ghumm....(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on July 31, 2011, 12:31:56 PM
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                     ek ghumm tanhaa meri jaanib aataa gayaa..!
                     aur wajood dhire-dhire mera khataa gayaa.!!

                     hai zor bahaar-e-nafrat shahar mein aaj,
                     ahmiyat rishte ki main bhi bhulataa gayaa,

                     harf-e-mohabbat sunaa huaa saa lagta hai,
                     khayaalon mein matlab iskaa banataa gayaa,

                     raah-e-zulmat pe chalta rahaa umar bhar,
                     ek chiraag ko aaj ujaalaa dikhataa gayaa,

                     abb takalluf se nibhataa hoon dosti main,
                     be-takallfi mein kai dard uthataa gayaa,

                     ghazlon ne bahut hai rulayaa mujhe khamosh..!
                     sher saare apne ashqon mein dubataa gayaa..!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2011, 01:12:57 PM »
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kamosh_aawaaz Ji,

Waah..waah.kya baat hai
bahut khoob dili daad qubool
farmaayen..

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #2 on: July 31, 2011, 07:49:08 PM »
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K A jee Aadaab!

Janab kia kahne aapke andaaz e bayaaN ke aur
umdaa ahsaas O khayaal ke... Usual Smile

Waah behad khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne.. Usual Smile
Sabhi ashaar tarif ke mushtahiq haiN.. Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

         



Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 31, 2011, 12:31:56 PM


                     ek ghumm tanhaa meri jaanib aataa gayaa..!
                     aur wajood dhire-dhire mera khataa gayaa.!!

Kia kahne janab bahut gehra matla kaha hai aapne.. Usual Smile Bahut khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile         

                     hai zor bahaar-e-nafrat shahar mein aaj,
                     ahmiyat rishte ki main bhi bhulataa gayaa,

Waah janab waah bahut khoob kia khayaal pesh kiya hai aapne ... bahut umdaa daad daad daad           

                     harf-e-mohabbat sunaa huaa saa lagta hai,
                     khayaalon mein matlab iskaa banataa gayaa,

Waah kia kaheN janab ... behad khoob umdaa sher hai daad Usual Smile         

                     raah-e-zulmat pe chalta rahaa umar bhar,
                     ek chiraag ko aaj ujaalaa dikhataa gayaa,

Dono misre apne aap meiN behad khoob hai janab..
Par rabte ki kami mehsus ho rahi hai... Sher mukammal sa nahi lag raha hai hume.. Usual Smile         

                     abb takalluf se nibhataa hoon dosti main,
                     be-takallfi mein kai dard uthataa gayaa,

Waah kia kahne janab aapke bahut khoob khayaal bayaaN kar raheN hai aap daad daad Usual Smile         

                     ghazlon ne bahut hai rulayaa mujhe khamosh..!
                     sher saare apne ashqon mein dubataa gayaa..!!

Achcha Maqta kaha janab daad Usual Smile Ulaa misra behad khoob raha Sani meiN kuch badlaav ki zarurat lag rahi hai.. Usual Smile         


Is khoob kalaam par dil se daad O
mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.... Aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         
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«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2011, 07:52:56 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB KA SAHAB

PADH KAR DIL TAREEF KE LIYE LAFZ DHUND RAHE HAI..

WAH..!! BAHUT KHOOB...

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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2011, 09:59:31 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on July 31, 2011, 01:12:57 PM
kamosh_aawaaz Ji,

Waah..waah.kya baat hai
bahut khoob dili daad qubool
farmaayen..

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

thanx SS
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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2011, 07:17:10 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on July 31, 2011, 07:49:08 PM
K A jee Aadaab!

Janab kia kahne aapke andaaz e bayaaN ke aur
umdaa ahsaas O khayaal ke... Usual Smile

Waah behad khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne.. Usual Smile
Sabhi ashaar tarif ke mushtahiq haiN.. Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

         



Is khoob kalaam par dil se daad O
mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.... Aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


thanx parwaaz sb
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2011, 12:28:26 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on July 31, 2011, 07:52:56 PM
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BAHUT KHOOB KA SAHAB

PADH KAR DIL TAREEF KE LIYE LAFZ DHUND RAHE HAI..

WAH..!! BAHUT KHOOB...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

THANX
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«Reply #7 on: September 13, 2011, 11:29:24 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 31, 2011, 12:31:56 PM


                     ek ghumm tanhaa meri jaanib aataa gayaa..!
                     aur wajood dhire-dhire mera khataa gayaa.!!

                     hai zor bahaar-e-nafrat shahar mein aaj,
                     ahmiyat rishte ki main bhi bhulataa gayaa,

                     harf-e-mohabbat sunaa huaa saa lagta hai,
                     khayaalon mein matlab iskaa banataa gayaa,

                     raah-e-zulmat pe chalta rahaa umar bhar,
                     ek chiraag ko aaj ujaalaa dikhataa gayaa,

                     abb takalluf se nibhataa hoon dosti main,
                     be-takallfi mein kai dard uthataa gayaa,

                     ghazlon ne bahut hai rulayaa mujhe khamosh..!
                     sher saare apne ashqon mein dubataa gayaa..!!

bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: September 20, 2011, 09:51:00 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on September 13, 2011, 11:29:24 AM
bahut khoob

THANX
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2012, 06:53:33 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on July 31, 2011, 07:52:56 PM
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BAHUT KHOOB KA SAHAB

PADH KAR DIL TAREEF KE LIYE LAFZ DHUND RAHE HAI..

WAH..!! BAHUT KHOOB...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanx
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