ghazal -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

ghazal

by sana Afroz on November 12, 2014, 11:56:54 PM

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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on November 16, 2014, 07:56:47 AM

Mahutrama Sana sahibah ...aadab ..

ghazal bahut umda hai masha allah dad behad o hisaab ...us per VB sahab ke mashware bhi khoob hain mujhe unse ittefaaq hai...taham maqte ke pahle misre ko dekh len ..meri apni rai me misra bhr se kharij hai ..wo is liye ke is bhr me ye gunjaish hai ke is pahle arkaan ke pahle rukn ko 2 harfi ki bajaye 1 harfi bhi bandha jaa sakta hai magar doosra rukn 2 harfi nahi ho sakta kissi bhi suraat me ...is lihaz se aapka naam sa1naa2 jaake sa1 na1 ho jayega aur lafz sana ka wajood qatre me aa jayega ......aap isko ek nazar dekh len ...shukriyah ....ye meri apni zaati rai hai zaroori nahi ke aap muttafiq hon --kya hi acha ho ke koi meri ilm me izafa kare ....

misra yun bhi ho sakta hai sirf o sirf misaal ki taur per likh raha hun ..baaqi aap mujh se bahtar jaanti hain ..

aapni har rah me mushkil me thi purjoosh sana ....waazeh rahe ke ye misaal ke taur per misra tajweez kiya gaya hai himaqat na samjhen ..shukriyah ...

shukriya Junaid ji ,,,behtareen daad k liye..
mashware k liye mamnoon hoon... main to abhi is ilm mein tifl e maqtab hoon. aap aur vb shb jaise sukhan shanas logon k mashwaron se istafada kar skoon aur apne kalaam ko aur behtar bana sakoon...main is misre par nazr e sani kar leti hoon .
ek baar phir tah e dil se SHUKRIYA...

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