hamaray geet (NM)

by vb on July 16, 2010, 02:31:33 PM
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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2010, 05:14:10 AM »
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Quote from: vb on July 16, 2010, 02:31:33 PM

ye geet hamaray dard bharay
kab saath hamaraa chhoren gay

ku in main khushi ka rang nahi
ku dard ki baaten kartay hain
har lafz sulagtaa rehta hay
har baat pay aahen bhartay hain

ye lafz kahaa tu paabandi
us baat pay wo naaraaz huvay
in geeton ko kuch kehnay k
sub mousam he naasaaz huvay

kabhi jhooti mooti taareefen
kabhi lambay hain kabhi chhotay hain
ku laa-waaris ye geet nahi
ku naam kisi k hotay hain

kabhi jhoot palanda kehlayay
kabhi tanz or taanay miltay hain
kabhi galiyon main badnaam huvay
kabhi baazaaron main biktay hain

jo baaki hay in lafzon say
is rishtay ko bhe toren gay
ye geet hamaray dard bharay
kab saath hamaara chhoren gay
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Nice poetry ....dil se daad !
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