~*~ Haath badaye mujhe tu payega ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on January 31, 2011, 07:38:21 PM
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Asmaan choone ki takkat rakhne wale sun le,
Zameen se nikla hai; zameen main jaega..

Aj tere pas bank balance hai toh teri ehmiat hai,
Jab zero hojaega toh yahan koi saath nahin nibhaega..

Aj bhale tu bhool gaya mujhe mager itna kehta hoon,
Jab chorrdegi yeh duniya; haath badaye tu mujhe hi paega..

Aj tu ghareebon se haath milana tak pasand nahin karta,
Yaad rakhna ek dinn yehi ghareeb tujhe dafnaega..

Ager tu yunhi rishton kay uper paisa rakhte gaya toh ‘Khamosh’,
Maan meri baat; tere janaze main tu chaar kandhe nahin paega..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2011, 11:35:23 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 31, 2011, 08:27:27 PM
Kya Baat Hai Bahut Khub Rahim Bhai...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~
BAhaut bahaut shukriya Shihab bhaijan..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2011, 02:38:07 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on January 31, 2011, 07:38:21 PM
Asmaan choone ki takkat rakhne wale sun le,
Zameen se nikla hai; zameen main jaega..

Aj tere pas bank balance hai toh teri ehmiat hai,
Jab zero hojaega toh yahan koi saath nahin nibhaega..

Aj bhale tu bhool gaya mujhe mager itna kehta hoon,
Jab chorrdegi yeh duniya; haath badaye tu mujhe hi paega..

Aj tu ghareebon se haath milana tak pasand nahin karta,
Yaad rakhna ek dinn yehi ghareeb tujhe dafnaega..

Ager tu yunhi rishton kay uper paisa rakhte gaya toh ‘Khamosh’,
Maan meri baat; tere janaze main tu chaar kandhe nahin paega..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Nice One ...... Rahim Ji !

Very Nice Creation ..... dil se daad !
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2011, 05:39:22 AM »
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wah dost kya baat kahi.
sach se bhara ek ek shabd.
dili daad sahib
khus rahiye dost
sukriya
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«Reply #4 on: February 01, 2011, 11:07:32 AM »
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bahut khoob Rahim ji
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: February 01, 2011, 11:13:49 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on February 01, 2011, 02:38:07 AM
Nice One ...... Rahim Ji !

Very Nice Creation ..... dil se daad !
Teh teh dil se shukriya Naresh jee..
khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: February 01, 2011, 11:16:27 AM »
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Quote from: killbill on February 01, 2011, 05:39:22 AM
wah dost kya baat kahi.
sach se bhara ek ek shabd.
dili daad sahib
khus rahiye dost
sukriya
Shukriya shukriya Killbill jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: February 01, 2011, 11:24:59 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 01, 2011, 11:07:32 AM
bahut khoob Rahim ji
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Shukriya shukriya Suresh jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: February 01, 2011, 12:03:32 PM »
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nice lines rahim bhai....
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«Reply #9 on: February 01, 2011, 12:06:36 PM »
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bahot aache rahim ji........

padkar bahot aacha laga....nice dear...keep it up
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«Reply #10 on: February 01, 2011, 12:16:06 PM »
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Rahim Sahaab Aadab ...!

Masha Allah Janab kia umdaa khayaal bayaaN kiye hai..
Behad sahiN aur umdaa likha hai ...

Dil se daad kabool kijiye janab..
Likhate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #11 on: February 01, 2011, 12:57:31 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on February 01, 2011, 12:03:32 PM
nice lines rahim bhai....
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Priya jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2011, 12:58:15 PM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on February 01, 2011, 12:06:36 PM
bahot aache rahim ji........

padkar bahot aacha laga....nice dear...keep it up
Shukriya shukriya Utkarsh jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2011, 12:59:01 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 01, 2011, 12:16:06 PM
Rahim Sahaab Aadab ...!

Masha Allah Janab kia umdaa khayaal bayaaN kiye hai..
Behad sahiN aur umdaa likha hai ...

Dil se daad kabool kijiye janab..
Likhate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Parwaaz jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2011, 01:02:25 PM »
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Bahut khoob rahiim...
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