Hamari guriya (by vb)

by vb on May 07, 2013, 11:05:55 PM
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Hamari guriya, kai dinon say, najaanay itni, udaas ku hay

Na baat karti, na bolti hay, najaanay ku kar, khafa hay hum say
Udaas aankhon, men khaamshi si, najaanay kya dukh, mila hay hum say
Hamen yakin hay, na chaahtay bhi, kahin ghalat kuch, huva hay hum say
Hamara hum par, he bus kahahan hay, jo is ko itna, gila hay hum say

Shikayaten hon, ya raaz dil k, isi ko aa kar, bataatay thay hum
Jo mama, papa, say roothtay thay, isi ko aa kar, sunaatay thay hum
Jo raat jaagi, udaas ro kar, isi ko khud sang, jagaatay thay hum
Kahin koi chheen lay na hum say, isi ko sub say, chhupaatay thay hum

Isay khabar tak, nahi hay aakhir, sabhi khilono, main khaas ku hay
Hamari guriya, kai dinon say, najaanay itni, udaas ku hay
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«Reply #1 on: May 08, 2013, 01:33:01 AM »
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vb   jee   bahut  achi  peshkash  hai ,  dheron  daad.....
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«Reply #2 on: May 08, 2013, 01:53:21 AM »
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very good vb jee
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«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2013, 07:19:44 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai. dheron daad.
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2013, 08:29:07 PM »
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ek alag tarah ki peshkash iss baar VB ji...... aur aj bhi ye dard bekasi dil ko chhu gai.... bht bht bht mast likha hai aapne
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2013, 02:57:35 PM »
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Hamari guriya, kai dinon say, najaanay itni, udaas ku hay

Na baat karti, na bolti hay, najaanay ku kar, khafa hay hum say
Udaas aankhon, men khaamshi si, najaanay kya dukh, mila hay hum say
Hamen yakin hay, na chaahtay bhi, kahin ghalat kuch, huva hay hum say
Hamara hum par, he bus kahahan hay, jo is ko itna, gila hay hum say

Shikayaten hon, ya raaz dil k, isi ko aa kar, bataatay thay hum
Jo mama, papa, say roothtay thay, isi ko aa kar, sunaatay thay hum
Jo raat jaagi, udaas ro kar, isi ko khud sang, jagaatay thay hum
Kahin koi chheen lay na hum say, isi ko sub say, chhupaatay thay hum

Isay khabar tak, nahi hay aakhir, sabhi khilono, main khaas ku hay
Hamari guriya, kai dinon say, najaanay itni, udaas ku hay
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«Reply #7 on: May 10, 2013, 02:57:47 PM »
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