-----/// Hai mohabbat kahaan ///----- Hriday

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yahaan mohabbat  ki koi  qadar kahaan
jo  dekhe  pyaar se,  woh nazar kahaan

woh  jaayen  laut kar  jahaan shaam ko
yahaan deewaano kaa  koi ghar kahaan

chaahte hain  unko khudse  bhi badhke
magar  is  baat ki  unko  khabar kahaan

kehte  hain  log, mohabbat  ab  bhi hai
poochhte  hain  hum, hai magar kahaan

jis ko  taraash  kar rakhen mandir mein
koi bataade  hai woh paththar kahaan

log sun kar  jise bas waah  waah kahen
hamari ghazal mein  woh hunar kahaan

so  jaayen  bachche chain  ki neend ab
maa  ki  lori  mein ab  woh asar kahaan


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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2013, 01:09:15 PM »
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khub kaha hai apne hridhay ji
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2013, 01:33:25 PM »
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Waaaaaah hriday ji.. bahut khoob kaha aapne...har ek sher khoob hai.. dheron dheron daad..

log sun kar  jise bas waah  waah kahen
hamari ghazal mein  woh hunar kahaan

so  jaayen  bachche chain  ki neend ab
maa  ki  lori  mein ab  woh asar kahaan

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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2013, 04:28:47 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2013, 04:44:59 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2013, 06:11:55 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 21, 2013, 12:24:42 PM


yahaan mohabbat  ki koi  qadar kahaan
jo  dekhe  pyaar se,  woh nazar kahaan

SACH KAHA  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

woh  jaayen  laut kar  jahaan shaam ko
yahaan deewaano kaa  koi ghar kahaan

HAAN SAHI KAHA  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

chaahte hain  unko khudse  bhi badhke
magar  is  baat ki  unko  khabar kahaan

SHANDAAR Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

kehte  hain  log, mohabbat  ab  bhi hai
poochhte  hain  hum, hai magar kahaan

GHAZAB  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

jis ko  taraash  kar rakhen mandir mein
koi bataade  hai woh paththar kahaan

KHOOB KAHA

log sun kar  jise bas waah  waah kahen
hamari ghazal mein  woh hunar kahaan

WAAH WAAH  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

so  jaayen  bachche chain  ki neend ab
maa  ki  lori  mein ab  woh asar kahaan

BILKUL SAHI  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2013, 07:00:41 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 21, 2013, 12:24:42 PM


yahaan mohabbat  ki koi  qadr kahaan
jo  dekhe  pyaar se,  woh nazar kahaan

woh  jaayen  laut kar  jahaan shaam ko
yahaan deewaano kaa  koi ghar kahaan

chaahte hain  unko khudse  bhi badhke
magar  is  baat ki  unko  khabar kahaan

kehte  hain  log, mohabbat  ab  bhi hai
poochhte  hain  hum, hai magar kahaan

jis ko  taraash  kar rakhen mandir mein
koi bataade  hai woh paththar kahaan

log sun kar  jise bas waah  waah kahen
hamari ghazal mein  woh hunar kahaan

so  jaayen  bachche chain  ki neend ab
maa  ki  lori  mein ab  woh asar kahaan


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nice,sir but qadr is not similar kafia its not qadar its qadr
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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2013, 11:32:25 PM »
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waah bahoot khub hriday sir, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 22, 2013, 01:12:50 AM »
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Waah waah ... Khoobsurat aur asardaar ghazal kahi Hriday ji ....aur ye sher "wo jaayen laut kar ......ghar kahaan", ye zehen mein is tarah ghar kar gaya hai ki nikaale naheen nikalta .... Dheron daad apko !
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«Reply #9 on: September 22, 2013, 02:56:50 PM »
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yahaan mohabbat  ki koi  qadar kahaan
jo  dekhe  pyaar se,  woh nazar kahaan
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«Reply #10 on: September 23, 2013, 08:28:14 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 21, 2013, 12:24:42 PM


yahaan mohabbat  ki koi  qadar kahaan
jo  dekhe  pyaar se,  woh nazar kahaan

woh  jaayen  laut kar  jahaan shaam ko
yahaan deewaano kaa  koi ghar kahaan

chaahte hain  unko khudse  bhi badhke
magar  is  baat ki  unko  khabar kahaan

kehte  hain  log, mohabbat  ab  bhi hai
poochhte  hain  hum, hai magar kahaan

jis ko  taraash  kar rakhen mandir mein
koi bataade  hai woh paththar kahaan

log sun kar  jise bas waah  waah kahen
hamari ghazal mein  woh hunar kahaan

so  jaayen  bachche chain  ki neend ab
maa  ki  lori  mein ab  woh asar kahaan


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woh  jaayen  laut kar  jahaan shaam ko
yahaan deewaano kaa  koi ghar kahaan

kehte  hain  log, mohabbat  ab  bhi hai
poochhte  hain  hum, hai magar kahaan

jis ko  taraash  kar rakhen mandir mein
koi bataade  hai woh paththar kahaan

Waah waah Waah....Bahut Bahut Khoob


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bahut bahut shukriyaa aap sabhi kaa jo aapne ise waqt diyaa, padhaa aur pasand kiyaaa....!!!
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