Gumshuda..

by nashwani on July 29, 2013, 03:12:14 PM
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Ishq ki dastan me sooli chadha jo,,
Hua fanaa vo na kisike khauf se tha..

Jale parwane pe taras na khaao,,
Wo jalaa shamaa me, shauk se tha..

Mili thi nazare.N uss pari se jaha.N,,
Hua gumshuda wo uss chauk se tha..

Chahat par uska bas na chala sirf,,
Warna jiyaa wo zindagi, raub se tha..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2013, 03:19:27 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waaah. bahut khoob nashwani. dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaad..
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«Reply #2 on: July 29, 2013, 03:32:33 PM »
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Ishq ki dastan me sooli chadha jo,,
Hua fanaa vo na kisike khauf se tha..

Jale parwane pe taras na khaao,,
Wo jalaa shamaa me, shauk se tha..

Mili thi nazare.N uss pari se jaha.N,,
Hua gumshuda wo uss chauk se tha..
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Chahat par uska bas na chala sirf,,
Warna jiyaa wo zindagi, raub se tha..!!! Ñ



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«Reply #3 on: July 29, 2013, 03:36:47 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 29, 2013, 04:28:48 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 29, 2013, 04:44:40 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: July 29, 2013, 04:52:36 PM »
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wah Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2013, 05:23:25 PM »
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Shandaar waaaaah waah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 29, 2013, 05:51:52 PM »
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वाह वाह नशवाणी जी बहुत खूब
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«Reply #9 on: July 29, 2013, 06:34:32 PM »
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very nice ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #10 on: July 29, 2013, 07:33:22 PM »
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wah kya khoob kahan hai....
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Lajawab..
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«Reply #12 on: July 29, 2013, 10:46:49 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: July 29, 2013, 10:51:25 PM »
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Bahut achha likha hai..
Dhero daad...
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Thankyou ! one n all 4 ur valuable time n comments..Yun hi saath banae rakhe..happy9
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