<>*Haan chup hun kuch din se main*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 27, 2010, 04:04:15 PM
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<>*Haan chup hun kuch din se main*<>


Haan chup hun kuch din se main
Kyun hun ye bhi na samjh pai hun

Likhe geet tere padhti hun iss mehfil me
Unhe padhte hue ashk main bahati hun
Maayuus ho jati hunt ere kalaamon se
Kiss tarah main tujhe dard ye de jati hun

Har ek aashar tere padhte padhte main
Tere ishq ki gehraai me ulajhti jati hun
Jitna bhi padhti hunt ere kalaamon ko
Main aur bhi gumsum hoti jati hun

Tere har lafz me pyaar hi chalakta hai
Har sher mujhse izhaare dard karta hai
Jab tu apni mahobbat ki duhaai deta hai
Main samjhkar bhi nasamjh si ban jati hun

Haan kai hain likhne wale iss mehfil me
Par unke geeton me wo baat nahin
Jo dard chalakta hai tere geeton me
Main usme khudko dooboti jati hun

Tere ye geet mere liye anmol ban gaye hain
Inko main khazane sa sanjo k rakhti hun
Ye mere liye zindagi ki amnol dharohar hai
Main inme tumhe mehsus karti jati hun...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2010, 04:11:30 PM »
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Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Anuji..

Aapne Yeh jiske Liye Bhi likha Hai, bahut Dil Se Likha Hai..

Har Ek lafz Dil Ko chuta Hua..Bahut Ache

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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2010, 05:00:05 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 27, 2010, 04:11:30 PM
Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Anuji..

Aapne Yeh jiske Liye Bhi likha Hai, bahut Dil Se Likha Hai..

Har Ek lafz Dil Ko chuta Hua..Bahut Ache

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shukriya janaab khwaish saheb....aapne ise pasand kiya ye mere liye bht khushi ki baat hai....
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2010, 05:10:36 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 27, 2010, 05:00:05 PM
shukriya janaab khwaish saheb....aapne ise pasand kiya ye mere liye bht khushi ki baat hai....


Aap Khush hai Yeh jaankar, Mujhe Behad Khushi hui Hai Anuji..Par plzzzzzzzzzz Khwaish Ke Aage saheb Naa lagaye..

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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2010, 05:15:48 PM »
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hahahahhahaha Laughing hard Laughing hard Giggle Giggle Giggle.........sorryyyyyy ji ...khwaish ji..ye to bas yunhi aapko satane ko kaha tha...dekh rahi thi kya kehte hain aap ye sunke...
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2010, 05:32:39 PM »
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Bahot khoob Kasak ji. Achhi nazm likhi hai. Parhkar achha laga.
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2010, 05:36:50 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on September 27, 2010, 05:32:39 PM
Bahot khoob Kasak ji. Achhi nazm likhi hai. Parhkar achha laga.

shukriya riyaz ji..pasand karne k liye ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2010, 05:45:59 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on September 27, 2010, 05:39:05 PM
Aah Ho...Kya Baat Hai Ji
Kiske Geet Aakhir Is Qadar
Aapke Dil Mein Ghar Kar Gaye Hain...!
Bahut Khub Ji...


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~ Feared.

shukriya shihab ji aapne ise pasand kiya...
aur hume to aap sabke geet pagal kar jate hain...
sach me yo me aakar humne sabse achcha kaam kiya hai...

thnx a lot ji..
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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2010, 08:53:27 PM »
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"kamal" hai kasak ji..........
Jiske liye bi likha hai bhut kamal likha hai

Vaise kiske geet apko pagal kar jate hai yeh to bataoji...
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«Reply #9 on: September 28, 2010, 05:03:28 AM »
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mehsoos agar dil se kiya hota to dard bhi nazar aaya hota... aur wo dard nazar bhi aagaya... shukriya aapka aisa padhne ko mila....

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«Reply #10 on: September 28, 2010, 05:24:01 AM »
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aapki lekhni ki baat hi kuch alag hai. pataa nahi kya jaadu karti hain aap ki meri ungliyaan keyboard pe chalne lag jaati hain. kuch dino se aisa lag raha tha ki meri unliyon me jang lag gayi hai. par aaj dekho aapka ek mastamm waala post padhke mera bhi likhne ka mann ho gaya.

