Gurbat

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AS salaam Walaikum, Bohat Dino Baad Kuch Likh Raha Hoon Is Forum Pe, Kuch Zindagi ke Haadse jo Dekhe Hain, aur kuch Haadson se khud meri aazmaaish Rahi Hai,.

Yun To ise main Zindagi KaTajruba kehta, Magar Abhi Mukammal Zindagi Ka chehra maine dekha nahi, isliye is ghazal ko haadson se bhari ghazal kehna chahoonga, Is Ghazal Mein Maine Aam aadmi aur aam aadmi se hattke jo Gurbat guzaar rahe hain ya gurbat waali zindagi dekhke hain, unke dil ko choone koshish ki hai, Umeed Hai aap sath denge,.


Is Zindagi Se, To Mujhe Maut Pyaari Hai,.
Ke Bade Faaqon Se Ye Zindagi Guzaari Hai,.

Soch Ke Jis Mahaul Ko Log Panah Maangte Hain,.
Us Mahaul Mein Basi Duniya Hamaari Hai,.

Kamzor Baap Bhi Jahaan Rozi Ki Talaash Kare,.
Budhi Maayi Chupaaye Sabse, Ke Use Kya Bimaari Hai,.

Kyun Beach Rahe Ho Is Shehar Mein Khilone Tum,.
Bachchon Ne Umr Yahan Bhooke Pait Guzaari Hai,.

Unka Rutba Bard Gaya Yahan Oonchi Imarat Banaake,.
Is Jagaah Pe Dafan Hamari Khushiyaan Saari Hai,.

Daulat Ka Libaaz Pehanke Wo Maghroor Hogaya,.
Gurbat ne Achche Achchon Ki Langaut Utaari Hai,.

Dekh Tujhe Gurbat Ne Gale Lagaa Liya "Azeem,.
Daulat Ki To Fitrat Mein Hi Dhoka Hai Gaddaari Hai,.

 -Azeem
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2010, 12:19:38 PM »
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har ek lafz sidhe dil me utar gaya Azeem ......
har ek sher jaise tasveer bana gaya aankhon me....

bht bht bhtbbht hi badhiya peshkash hai ye aapki.....

dil me utarti hui.....
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2010, 01:28:41 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2010, 04:05:37 PM »
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kya kahe Ajeem ji......bahut mushkil hota hai aise haadson par likhna....
jha jubaan ko lafj hi nahi milte....hats off to u Ajeem ji....
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2010, 05:17:35 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 26, 2010, 12:19:38 PM
har ek lafz sidhe dil me utar gaya Azeem ......
har ek sher jaise tasveer bana gaya aankhon me....

bht bht bhtbbht hi badhiya peshkash hai ye aapki.....

dil me utarti hui.....

Shukriya Kasak Ji,.

Daad ke saath Duaa Ki Darkhwast,
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2010, 05:19:08 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on August 26, 2010, 05:17:35 PM
Shukriya Kasak Ji,.

Daad ke saath Duaa Ki Darkhwast,

tumhare liye dua main roz karti hun azeem....
ye waada hai mera kisi se...
aur ek bahen apne bhai k liye hamesha dua hi karti hai...
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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2010, 07:04:23 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 26, 2010, 01:28:41 PM
bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!!!

shukriya klaskar ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2010, 07:51:07 PM »
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Badi khubsoorat ghazal likhi hai Azeem bhaijan..
Daad kay saath bahaut sari duaein..!

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«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2010, 09:27:23 PM »
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Azeem sahab Aadaab!

Behad khoob kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne... Bahut dil ko lagne wale sher kahe hai janab... dil se tis uth gayi....         


Quote from: Azeem on August 26, 2010, 12:16:42 PM


Is Zindagi Se, To Mujhe Maut Pyaari Hai,.
Ke Bade Faaqon Se Ye Zindagi Guzaari Hai,.

Matla achcah bana hai ... Per baat Khass nahi lagi....


Soch Ke Jis Mahaul Ko Log Panah Maangte Hain,.
Us Mahaul Mein Basi Duniya Hamaari Hai,.

