Hai agar ishq...........................Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on October 17, 2010, 04:48:00 PM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1493 times)
mamta bajpai
Guest
Reply with quote
Hai agar ishq to duniyaa ko khabar jaatee hai
tod. ke band sabhee khushboo bikhar jaatee hai

zeest kee raah me kya waqt ajab aayaa hai
subah hoti hee naheeN raat utar jaatee hai

barsegee noor kiran bhee mere aaNgan me kabhee
kyaa huaa aaj jo ye dhuNdh nazar aatee hai

koi to dard kabhee tumse milaa kartaa hai
booNd aaNsoo ki naheeN yuN hee nazar aatee hai

yuN hee phalta naheeN ujade hue gulshan ka shazar
kuch saNwarti hui taqdeer nazar aatee hai
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
berukhi..............................mamta bajpai by mamta bajpai in Miscellaneous Shayri
Berukhi..............................Mamta Bajpai by mamta bajpai in Miscellaneous Shayri
ek baar to................mamta bajpai by mamta bajpai in Miscellaneous Shayri « 1 2 3  All »
AaNkheN............................Mamta Bajpai by mamta bajpai in Miscellaneous Shayri « 1 2  All »
HooN agar aag ...................Mamta Bajpai by mamta bajpai in Miscellaneous Shayri « 1 2  All »
mamta bajpai
Guest
«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2010, 04:48:05 PM »
Reply with quote
Hai agar ishq to duniyaa ko khabar jaatee hai
tod. ke band sabhee khushboo bikhar jaatee hai

zeest kee raah me kya waqt ajab aayaa hai
subah hoti hee naheeN raat utar jaatee hai

barsegee noor kiran bhee mere aaNgan me kabhee
kyaa huaa aaj jo ye dhuNdh nazar aatee hai

koi to dard kabhee tumse milaa kartaa hai
booNd aaNsoo ki naheeN yuN hee nazar aatee hai

yuN hee phalta naheeN ujade hue gulshan ka shazar
kuch saNwarti hui taqdeer nazar aatee hai
Logged
*KasaK*....Dil Ki
Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 19
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
67 days, 9 hours and 25 minutes.
"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle

Posts: 5603
Member Since: Jun 2010


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2010, 05:46:43 PM »
Reply with quote
bht hi khubsurat gazal kahi hai aapne Mamta ji....dil khush khush kar diya aapne ...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

kuch maine bhi aapko dekh likhne ki koshish ki hai..kahiye kaisa laga....

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-dard-e-judai/meri-ummeed-t59118.0.html;new#new
Logged
ParwaaZ
Guest
«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2010, 06:12:57 PM »
Reply with quote
mamtaa jee aadaab!

kafi achchi gazal kahi hai aapne daad.... Usual Smile
Sabhi ashaar achche hai ... Usual Smile

Tafseere ke liye bad meiN aayeNge...

Khush rahiye.....
Khuda hafez... Usual Smile         

Logged
mamta bajpai
Guest
«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2010, 07:45:03 AM »
Reply with quote
Kasak jee behad shukriyaa is tarah housla afzai karne ke liye....mai ne aap ko paRhaa bhee ....waqai aap bahut khoob likhti haiN.....isi tarah saath nibhaate rahiye.....

Mamta Bajpai
Logged
mamta bajpai
Guest
«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2010, 07:47:26 AM »
Reply with quote
Parvez jee behad shukriyaa.Aap ke tabsire ka hume intezar rahegaa...
Mamta Bajpai
Logged
AbhiTamrakar
Guest
«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2010, 08:11:13 AM »
Reply with quote
mamta ji namaskar,


bahut khoob likha he apne...

ye do ashar babut pasaand aaye ...

dher saari daad ke sath~ likhte rahiye ...


zeest kee raah me kya waqt ajab aayaa hai
subah hoti hee naheeN raat utar jaatee hai

koi to dard kabhee tumse milaa kartaa hai
booNd aaNsoo ki naheeN yuN hee nazar aatee hai


Logged
mamta bajpai
Guest
«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2010, 01:16:20 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahut bahut shukriya Abhi jee! bas yuN hee humare housle baRhaate rahiye......
Logged
mamta bajpai
Guest
«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2010, 01:19:06 PM »
Reply with quote
Shihab jee! aap ki zarra nawazi ke liye dil se mashkoor o mamnoon hooN.gazal pasand farmane ka behad shukriyaa1
Logged
Rayees Figar
Guest
«Reply #9 on: October 19, 2010, 01:11:37 PM »
Reply with quote
Mamta ji Rayees figaar ki taraf se aadab qubul karein.aapki gazal parhi bahut achhi lagi is ke liye dil se badhaee.
Logged
mamta bajpai
Guest
«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2010, 02:17:45 PM »
Reply with quote
Walaikum aadaab Rayees figaar jee ! aap ka behad shukriya ...gazal ko paRhane or pasand farmaane ke liye...
Logged
Muhammad kamran
Guest
«Reply #11 on: October 20, 2010, 06:32:29 PM »
Reply with quote
Dil to sab N dokhaya he zalim.
 na jaane y zamana mujhe pechan Nahin p tearyeyedaya [/td][/tr][/table][/b]
Logged
mamta bajpai
Guest
«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2010, 12:09:55 AM »
Reply with quote
Shukriya Mohammad Kamran jee!
Logged
KOYAL46
Guest
«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2010, 02:38:43 AM »
Reply with quote
Wah wah wah ............kya baat hai ati sunder....shabdh aur khayaal......... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

" koi to dard kabhee tumse milaa kartaa hai
booNd aaNsoo ki naheeN yuN hee nazar aatee hai  "

mazaa aagya padh kar.....Mamta-di

Houle houle he sakhee ye ishq rang laata hai
Ye wo saroor hai jo chehre pe nazar aata hai.....



Hai agar ishq to duniyaa ko khabar jaatee hai
tod. ke band sabhee khushboo bikhar jaatee hai

zeest kee raah me kya waqt ajab aayaa hai
subah hoti hee naheeN raat utar jaatee hai

barsegee noor kiran bhee mere aaNgan me kabhee
kyaa huaa aaj jo ye dhuNdh nazar aatee hai

koi to dard kabhee tumse milaa kartaa hai
booNd aaNsoo ki naheeN yuN hee nazar aatee hai

yuN hee phalta naheeN ujade hue gulshan ka shazar
kuch saNwarti hui taqdeer nazar aatee hai

Logged
mamta bajpai
Guest
«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2010, 08:28:12 AM »
Reply with quote
Shukriyaa Koyal!tumhaari talaash bahut din se thee....ab mil gayee ho ...achchha lagaa.jo shair tumne likhaa uskaa jawaab naheeN...dher se pyaar ke saath......
Mamta
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 04:37:24 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]

[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]

by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.101 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer