haal hua behaal mera.............

by SURESH SANGWAN on January 30, 2011, 02:28:44 PM
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itni mohabbat se pucha kisi ne jo haal mera.

achhi khasi haalat thi,aur haal hua behaal mera.
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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2011, 03:18:11 PM »
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hahaha---
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sun deewane haal kya hai batla de
     wo aai thi kya baato ka nazrana leke
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2011, 04:26:36 PM »
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wo aaya tha baton ka nazrana leke.
beeti baton ka afsana leke.
 achha likha hai aapne Nirala ji.
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hahaha---
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sun deewane haal kya hai batla de
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2011, 05:09:40 PM »
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azi aapke nazren hai jo hame achha kahti hain Usual Smile
warna hum kis khet ke GAZAR hain
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2011, 05:19:21 PM »
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bht achhce suresh ji.......
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2011, 10:15:20 AM »
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thanks a lot kasakji ur reviews r most awaited.
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 30, 2011, 05:19:21 PM
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good do line mai bahut kuch likh diya aap ne Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2011, 10:21:56 AM »
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shukriya kishan ji.
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2011, 10:44:41 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on January 30, 2011, 02:28:44 PM
itni mohabbat se pucha kisi ne jo haal mera.

achhi khasi haalat thi,aur haal hua behaal mera.
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Bahut Ache Suresji..bahut Hi Khoobsurat Soch Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2011, 10:59:42 AM »
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nice thought...........
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2011, 11:43:52 AM »
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achha ji...kisi ne puchha aur ye haal huaa..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2011, 02:46:55 PM »
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Khwaish ji bahut bahut shukriya apne compliments ke liye.
aap ke aane ke baad yoindia ki surat hi badal jati hai.
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2011, 02:48:06 PM »
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hota hai koyal ji aisa bhi,zindagi mein kuch bhi ho sakta hai.
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 31, 2011, 11:43:52 AM
achha ji...kisi ne puchha aur ye haal huaa..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: January 31, 2011, 02:48:48 PM »
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thanks tamanna ji
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nice thought...........
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«Reply #14 on: January 31, 2011, 02:49:15 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on January 31, 2011, 02:46:55 PM
Khwaish ji bahut bahut shukriya apne compliments ke liye.
aap ke aane ke baad yoindia ki surat hi badal jati hai.
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Haaye!!!! Sach mein Aisa Kya?? tongue3

Waise Yehi Baat Hum Aapko kehte hai..Aap Aaye Bahaar Aayi icon_flower
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