Ghazal (NM)

by vb on September 28, 2010, 01:32:45 PM
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Monitors requested to plz delete....

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«Reply #1 on: September 28, 2010, 01:41:30 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob V.b ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: September 28, 2010, 03:04:21 PM »
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...Is ghazal mein har aik sher bahut heavy hay maanay jaan rakhta hay...no need to say ke har baar behtareen shayari which brings back the readers and jis say sabit yeh hota hay ke jab tak parhnay walay salamat hain, likhnay walay and unki penmanship bhi salamat rahegi...

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4th sher pe tafsir farmayein
ramooz-e-marg-o-hayat?

and thnx!

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«Reply #3 on: September 28, 2010, 03:42:33 PM »
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Thnx for the detailed reply and meanings! lagta hay yun hee diff creations say readers ka acha manoranjan hota rahega...

hamsay reQuest bhi proper nahin ho paati, sorry...
hamara maslan 5th sher say tha, ghalat likh ho gaya, mushkil na ho tu samjhayega...and teergee=darkness?
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«Reply #4 on: September 28, 2010, 03:59:33 PM »
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Bahut meharbaani, explain karnay ke liye. behtar! hamne khud in shers ke meanings kuch aur liye hotay and insaaf na ho pata...

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«Reply #5 on: September 28, 2010, 04:16:53 PM »
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एक बहुत अच्छी ग़ज़ल पढ़ने को मिली|रचनाकार को बधाई|बहुत खूब  
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