                   per baat uski  bahut   badi  hai!


                                   be-aabru hote dekh ablaa ko.
                                   ye raat  sharm  se  gadi   hai!

                           
                                   nikle rooh jab jism se tere.
                                   samjho ye hijr ki ghadi hai!


                                   tambhi ustaad ki mujh ko.
                                   sabse badi chhadi hai!


                                   kisne jaani mohabbat maa ki.
                                   kaisi phhuhaaron si jhhadi hai!


                                   hote hain surkh rukhsaar aksar.
                                   jab se ye aankh ladi hai.


                                   hai ghazal apne sher pe qaayam!
                                   aur sheba apni baat pe adi hai!!
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«Reply #19 on: March 17, 2013, 02:48:46 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on March 14, 2013, 04:21:20 AM
Behtreen Andaz,

shukria...!
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«Reply #20 on: March 17, 2013, 02:51:45 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on March 14, 2013, 04:01:56 AM


                                   use zar-o-zamin ki padi hai!
                                   aur saamne maut khhadi hai!!


                                   socho to kuch nahin kaha usne.
                                   per baat uski  bahut   badi  hai!


                                   be-aabru hote dekh ablaa ko.
                                   ye raat  sharm  se  gadi   hai!

                           
                                   nikle rooh jab jism se tere.
                                   samjho ye hijr ki ghadi hai!


                                   tambhi ustaad ki mujh ko.
                                   sabse badi chhadi hai!


                                   kisne jaani mohabbat maa ki.
                                   kaisi phhuhaaron si jhhadi hai!


                                   hote hain surkh rukhsaar aksar.
                                   jab se ye aankh ladi hai.


                                   hai ghazal apne sher pe qaayam!
                                   aur sheba apni baat pe adi hai!!
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«Reply #21 on: March 18, 2013, 03:17:36 AM »
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Quote from: janumanu on March 14, 2013, 04:34:34 AM
nikle rooh jab jism se tere. samjho ye hijr ki ghadi hai!

kya kahne mohtarmaa....
achy khyaal haiN ...

zara behr pe dhyaan deN ..

kuch aur hi baat hogi phir

" hai ghazal apne sher pe qaayam"

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shukria.......! koshish karoon gi
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«Reply #22 on: March 18, 2013, 04:03:42 AM »
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«Reply #23 on: March 25, 2013, 02:52:34 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on March 14, 2013, 09:21:21 AM
boht khub sheba ji

shukria...!
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«Reply #24 on: March 26, 2013, 03:33:16 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on March 14, 2013, 09:37:34 AM
kya baat hai sheba jee umda bohut umda ghazal kahi hai,


aur khas taur se in ashaar ka to jawab nahi,



be-aabru hote dekh ablaa ko.
ye raat sharm se gadi hai!

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nikle rooh jab jism se tere.
samjho ye hijr ki ghadi hai!

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hai ghazal apne sher pe qaayam!
aur sheba apni baat pe adi hai!!

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DherooN daaad qubool kareN.






bahut shukria aarish....!
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Quote from: nandbahu on March 14, 2013, 11:14:37 AM
bahut khoob


shukria..........!
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umdaa likha hai muhtarma, khaas taur pe mujhe maqtaa aapka haasil-e-ghazal laga, bas aage v yuNhi bazm ko roshan karti raheN...
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 14, 2013, 12:03:22 PM
bahut khoob , sheba ji.bahut khubsurat ghazal
kahi hai.sabhi ashaar khoob rahe. mubarakbaad
aur daad hazir hai.

shukria fazal sahab.......!
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