Hadson Ke Janjaal Mein

by Roja on May 20, 2009, 12:51:49 PM
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Hadson ke janjaal mein pal raha hai aadmi

Mere saat merne ko chal raha hai aadmi

Baargaahon mein kaid hai hajiyon ki aarzoo

Ramjaan mein karbala sa jal raha hai aadmi

Aadmi hi aadmika hai dushman bana hua

Aadmi ki niyat mein khal raha hai aadmi

Zindagi aur Maut ke kashmakash mein "Roja"

Upperwale ke karam se chal raha hai aadmi..
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2009, 12:57:18 PM »
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Beshaq Sahi Kaha Aapne Roja Sis,.

Karam Uska Jo Na Hota, KOi Bhi Yahana Zinda Na Hota,.
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2009, 01:12:48 PM »
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ek ek Lafz Such Likha Hai Roja.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Great words.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2009, 01:14:13 PM »
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bahut khoob roja!  this is excellent Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2009, 01:44:42 PM »
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Jaane kya kya se kya ho gaya hai Aadmi....Shayad Insaniyat se gir gaya hai Aadmi !

reminds me of a poem, read long ago....!

Insaan Se Haiwaan Ab Ban Gaya Hai Aadmi,
Berahmi Se Aadmi Ko Maar Raha Hai Aadmi.

Ghar Se Nikalna Bhi Ab Mushkil Lagta Hai,
Har Pal Darr Ke Saye Mein Ji Raha Hai Aadmi.

Hindu Bhi Kush Hai Aur Muslmaan Bhi Kush,
Choraho.N Par Roz Qtal Ho Raha Hai Aadmi.

Mandir Aur Maszid Mein Bhagwaan Khamosh Hai,
Aaj Ke Daur Mein Khud Bhagwaan Hai Aadmi.

Begunaho.N Ke Khoon Se Manatey Hain Holiya.N,
“XXX” Imaan Se Apne Gir Gaya Hai Aadmi.

Since I am not sure who is the REAL poet, therefore XXX is for the original poet of this ghazal !

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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2009, 01:50:16 PM »
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Jaane kya kya se kya ho gaya hai Aadmi....Shayad Insaniyat se gir gaya hai Aadmi !

reminds me of a poem, read long ago....!

Insaan Se Haiwaan Ab Ban Gaya Hai Aadmi,
Berahmi Se Aadmi Ko Maar Raha Hai Aadmi.

Ghar Se Nikalna Bhi Ab Mushkil Lagta Hai,
Har Pal Darr Ke Saye Mein Ji Raha Hai Aadmi.

Hindu Bhi Kush Hai Aur Muslmaan Bhi Kush,
Choraho.N Par Roz Qtal Ho Raha Hai Aadmi.

Mandir Aur Maszid Mein Bhagwaan Khamosh Hai,
Aaj Ke Daur Mein Khud Bhagwaan Hai Aadmi.

Begunaho.N Ke Khoon Se Manatey Hain Holiya.N,
“XXX” Imaan Se Apne Gir Gaya Hai Aadmi.

Since I am not sure who is the REAL poet, therefore XXX is for the original poet of this ghazal !



hmm maine bi pada hai but poora gazal yaad nahi aa raha hai.
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2009, 01:50:50 PM »
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Anyways, nice work dear !
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2009, 01:55:01 PM »
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haha... thanks Talat sis  tongue3

Thanks azeem, vicky bhaiya, Vitasta Thanks for reading me  Usual Smile
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