-----/// Haaye re haaye qaatil ///----- Hriday

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dekhaa  jo  unhe   humne, haathon  se fislaa dil
hothon  pe   kaalaa  til, haaye   re  haaye  qaatil

woh  sharbati  aankhen, woh   makhmali  zulfen
geele   se   un  ke  honth, hothon  pe   til qaatil
kaajal  un  aankhon  mein, laali  un  hothon  par
pehli  nazar  mein hi  woh  dil  mein  hui shaamil

dekhaa  jo  unhe   humne, haathon  se fislaa dil
hothon  pe   kaalaa  til, haaye   re  haaye  qaatil

charche  bahaaron mein, chaand  sitaaron  mein
woh  ek  haseenaa  hai  kai laakh hazaaron mein
bas unko hi  paanaa hai, seene  se  lagaanaa hai
armaan  hai  dil  kaa  ki  bas   karle  unhe  haasil

dekhaa  jo  unhe   humne, haathon  se fislaa dil
hothon  pe   kaalaa  til, haaye   re  haaye  qaatil

naam  hai  kyaa unkaa, poochhaa hi nahi humne
dekhaa jo unhe humne, bas dekhte hi rahe hum
taye  kar  liyaa  humne, unhe dhundke laayenge
hum  ban  jaayen raahi, woh  ban jaayen manzil

dekhaa  jo  unhe   humne, haathon  se fislaa dil
hothon  pe   kaalaa  til, haaye   re  haaye  qaatil


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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2013, 03:25:06 AM »
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Waah Bahut Khoob Hriday Ji.
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2013, 09:13:48 AM »
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waah waah kapil
lubhaa liyaa dil
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rau karo haasil

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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2013, 02:00:19 PM »
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waah waah hriday ji bohut khoob
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Kapil bhai bahut badhiya likha hia dher sari daad
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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2013, 05:09:09 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Abhi ji.....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Miraj ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Iqtedar ji....!!!

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beautiful , beautiful , beautifulllll !!!
beautiful and rythmic !!!
padh kar maza aa gaya .
dli daad qubool kijye.
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Hasan ji....!!!

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beautiful , beautiful , beautifulllll !!! padh kar maza aa gaya . dli daad qubool kijye.
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