Goya bahut dinon se wo bhukha hi so raha tha...mann

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Goya bahut dinon se wo bhukha hi so raha tha.
Aur uska chhota bachcha roti ko ro raha tha.

Barasa ja khoob pani kheton ke waste,
Wo to garib khet main aansu hi bo raha tha.

Gurwat ke din bhi dekho kya sath leke aaye,
Apnon ke sitam par wo daaman bhigo raha hai.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: January 10, 2012, 05:00:08 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2012, 05:09:14 AM »
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ahut bahut shukriya sainiji... sath dete rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: January 10, 2012, 07:08:58 AM »
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Goya bahut dinon se wo bhukha hi so raha tha.
Aur uska chhota bachcha roti ko ro raha tha.

Barasa ja khoob pani kheton ke waste,
Wo to garib khet main aansu hi bo raha tha.

Gurwat ke din bhi dekho kya sath leke aaye,
Apnon ke sitam par wo daaman bhigo raha hai.

Mann
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«Reply #4 on: January 10, 2012, 08:00:21 AM »
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Goya bahut dinon se wo bhukha hi so raha tha.
Aur uska chhota bachcha roti ko ro raha tha.

Barasa ja khoob pani kheton ke waste,
Wo to garib khet main aansu hi bo raha tha.

Gurwat ke din bhi dekho kya sath leke aaye,
Apnon ke sitam par wo daaman bhigo raha hai.

Mann

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«Reply #5 on: January 10, 2012, 08:18:53 AM »
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Bahut Khooob Mannji

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«Reply #6 on: January 10, 2012, 12:38:32 PM »
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dhanyawad sarfiraji.
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«Reply #8 on: January 10, 2012, 05:19:33 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai..
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«Reply #9 on: January 11, 2012, 04:48:37 AM »
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ba bahut shukriya khwaishji. yun hi sath dete rahiyega..
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shukriya aapka mkvji
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