<>*Haan chup hun kuch din se main*<>

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«Reply #15 on: September 28, 2010, 07:02:06 AM »
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areeeeee kahan gaye kapil ji aap.......waiting for ur reply ji.......jaldi se likho kuch...ungliyan machal rahi hain type karne ko............. sad5 sad5

jaldiiiiiiiii se reply do na iska ..kahan guum ho gaye tum.... happy3 happy3
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«Reply #16 on: September 28, 2010, 07:14:19 AM »
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Yeh Bhi Khoob Rahi Anamika Ji
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«Reply #17 on: September 28, 2010, 07:36:14 AM »
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ab isme meri kya galti agar apko daant pad rahi hai to.. main thode na likhwa raha hoon aapse... aap hi ho ki likh rahe ho aur mujhse bhi likhwa rahe ho... aur sach me aisa lag raha hai shayaad saalon se nahi likha hai humne kuch aur ek din me sab likh dalenge... aur kya khoob likha hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob.. behtareen...mastammmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....!!!

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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 28, 2010, 06:28:39 AM
Ufffffffffff........kapil bas karo reply karna....mujhe bht kaam hai yaar..fir daant pad jayegi...
ab tum likhte jaoge to mujhe bhi to likhte jana padega na.....

lo mera jawab ready hai....
sunli 2-4 aur dant aur cmplete kar hi diya ise.... Winking Winking Giggle Giggle Giggle

Aksar hi hum chat pe akele hote hain
Tere sath bitaaye lamhe hi bas sang hote hain

Kuch ehsaas teri baton ka  nagmon ka hota hai
Kuch rang mere hi badle jazbaat k hote hain

Bikhar jate hain tut kar hum tere baazuon me
Jab zakhmi  dard se ye dil o jigar hote hain

Banake tujhe khyalon me apne bichhona  sanam
Tere seene pe sir rakh kar hum aksar hi soye hote hain

Tum to nahin hote ho paas sanam har bar magar
Tere ye geet hi mere humsafar bane hote hain…!!!
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«Reply #18 on: September 28, 2010, 07:38:03 AM »
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oyeeeeeee aise jawab k liye nahin kaha tha tumko.......sahi se reply do
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«Reply #19 on: September 28, 2010, 07:38:36 AM »
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main to kahin bhi nahi gaya .. bas aapne manaa kiya tha to ruk gaya tha ... mujhe achcha nahi lag raha tha ki meri wajaah se aapko daant khaani pad rahi hai to log out karke chala gaya tha .. ab aapne fir se bula liya to aana hi pad gaya .. kahaan jaa sakta hoon main aapke posts k reply kiye bina .. hai na ... lo hamaara jawaab tayyar hai.....


dhalti har shaam ke saath teri yaad aati hai,
teri yaad ke saath dhadkan thahar jaati hai,

bhool jaate hain hum har ek gum har ek baat,
jab humein yaadon ki parchhai nazar aati hai,

yaad aati hai humein tere chehre ki maasoomiyat,
aankhon ki wo nami humein aaj bhi yaad aati hai,

takiye ko baahon me bhar tujhe mehsoos karte hain,
teri wo baahon ki narmi humein aaj bhi yaad aati hai,

chumte hain haathon ko apne tera haath samajh ke,
aaj humein tanhaayi me teri bahut yaad aati hai,

sharaabi har shaam me aaj tujh ko yaad karte hain,
mai ke har ek jaam me mujhe bas tu nazar aati hai,

aaj bhi meri dhadkane tujhko yaad karte hain,
likhta hoon koi geet to adhuri hi reh jaati hai...



Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 28, 2010, 07:02:06 AM
areeeeee kahan gaye kapil ji aap.......waiting for ur reply ji.......jaldi se likho kuch...ungliyan machal rahi hain type karne ko............. sad5 sad5

jaldiiiiiiiii se reply do na iska ..kahan guum ho gaye tum.... happy3 happy3
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«Reply #20 on: September 28, 2010, 01:53:30 PM »
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Mukhaar hone ko kuchh dair maun rena hota hai
Aag ugalne lavaa ko bhugarbh me tapna hota hai



Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 27, 2010, 04:04:15 PM
<>*Haan chup hun kuch din se main*<>


Haan chup hun kuch din se main
Kyun hun ye bhi na samjh pai hun

Likhe geet tere padhti hun iss mehfil me
Unhe padhte hue ashk main bahati hun
Maayuus ho jati hunt ere kalaamon se
Kiss tarah main tujhe dard ye de jati hun

Har ek aashar tere padhte padhte main
Tere ishq ki gehraai me ulajhti jati hun
Jitna bhi padhti hunt ere kalaamon ko
Main aur bhi gumsum hoti jati hun

Tere har lafz me pyaar hi chalakta hai
Har sher mujhse izhaare dard karta hai
Jab tu apni mahobbat ki duhaai deta hai
Main samjhkar bhi nasamjh si ban jati hun

Haan kai hain likhne wale iss mehfil me
Par unke geeton me wo baat nahin
Jo dard chalakta hai tere geeton me
Main usme khudko dooboti jati hun

Tere ye geet mere liye anmol ban gaye hain
Inko main khazane sa sanjo k rakhti hun
Ye mere liye zindagi ki amnol dharohar hai
Main inme tumhe mehsus karti jati hun...!!!
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«Reply #21 on: October 07, 2010, 09:36:52 AM »
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Zindagi Hai Nadaan Issi Liye Chup Hoon
Dard Hi Dard Subah Shaam Issi Liye Chup Hoon
Keh Tou Doon Zamane Se Dastan Apni
Uss Mein Ayega Tera Naam Issi Liye Chup Hoon
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«Reply #22 on: October 07, 2010, 09:38:49 AM »
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aiiiyooooooooooooooo..........ajnabee aagaye tum..........kitni khushi hui tumko dekh bata nahin sakti.....was waiting from last 3 days stupid itni late replyyyyyy........

