ha par ye likhna kabhi bandh nahi karna he muje............ ♫♫♫jyuthika♫♫♫

by jyuthika on September 15, 2013, 06:32:43 PM
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♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫♫

Naa ghum hai naa shikaayat hai mujhe,
jo kuch bhi milaa hai manzur hai mujhe,

Naa thi kal ki fikar naa parvaah kal ki mujhe,
aaj mein hi bas ji bhar ke jinaa hai mujhe,

Naa apno se naa kisi se fariyaad hai mujhe,
apne aap mein hi mast ho ke jinaa hai mujhe,

Naa tujhse naa teri baaton se pareshani hai mujhe,
guzre jo bhi pal sath mein, sukun de jaaye bas mujhe,

naa kuch ab kehnaa hai naa sunnaa hai mujhe,
haan par yeh likhnaa kabhi bandh nahi karnaa hai mujhe............

♫♫♫jyuthika♫♫♫

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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2013, 06:34:09 PM »
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waah superb lines jyuthika ji beautifull
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2013, 06:35:51 PM »
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beautiful thanks ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2013, 06:54:35 PM »
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Aap likhoge nahi to hum achchhi achchhi feeling kaha se sikhenge aur fir hum kaise likhenge  ?
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2013, 06:58:36 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause nice..hum log b yahi chahte hai ke aap kbi likhna band na kre..
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2013, 07:03:39 PM »
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wow so nice comments n encourage me thanks. yes i will write ...
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2013, 07:18:50 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah Jyuthika ji, behad khoobsoorat rachnaa, bahut achchaa likhaa hai aapne...!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2013, 07:53:55 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob jyuthika ji... dheron daad.. aise hi likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2013, 09:04:21 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2013, 10:27:28 PM »
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Nice thoughts indeed !!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2013, 11:03:53 PM »
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bahot achey  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 16, 2013, 03:37:46 AM »
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Beautiful n positive thoughts n always kip writing as readers r always in search of gud writeups
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«Reply #12 on: September 16, 2013, 02:05:42 PM »
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Hauslon Se Bhari Aapki Ye Kalaam Bahut Pasand Aayi
Bahut Achcha Likha Hai Aapne. Bahut Khub ♫jyuthika♫Sis
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«Reply #13 on: September 16, 2013, 02:31:25 PM »
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thank you very much to  all of u, i m so much happy to get yr reply n encourage thanks again
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