GUM APNA SAB SEY CHUPA KEY RAKHNA ........ (Jasbir Singh)

by jasbirsingh on December 28, 2008, 09:27:26 PM
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BAAT PATEY KI HAI, SUNN LOH MERE DOSTOH
HO SAKEY TOJ JINDAGI MEH APNA LENA DOSTOH


HAR KISI KOH HASS KEY MILA KARO
KISI KOH BHI NA, TUM GILA KARO

JAB TAK NA HO KOI KHAAS APNA
DUKH NA KISI KO BATAO TUM APNA

CHEHREY PEH CHEHRA LAGA KEY RAKHNA
GUM APNA SAB SEY CHUPA KEY RAKHNA

HAZAROH DARD MEH BHI KHILKHILANA
ROTA CHECHRA NA KISI KOH DIKHANA

MURJHAYE PHOOL KISI KOH PASAND AATEY NAHI
VIRAAN BASTI OHH MEH LOG JATEY NAHI

BEECH SAMANDAR MEH LOG, BHAVAR MEH JATEY NAHI
WAISEY HI VIRAAN JINDAGI KEY PAAS LOG AATEY NAHI

BAGOH MEH KHILTEY PHOOLOH SEY HI RONAK HOTI HAI
JINDAGI KOH KHUSH HAAL DEKH, MEHFILEY HOTI HAI

DOST YAAR SAB BANTEY HI KHUSHI MEH HAI
JINDAGI SWARG BANI HI KHUSHI MEH HAI

HAZAAR GUM LEY FIROH DAR BADAR
TAMASHA HI BAN JAOGEY DAR BADAR

EK GUM KOH BAATNEY CHALA THA
HAZAAR GUM HAATH PASAREY KHADA THA

DARD BAATNEY SEY DIL HALKA HOTA HAI
KABHI KABHI ISSEY DARD DUGNA HOTA HAI

DARD BAATNEY JAB TUM JAOGEY KISI SEY
SUNNEY PADENGEY USKEY DARD TUMKOH BHI KHUSHI SEY

BATANEY GAYA THA EK DARD, LEY KEY AAGAYA CHAAR
HAR KISI KA YEHI KISSA, KYA MAIN, KYA TUM YAAR

CHEHREY PEH CHEHRA LAGA KEY RAKHNA
GUM APNA SAB SEY CHUPA KEY RAKHNA





JASBIR SINGH
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2008, 11:52:41 PM »
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Good one Jasbir Ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2008, 03:03:11 AM »
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Wah jasbire kya baat hain cha gaye tussi....

Mere to dard bhi auro ke kam aate hain
Main ro padu to kaiee logh muskarate hain

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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2008, 05:47:55 AM »
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waah jasbir ji kya khoob likha hai aapne aur last 4-5 lines jo aapne likhi hain bilkul sahi likhi hain ki kisi ko apna gam jab ham sunana chahte hain to uske gam hamei aur rula jaate hain ....so better to yahi hai jasbir ji ki apna gam ham chupakar hi rakhein


nice lines ghayel ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2008, 05:52:13 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 28, 2008, 11:52:41 PM
Good one Jasbir Ji

Thanks Rajesh

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2008, 05:55:25 AM »
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kya baat hain jASBIRJI....

HAR HAAL MEIN KHUD HI JIYE JAA,
GUM APNE KISI KO NA SUNAYE JAA.
APNE GUM KO KHUD HI PIYE JAA,
HAR HAAL MEIN MUSKRAKAR JIYE JAA.
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2008, 05:58:21 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 29, 2008, 03:03:11 AM
Wah jasbire kya baat hain cha gaye tussi....

Mere to dard bhi auro ke kam aate hain
Main ro padu to kaiee logh muskarate hain

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Thanks Sajid
and very nice sharing from you.

YEHI DUNIYA KA DASTOOR HAI, YEHI DUNIYA KI REET
HASNA CHAHTEY THEY HUM MAGAR,RONA BANA INKA SANGEET



Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2008, 05:59:56 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on December 29, 2008, 05:47:55 AM
waah jasbir ji kya khoob likha hai aapne aur last 4-5 lines jo aapne likhi hain bilkul sahi likhi hain ki kisi ko apna gam jab ham sunana chahte hain to uske gam hamei aur rula jaate hain ....so better to yahi hai jasbir ji ki apna gam ham chupakar hi rakhein


nice lines ghayel ji


Thanks Bhavna
Ji aap neh bilkul sahi kaha, yehi hum bhi sab koh kehna chahtey they.....


Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2008, 06:03:03 AM »
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Quote from: cara on December 29, 2008, 05:55:25 AM
kya baat hain jASBIRJI....

HAR HAAL MEIN KHUD HI JIYE JAA,
GUM APNE KISI KO NA SUNAYE JAA.
APNE GUM KO KHUD HI PIYE JAA,
HAR HAAL MEIN MUSKRAKAR JIYE JAA.

Thanks CARA and bahut acchaa kaha aap neh bhi


DOH PAL KI JINDEGANI HAI
ROH KAR JINA, BAYIMANI HAI
HAR HAAL MEH MUSKURAYE JAA
PRABHU KEY GEET GAYE JAA



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #9 on: December 29, 2008, 02:46:29 PM »
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bohat khoob kamaal ka likha hai aapne jasbir ji

Very nice lines Sajid ji wonderfull sharing

Very nice lines Cara...bohat khoob
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«Reply #10 on: December 29, 2008, 03:06:38 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on December 29, 2008, 02:46:29 PM
Applause Applause

bohat khoob kamaal ka likha hai aapne jasbir ji

Very nice lines Sajid ji wonderfull sharing

Very nice lines Cara...bohat khoob

Thanks Honey for your appreciation.

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #11 on: December 29, 2008, 09:45:14 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Jas ji... kai baar apki kavita ko parra.. bahoot he dil se likhi hai apne yah rachna... good work   Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: December 29, 2008, 09:51:25 PM »
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Wah Wah Bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne, Jasbir Ji


Mumkin nahin raah-e-ulfat mein,
har gam ka karein charcha jag se,
kuch dard bataaye jaate hain,
kuch dard chhupaaye jaate hain.
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«Reply #13 on: December 29, 2008, 09:59:13 PM »
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Chupate chupate bhi gum chalak jaate hai
rokte rokte bhi ansoo beh jaate hai

tanhaaio ke sanp, jab daste hai zakham ban kar
kahuin na kahin dard, ahh main dhal jaate hai

Veeran pare khandhar main kuch to awaz aa jayegi
jab barso baad koi musafir waha ruk jaate hai

dard nahi hota kam ya jayada batane se
magar kuch palo ke liye, dard ke pal thum jaate hai

Chupate chupate bhi gum chalak jaate hai
rokte rokte bhi ansoo beh jaate hai ....
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«Reply #14 on: December 30, 2008, 07:02:29 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on December 29, 2008, 09:51:25 PM
Wah Wah Bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne, Jasbir Ji


Mumkin nahin raah-e-ulfat mein,
har gam ka karein charcha jag se,
kuch dard bataaye jaate hain,
kuch dard chhupaaye jaate hain.


wah bahut khoob Deepati


Jasbir Singh
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