Bahut umdaa raha yeh sher Daad         


Kamzor Baap Bhi Jahaan Rozi Ki Talaash Kare,.
Budhi Maayi Chupaaye Sabse, Ke Use Kya Bimaari Hai,.

Dil cheer diya janab... bahut bariki hai khayaal meiN.. Allah Raham farmayeN         


Kyun Beach Rahe Ho Is Shehar Mein Khilone Tum,.
Bachchon Ne Umr Yahan Bhooke Pait Guzaari Hai,.

Kia baat hai janaab bahut jyada umdaa... Aapne is sher maiN ek umdaa shayar hone ka saboot diya hai... DheroN daad Janab         


Unka Rutba Bard Gaya Yahan Oonchi Imarat Banaake,.
Is Jagaah Pe Dafan Hamari Khushiyaan Saari Hai,.

Achcha sher hai.... baat kabristaan se hai yaa... basti se ... yeh samjh nahi paye...


Daulat Ka Libaaz Pehanke Wo Maghroor Hogaya,.
Gurbat ne Achche Achchon Ki Langaut Utaari Hai,.

Bahut khoob..... Daad         


Dekh Tujhe Gurbat Ne Gale Lagaa Liya "Azeem,.
Daulat Ki To Fitrat Mein Hi Dhoka Hai Gaddaari Hai,.

Kia baat hai bahut umdaa.... Daad         


 -Azeem

Bahut achchi kalaam rahi Azeem sahab bahut khoob..... Dil se daad janab... Allah un tamam logoN ki maslihat ko aasaan kare, aameen.

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.....       
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2010, 02:41:21 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
behad umda peshkash ke liye aapko hazaron daad. dost....
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2010, 05:37:45 AM »
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This made me cry...

What else can I say? A true artist is one who holds the capability of stirring emotion in those who read his or her work. Each time, MA you prove, how truely talented you are. And that's why I have made you mine.


This may be your best work in describung reality yet. I absolutely loved it! Truely mind blowing, love.

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Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Azeem!!!!

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i definetely feel,this is one of your best work..

har Ek Sher Apne aap mein itne Gehra hai ke Kya Kahoon!!

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«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2010, 01:12:38 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on August 26, 2010, 12:16:42 PM
AS salaam Walaikum, Bohat Dino Baad Kuch Likh Raha Hoon Is Forum Pe, Kuch Zindagi ke Haadse jo Dekhe Hain, aur kuch Haadson se khud meri aazmaaish Rahi Hai,.

Yun To ise main Zindagi KaTajruba kehta, Magar Abhi Mukammal Zindagi Ka chehra maine dekha nahi, isliye is ghazal ko haadson se bhari ghazal kehna chahoonga, Is Ghazal Mein Maine Aam aadmi aur aam aadmi se hattke jo Gurbat guzaar rahe hain ya gurbat waali zindagi dekhke hain, unke dil ko choone koshish ki hai, Umeed Hai aap sath denge,.


Is Zindagi Se, To Mujhe Maut Pyaari Hai,.
Ke Bade Faaqon Se Ye Zindagi Guzaari Hai,.

Soch Ke Jis Mahaul Ko Log Panah Maangte Hain,.
Us Mahaul Mein Basi Duniya Hamaari Hai,.

Kamzor Baap Bhi Jahaan Rozi Ki Talaash Kare,.
Budhi Maayi Chupaaye Sabse, Ke Use Kya Bimaari Hai,.

Kyun Beach Rahe Ho Is Shehar Mein Khilone Tum,.
Bachchon Ne Umr Yahan Bhooke Pait Guzaari Hai,.

Unka Rutba Bard Gaya Yahan Oonchi Imarat Banaake,.
Is Jagaah Pe Dafan Hamari Khushiyaan Saari Hai,.

Daulat Ka Libaaz Pehanke Wo Maghroor Hogaya,.
Gurbat ne Achche Achchon Ki Langaut Utaari Hai,.

Dekh Tujhe Gurbat Ne Gale Lagaa Liya "Azeem,.
Daulat Ki To Fitrat Mein Hi Dhoka Hai Gaddaari Hai,.

 -Azeem

Bahut khoob Chote Bhai
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