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Zamane kay sitamon ne kuch yun tabdil kar diya tujhe Rahim,
Haath chorr chala unka bhi jo haqdaar thay teri wafaon kay.. ~Rahim..~ A silent heart..~ |
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2010, 11:00:54 PM » |
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Zamane kay sitamon ne kuch yun tabdil kar diya tujhe Rahim,
Haath chorr chala unka bhi jo haqdaar thay teri wafaon kay.. ~Rahim..~ A silent heart..~
Janab bus aik sher... per kafi umdaa khayaal bandha hai Daad..... Aapke is adna ki koshish per hum bhi humara likha aik sher suna dete hai....
Sunkar huyi hairaani apne hi raqeeb se
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi
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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2010, 08:02:33 PM » |
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Oye hoye kya kahoun bas ghayal kar diya..bahaut khubsoorat..aur bahaut shukriya waqt dene kay liye..!
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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2010, 10:14:03 PM » |
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Rahim .............. kamal yaar .. bhut hi khoob
Apke samne kuch kehne ki himat kar rehe hai ..
Vafa ki hi umeed to ki thi humne apno se
Voh to hume chod ke chale gyae youn garo ki tarh ....
Parwaaz ji Umda reply .........
Zamane kay sitamon ne kuch yun tabdil kar diya tujhe Rahim,
Haath chorr chala unka bhi jo haqdaar thay teri wafaon kay.. ~Rahim..~ A silent heart..~
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«Reply #4 on: September 22, 2010, 11:48:36 PM » |
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2010, 03:37:58 AM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI RAHIM JI.....
AB AISE ZAMANE KO KYA KAHAIN "RAHIM"
JINKO BHI HAM HAATH JOD MILA WO HI MERA "HAATH CHORR CHALA"....
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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2010, 09:01:08 AM » |
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«Reply #7 on: September 23, 2010, 09:05:49 AM » |
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Neel Dost, bahaut bahaut shukriya apka.. Bahaut achi do lines likhi hai apne.. dil se daad..  Rahim .............. kamal yaar .. bhut hi khoob
Apke samne kuch kehne ki himat kar rehe hai ..
Vafa ki hi umeed to ki thi humne apno se
Voh to hume chod ke chale gyae youn garo ki tarh ....
Parwaaz ji Umda reply .........
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«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2010, 09:06:24 AM » |
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Madhu di..bahaut khushi hui apka reply dekh kar..! |
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«Reply #9 on: September 23, 2010, 09:06:54 AM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI RAHIM JI.....
AB AISE ZAMANE KO KYA KAHAIN "RAHIM"
JINKO BHI HAM HAATH JOD MILA WO HI MERA "HAATH CHORR CHALA"....
Cara jee, shukriya.. Bahaut acha kaha hai apne bhi.. |
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«Reply #10 on: September 23, 2010, 09:07:42 AM » |
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«Reply #11 on: September 23, 2010, 09:08:24 AM » |
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yaar innee sone replies....wahh
rahim bhaiii..gale lag jao yaaraa..aaj to bahut khoob kahe hooo haaiinnn..
apni likhi do panktiyan yaad aa rahi he pesh karta hun~
he samandar or dariya meri shayari me samaye huye
or me ab bhi "Abhi" ek boond pyar ko pyasa hun~
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«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2010, 09:10:08 AM » |
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yaar innee sone replies....wahh
rahim bhaiii..gale lag jao yaaraa..aaj to bahut khoob kahe hooo haaiinnn..
apni likhi do panktiyan yaad aa rahi he pesh karta hun~
he samandar or dariya meri shayari me samaye huye
or me ab bhi "Abhi" ek boond pyar ko pyasa hun~
Abhi bhaijan, shukriya.. Gale lagne ki baat paki banti hai..apne saager ko gaager main bhar diya hai..kya shaer likha hai..bahaut bahaut khoob..! |
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«Reply #13 on: September 23, 2010, 09:17:45 AM » |
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Khwaish Dost..Teh dil se shukriya..khushi hui jankar kay apko pasand aya.. Apki lines ne dil choo liya..
Mujhe Chodkar Jaane wale Kya Tujhe Itni Khabar hai
Ke Raat Bhar Tujhe Pukaara Meri Tanhai Ne... |
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«Reply #14 on: September 23, 2010, 09:18:40 AM » |
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Bhai..Ek Sher Aur Arz Kar Lete hai..
Mujhe Chodkar Jaane wale Kya Tujhe Itni Khabar hai
Ke Raat Bhar Tujhe Pukaara Meri Tanhai Ne...
Oye hoyeeeee kya baat hai.. |
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