~Ghum tum seh nahin paoge~ by Rahim

by dead heart on November 12, 2010, 09:34:13 PM
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Ek line suni aj radio par kay 'sabko apna mehboob miljaye..'..Bas issi line kay saath apne ehsaas jorre hai maine..

Woh meri palkon ki nami dekh kar mujhpe taras khaye,
Dua hai ya Rabb mujhe koi wafa nibhane wala saathi mil jaye..

Main unn main se nahin jo haseen chehra dekh uspe fida hojaye,
Phir ae zindagi tune mujhe hi kyun sirf dil phenk mehboob dilaye..

Main toh jisse chahta hoon usse dil kay ghar main basa leta hoon,
Ya Rabb mujhe bhi apne dil main basane wala koi mil jaye..

‘Khamosh’ ne toh bikhar kar seekhi hai ada uske bagair jeene ki,
Dua hai ae Rabb kisi ki zindagi main kabhi bhi judai ka aisa daur na aye..

Ae Zalim bewaffai tune ki mager saza zindagi mujhe de rahi hai,
Phir bhi dil sirf dua deta hai tujhe kyun ki yeh janta hai,
Jo daur-e-ghum iss par beeta hai, woh tum jhel nahin paoge..

Meri muskurahat main dabe hai najane kitne ashq uski yaad kay,
Main toh janta hoon kay woh mujhe shayad kabhi nahin mil paega,
Mager ilteja hai ae Khuda, sabko apna bichra hua mehboob mil jaye..

~,,Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2010, 10:43:11 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Rahim bhai,apne ehsaaso ko bahut khoobsurti se likha aape.great work,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 13, 2010, 06:42:46 AM »
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Bahut Khoobsurat Ehsas... Likhte Rahiye...
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«Reply #3 on: November 13, 2010, 10:08:43 AM »
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ghum tum seh na paaoge..
duur tum humse reh na paaoge..
na kiya kar kosisen bewajah hume bhoolne ki..
jab bhi karoge naakamiyan hi paaoge..
....++bahut khoob **Rahim ji bahut khoob++
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«Reply #4 on: November 13, 2010, 10:14:59 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: November 13, 2010, 12:12:23 PM »
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Madhu di, KillBill jee, Mrkotians jee aur Khwaish Dost..

Ap sabhi ka teh dil se shukriya,..!
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«Reply #6 on: November 13, 2010, 12:14:00 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on November 13, 2010, 10:08:43 AM
ghum tum seh na paaoge..
duur tum humse reh na paaoge..
na kiya kar kosisen bewajah hume bhoolne ki..
jab bhi karoge naakamiyan hi paaoge..
Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2010, 12:14:24 PM »
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Nice work.
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«Reply #8 on: November 13, 2010, 12:15:26 PM »
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Teh dil se shukriya Sajid bhai..!
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«Reply #9 on: November 13, 2010, 01:29:07 PM »
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Rahim-bhai aflaatoon likha hai bhai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yu apne mehboob ko itnaa kamjoor naa samjho
 Naari kya-kya seh letee hai ye tum kya samjho

 Sabko miljaaye apna mehboob duaa kabool hoti nahi
 Ye lekhni hai kismat ki sab kay naseeb me hoti nahi


Quote from: -Rahim- on November 12, 2010, 09:34:13 PM
Ek line suni aj radio par kay 'sabko apna mehboob miljaye..'..Bas issi line kay saath apne ehsaas jorre hai maine..

Woh meri palkon ki nami dekh kar mujhpe taras khaye,
Dua hai ya Rabb mujhe koi wafa nibhane wala saathi mil jaye..

Main unn main se nahin jo haseen chehra dekh uspe fida hojaye,
Phir ae zindagi tune mujhe hi kyun sirf dil phenk mehboob dilaye..

Main toh jisse chahta hoon usse dil kay ghar main basa leta hoon,
Ya Rabb mujhe bhi apne dil main basane wala koi mil jaye..

‘Khamosh’ ne toh bikhar kar seekhi hai ada uske bagair jeene ki,
Dua hai ae Rabb kisi ki zindagi main kabhi bhi judai ka aisa daur na aye..

Ae Zalim bewaffai tune ki mager saza zindagi mujhe de rahi hai,
Phir bhi dil sirf dua deta hai tujhe kyun ki yeh janta hai,
Jo daur-e-ghum iss par beeta hai, woh tum jhel nahin paoge..

Meri muskurahat main dabe hai najane kitne ashq uski yaad kay,
Main toh janta hoon kay woh mujhe shayad kabhi nahin mil paega,
Mager ilteja hai ae Khuda, sabko apna bichra hua mehboob mil jaye..

~,,Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #10 on: November 13, 2010, 01:37:18 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 13, 2010, 01:29:07 PM
Rahim-bhai aflaatoon likha hai bhai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yu apne mehboob ko itnaa kamjoor naa samjho
 Naari kya-kya seh letee hai ye tum kya samjho

 Sabko miljaaye apna mehboob duaa kabool hoti nahi
 Ye lekhni hai kismat ki sab kay naseeb me hoti nahi



Teh dil se shukriya Koyal di..
bahaut khoob chaar lines likhi hai apne..
Applause Applause


Khud ki galti ko naseeb ka dokha kehte hai,
Apne hi mehboob ko najane kyun hum bewaffa kehte hai..

Mere Rabb kay darbar main dua sabhi ki kabool hoti hai,
Phir najane kyun log apni duaon ko ansuni kehte hai..
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«Reply #11 on: November 14, 2010, 02:42:22 PM »
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Teh dil se shukriya Shihab bhaijan..
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #12 on: November 14, 2010, 02:51:55 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai rahiim ji..
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«Reply #13 on: November 14, 2010, 02:54:30 PM »
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Shukriya Geet di..!
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«Reply #14 on: November 15, 2010, 11:15:21 AM »
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kyaa baat hai bhai..


bahut bahut khoob..

abhi thodi der pehle ek thread me kaha kisi ki yad nahi a rahi mujhe..or abhi aapne kisiki yad dila di...

dher sari daad`
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