kahan ho 3 din se koi khabr nahin
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«Reply #23 on: October 07, 2010, 11:16:02 AM »
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Koi Deewana Kehta Hai Koi Pagal Samajhta Hai
Magar Dharti Ki Bechani Ko Bus Badal Samajhta Hai
Mein Tujhse Door Kaisa Hoon, Tu Mujhse Door Kaisi Hai
Ye Tera Dil Samajhta Hai Ya Mera Dil Samajhta Hai
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«Reply #24 on: October 07, 2010, 12:12:27 PM »
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Quote from: Stanger2783 on October 07, 2010, 11:16:02 AM
Koi Deewana Kehta Hai Koi Pagal Samajhta Hai
Magar Dharti Ki Bechani Ko Bus Badal Samajhta Hai
Mein Tujhse Door Kaisa Hoon, Tu Mujhse Door Kaisi Hai
Ye Tera Dil Samajhta Hai Ya Mera Dil Samajhta Hai

aahhaaaaaa ajnabee ji...maza aagaya.....ye aapka reply ji....

sach hai ye k tujh bin jee nahin sakte
yaadon me teri hum ab ro bhi nahin sakte
intezar karte rahe har pal tera yunhi
lekin sanam tujhse hi ye hum keh nahin sakte
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«Reply #25 on: October 07, 2010, 12:20:01 PM »
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Quote from: Stanger2783 on October 07, 2010, 11:16:02 AM
Koi Deewana Kehta Hai Koi Pagal Samajhta Hai
Magar Dharti Ki Bechani Ko Bus Badal Samajhta Hai
Mein Tujhse Door Kaisa Hoon, Tu Mujhse Door Kaisi Hai
Ye Tera Dil Samajhta Hai Ya Mera Dil Samajhta Hai

Yeh Mere Fav Kavi Kumar Vishwaas Ji Ki Kavita Ki panktiyan hai..

Stranger ji..jab aap kisi aur ki likhi lines likhte hai neeche N.M Likhiye (Not Mine)

Aapne jo pehle wala sher bhi arz kiya tha woh bhi kisi aur Ka Likha hai..

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«Reply #26 on: October 07, 2010, 12:59:47 PM »
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Wooooowwww!!! muje ni pata tha kumar vishwas ji ki kavitayein itni gour se b koi padhta hai?
Thanks a lot for the same!!
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«Reply #27 on: October 07, 2010, 05:55:03 PM »
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Awaiting your replay Kasak ji....
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«Reply #28 on: October 11, 2010, 12:09:38 PM »
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Haan chup hun kuch din se main
Haan chup hun kuch din se main
Kyun hun ye bhi na samjh paaya hun

Likhe geet tere padhta hun iss mehfil me
Unhe padhte hue ashk main bahata hun
Maayuus ho jata hun tere kalaamon se
Kis tarah main tujhe dard ye de jata hun

Har ek akshar tere padhte padhte main
Tere ishq ki gehraai me ulajhta jata hun
Jitna bhi padhta hun tere kalaamon ko
Main aur bhi gumsum hota jata hun

Tere har lafz me pyaar hi chalakta hai
Har sher mujhse izhaare dard karta hai
Jab tu apni mahobbat ki duhaai deti hai
Main samjhkar bhi nasamjh sa ban jata hun

Haan kai hain likhne wale iss mehfil me
Par unke geeton me wo baat nahin
Jo dard chalakta hai tere geeton me
Main usme khudko dubota jata hun

Tere ye geet mere liye anmol ban gaye hain
Inko main khazane sa sanjo k rakhta hun
Ye mere liye zindagi ki amnol dharohar hai
Main inme tumhe mehsus karta jati hun...!!!

Haan chup hun kuch din se main
Kyun hun ye bhi na samjh paaya hun,,,,

superb
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«Reply #29 on: October 11, 2010, 12:12:31 PM »
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Quote from: Swastik Mathur on October 11, 2010, 12:09:38 PM
Haan chup hun kuch din se main
Haan chup hun kuch din se main
Kyun hun ye bhi na samjh paaya hun

Likhe geet tere padhta hun iss mehfil me
Unhe padhte hue ashk main bahata hun
Maayuus ho jata hun tere kalaamon se
Kis tarah main tujhe dard ye de jata hun

Har ek akshar tere padhte padhte main
Tere ishq ki gehraai me ulajhta jata hun
Jitna bhi padhta hun tere kalaamon ko
Main aur bhi gumsum hota jata hun

Tere har lafz me pyaar hi chalakta hai
Har sher mujhse izhaare dard karta hai
Jab tu apni mahobbat ki duhaai deti hai
Main samjhkar bhi nasamjh sa ban jata hun

Haan kai hain likhne wale iss mehfil me
Par unke geeton me wo baat nahin
Jo dard chalakta hai tere geeton me
Main usme khudko dubota jata hun

Tere ye geet mere liye anmol ban gaye hain
Inko main khazane sa sanjo k rakhta hun
Ye mere liye zindagi ki amnol dharohar hai
Main inme tumhe mehsus karta jati hun...!!!

Haan chup hun kuch din se main
Kyun hun ye bhi na samjh paaya hun,,,,

superb


aapka reply dene ka andaz mujhe bht achcha laga swastik ji..thnx for appreciation
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