gunaah.sheba -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

sbechain

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«Reply #15 on: August 22, 2011, 07:35:24 PM »

Quote from: qalb on July 06, 2011, 08:18:06 AM

THANK YOU


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ParwaaZ

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Re: gunaah.sheba

«Reply #16 on: August 22, 2011, 07:55:44 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on February 07, 2011, 12:42:53 PM

humsafar na sahi humraah to bano..,
muflisi mein tum khairkhaah to bano..,

Masah Allah kia khub aur behad achcha matla kaha hai aapne.. muflisi meiN log kaise badal jaate hai.. waah achchi soch ka muzahera kiya hai aapne daad

Humne bhi is soch par aik matla kaha tha

Kisi ki Muflisi jab saath chalti hai
ToH ManzileN bhi raaste badalti hai

uljhi rahi khamoshi raat ki tanhaai mein,
'sadaa' ki khubsoorat subah to bano,

Achcha khayaal hai daad

ho gaye goomm ehsaas inn aansuon mein,
mere haqeer ashqoan ki panaah to bano,

Waah bahut khoob janab behad achcha sher hai daad

rah kar ghair younn na guzaaro lamhe,
meri mohabbat ki afwaah to bano,

Kia kahne jee waah bahut khoob... aap aik achche darje ki shayra si soch rakhti hai... behad khubsurat sher kaha hai daad

ulfat ki viraangi mein kya sunaaye sheba...!
mile sazaa mujhe wo gunaah to bano...!!

Masha Allah bahut khub... Maqta bhi khoob raha daad

Is pur asar dilfareb kalaam par dil se daad O
mubarakbaad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez


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sbechain

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Re: gunaah.sheba

«Reply #17 on: August 22, 2011, 08:07:28 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 22, 2011, 07:55:44 PM

Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Achchi kalaam kahi aapne... Aapke soch ka mayaar behad
bada hai.. waqai gehre ashaas O khayaloN ko lafzi
jamaa diya hai aapne

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe tahe dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye

Is pur asar dilfareb kalaam par dil se daad O
mubarakbaad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez

parwaaz sahab ,

aapka bahut bahut shukria jo mere iss haqeer kalaam ko itni izzat di..
main aapke iss tarah se tarif karne pe aaj yaqeen maane bahut puzzled hoon.
.....wajh ye hai ki....mujhe itni tanqeed mili hai ki mujhe likhna hi nahin aata hai...........!! main to ghazal likhna nahin jaanti buss kuch likhne ki koshish karthi hoon.
aap iss tarah se daad dete hain ki pata nahin ye dil rakhne ke liye karte hain ya waqai aap ko pasand aata hai. bahar kaif. aap ka tahe dil se shukria.

KHUSH RAHIYE ABAAD RAHIYE.
AURANGABAAD RAHIYE YE.......HYDERABAAD RAHIYE

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ParwaaZ

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Re: gunaah.sheba

«Reply #18 on: August 22, 2011, 08:23:31 PM »

Aadaab Shebaa Sahibaa !

Aap waqai khub sukhanwar hai.. achche khayaal aur gehrai se likhi kalaam par hum dil se hi daad dete hai...

Jee Aapka aisa samjhana galat nahi hai ke humari daad dil rakhne
liye thi yaa sahi mayne meiN .. toh hum aapko bata deN ke ...
humari yeH daad waqai dil se thi..

Jee hum jin logoN ko padh chuke hai unke likhne ka darja bhi
unke likhne ka darja bhi samjhte hai.. usi lihaaz se hum achche shayar ke kalaam meiN hi gar kami nazar aaye to batate hai..

Aap waqai achcha likhati hai to aapko waisi daad dekar hum khud
sharmindaa nahi hona chahte... gar kahiN koi kami nazar aati
to hum bata dete..

Khair ummid karte hai... aap aise hi achche kalaam kahti raheN..
Aage bhi..

Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez


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sbechain

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Re: gunaah.sheba

«Reply #19 on: August 22, 2011, 08:35:32 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 22, 2011, 08:23:31 PM

HAUSLA AFZAAI KA BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIA.

YAQEEN JAANE AAJ MAIN ELEVATED FEEL KAR RAHI HOON...!!!


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