haiwaan------------------MARHOOM BAHAYAAT

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                             qishto.n  mein  meri  jaan leta raha!
                             mere  sabr  ka  imtehaan  leta  raha!

                             uchhaal kar mehfil mein dastaar meri!
                             pal-pal  wo  meri  shaan  leta  raha!

                             dekar    aziyat  baarah  bin  wajah !
                             mere  ander  ka   insaan  leta  raha!

                             apne  inqalaab  ki kaamyaabi ke liye!
                             meri   ghazal-o-unwaan   leta   raha!

                             bana   kar  haiwaan  MARHOOM ko  aaj!
                             zamaane  se meri  pahchaan leta raha!


                             

                             
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2013, 08:44:55 PM »
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waah bohat khoob ,.........bohat c daad,.......
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2013, 08:51:03 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2013, 08:52:30 PM »
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                             qishto.n  mein  meri  jaan leta raha!
                             mere  sabr  ka  imtehaan  leta  raha!

                             uchhaal kar mehfil mein dastaar meri!
                             pal-pal  wo  meri  shaan  leta  raha!

                             dekar    aziyat  baarah  bin  wajah !
                             mere  ander  ka   insaan  leta  raha!

                             apne  inqalaab  ki kaamyaabi ke liye!
                             meri   ghazal-o-unwaan   leta   raha!

                             bana   kar  haiwaan  MARHOOM ko  aaj!
                             zamaane  se meri  pahchaan leta raha!


                            

                            


Wah,Wah,Wah Mahroomji,
Bilkul mukkammal ghazal kahi hai aapne.I really love it.
Meri mubarakbaad qabool kariye.
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2013, 08:56:18 PM »
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Bahut khoob MB saheb
nihayat umda ghazal kahee hai aapne.
par ye do sher..kya kahne
qishto.n  mein  meri  jaan leta raha!
mere  sabr  ka  imtehaan  leta  raha!

uchhaal kar mehfil mein dastaar meri!
pal-pal  wo  meri  shaan  leta  raha!

Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2013, 08:58:30 PM »
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Bahut Si Daad Kabool Karein,Nice1.
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2013, 09:10:14 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 29, 2013, 02:17:33 AM »
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bhut khub
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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2013, 03:19:31 AM »
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bahut khoob!
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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2013, 12:10:02 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut achche khayalath se saji hai aapki ghazal mb ji. is khoobsurat kalaam par hazaron dili daad..
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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2013, 12:44:03 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Marhoom ji...........
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2013, 01:15:37 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: May 29, 2013, 06:32:39 PM »
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M B Jee Aadaab... !


Kya baat hai janab, badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai sanjeeda ahsaas O khayaal aur umdaa bayaani... Usual Smile

Bahut khoob... sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab... Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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«Reply #13 on: May 29, 2013, 08:13:02 PM »
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                             qishto.n  mein  meri  jaan leta raha!
                             mere  sabr  ka  imtehaan  leta  raha!

                             uchhaal kar mehfil mein dastaar meri!
                             pal-pal  wo  meri  shaan  leta  raha!

                             dekar    aziyat  baarah  bin  wajah !
                             mere  ander  ka   insaan  leta  raha!

                             apne  inqalaab  ki kaamyaabi ke liye!
                             meri   ghazal-o-unwaan   leta   raha!

                             bana   kar  haiwaan  MARHOOM ko  aaj!
                             zamaane  se meri  pahchaan leta raha!


                            

                            


wah wah...![/color]
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«Reply #14 on: May 31, 2013, 09:07:37 PM »
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waah bohat khoob ,.........bohat c daad,.......

thank you,ma'am
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