Kasak ji back with a bang.. ek dhamaakedar peshkash k saath. bahut bahut khoob likha hai apne. too good hai ji.  ab fir likhne me mazaa aayega humein bhi warna kuch missing sa lag raha tha.


ye geet hi to hain jo ab teri kami ko poora karte hain,
kal tak tera saath tha aaj tanhaayi me jiya karte hain,

kho jaate hain teri yaadon me hum, tujhko yaad karte hain,
teri yaad ko seene se lagake geet tujh pe likha karte hain,

kabhi tu hua karti thi saath, aaj tere dard k saath jeete hain,
tere dard ko geeton me sajaake hum tera naam likha karte hain,

hum to isliye likhte hain ki apna dard ko kam kar saken,
log mehfil me mere aake mere dard pe wah wah karte hain,

tu hi meri zindagi hai jaana, hum bas tere liye jiya karte hain,
saath tera hum paaa na sake par tujhe geeton me mehsoos karte hain...
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«Reply #11 on: September 28, 2010, 05:34:04 AM »
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wooooooooooooo..........kapil tumhare replies k bina suna suna lagta hai poem yaar.....
reallyyyyy mastam mastttttttt replyyyyy
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lo padhte hi meri bhi ungliyan chal padi usi tezi se jaisie tumhari chalti hain aur ban gai ek nai kavita....

lo suno na baba.....

Ye dard hi to hume roz naye ehsaas dete hain
Ye juda rehna hi tujhse kuch naya likhwa deta hain

Tere khyalon me jab bhi tanha khote hain hum
Ye dil na jane kahan aur kahan ye badan hota hai

Samet k teri yaadon ko jab bhi kalam tham lete hain
Tere ehsaason ko dil panno pe utaar deta hai

Lamha jo kuch jiya hain tere aagosh me humne
Wo lamha hi hume har dard sehne ki taakat deta hai



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aapki lekhni ki baat hi kuch alag hai. pataa nahi kya jaadu karti hain aap ki meri ungliyaan keyboard pe chalne lag jaati hain. kuch dino se aisa lag raha tha ki meri unliyon me jang lag gayi hai. par aaj dekho aapka ek mastamm waala post padhke mera bhi likhne ka mann ho gaya.

Kasak ji back with a bang.. ek dhamaakedar peshkash k saath. bahut bahut khoob likha hai apne. too good hai ji.  ab fir likhne me mazaa aayega humein bhi warna kuch missing sa lag raha tha.


ye geet hi to hain jo ab teri kami ko poora karte hain,
kal tak tera saath tha aaj tanhaayi me jiya karte hain,

kho jaate hain teri yaadon me hum, tujhko yaad karte hain,
teri yaad ko seene se lagake geet tujh pe likha karte hain,

kabhi tu hua karti thi saath, aaj tere dard k saath jeete hain,
tere dard ko geeton me sajaake hum tera naam likha karte hain,

hum to isliye likhte hain ki apna dard ko kam kar saken,
log mehfil me mere aake mere dard pe wah wah karte hain,

tu hi meri zindagi hai jaana, hum bas tere liye jiya karte hain,
saath tera hum paaa na sake par tujhe geeton me mehsoos karte hain...
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«Reply #12 on: September 28, 2010, 05:53:59 AM »
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aur aapke poem ka jaadu chal hi jaata hai meri ungliyon pe ya jaane keyboard pe.. kuch magnetic affect hai keyboard aur meri ungliyon k bich jo ki aapke poems padhte hi recharge ho jaate hain... lo chal gaya ek baar fir aapka mastamm post padhke...

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ab to hum tere dard me kho ke ji lete hain,
har ghum ko aansoo me milaake pi lete hain,

har raat chaand me tera chehra dekhte hain,
dekh tera chehra hum kuch pal has lete hain,

bhool jaate hain hum ye ki tu ab meri nahi hai,
tujhe yaad kar hum apne kareeb samajh lete hain,

tanhaayi me kabhi hum tujhpe kuch likh lete hain,
teri yaadon ko hum geeton me gunguna lete hain,

aawaaz teri mujhe sunaai deti hai tanhaayi mein,
hum makhaane me jaa ke tera ghum bhula lete hain...
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«Reply #13 on: September 28, 2010, 06:28:39 AM »
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Ufffffffffff........kapil bas karo reply karna....mujhe bht kaam hai yaar..fir daant pad jayegi...
ab tum likhte jaoge to mujhe bhi to likhte jana padega na.....

lo mera jawab ready hai....
sunli 2-4 aur dant aur cmplete kar hi diya ise.... Winking Winking Giggle Giggle Giggle

Aksar hi hum chat pe akele hote hain
Tere sath bitaaye lamhe hi bas sang hote hain

Kuch ehsaas teri baton ka  nagmon ka hota hai
Kuch rang mere hi badle jazbaat k hote hain

Bikhar jate hain tut kar hum tere baazuon me
Jab zakhmi  dard se ye dil o jigar hote hain

Banake tujhe khyalon me apne bichhona  sanam
Tere seene pe sir rakh kar hum aksar hi soye hote hain

Tum to nahin hote ho paas sanam har bar magar
Tere ye geet hi mere humsafar bane hote hain…!!!
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«Reply #14 on: September 28, 2010, 06:40:03 AM »
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Bahut khoob kasak ji....
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