Hamari Haveli ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on May 04, 2010, 09:58:17 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 06, 2010, 11:07:46 PM »
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Bohot bohot khoob Qadeer Bhai, aapki nazm ne aakhon ke saamne manzar kheench diya.....jaise aankhain wo sab dekh rahi hon jo aapne likha hai......Aur mere paas lafz nahin ki kuch likhun, bas aap ki nazm dil ke qareeb se guzar gayi......

talat bahen app ka behad shukriya. ye kya kamm hai mere liye ke app alfas ke ahesas tak pahonch gayi ,, inayath banaye rakhen .. khush rahen hamesha ..

apka bhai

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«Reply #16 on: May 09, 2010, 01:22:47 AM »
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WAAAH QADEER BHAI!!! MANZARKASHI KA AISA NAZARA PAHLE NAHI DEKHA.BEHAD SANJEEDA QISM KE INSAAN MALOOM HOTE HAI.BAHUT KHOOB.
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«Reply #17 on: May 09, 2010, 04:28:48 PM »
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WAAAH QADEER BHAI!!! MANZARKASHI KA AISA NAZARA PAHLE NAHI DEKHA.BEHAD SANJEEDA QISM KE INSAAN MALOOM HOTE HAI.BAHUT KHOOB.


inayath ke liye shukriya .. hausla afzai karte rahe ..


duwa go

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«Reply #18 on: May 18, 2010, 11:52:01 PM »
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bahot umda hai A.Qadeer bhai aapka andaaz..aur yeh bandh to haqiqat ki akasi kar raha hai janab...bahot khoob bahot khoob.
aag lage iss chaar din ki jawani ko........kya kahoob bus lajawab hai.



dada jaan ki ye qaali kursi ,
khud se uktaya howa ye budha daraqath ,
tawil arse se sukha ye kuwan ,  
charag ki maheromi ka matham karte ye benoor se taaq ,
ye dhundlai howi diwaren , ye nangle darwaze ,
char so viraani o bebasi , bus yahi rahe gaya hai hamari is pushteni haweli me ,,

aag lage ye char din ki jawani ko “Qadeer”!!
Chin Liya kambaqath ne Mujh se bachpan mera !!

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«Reply #19 on: May 19, 2010, 08:47:26 AM »
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bahot umda hai A.Qadeer bhai aapka andaaz..aur yeh bandh to haqiqat ki akasi kar raha hai janab...bahot khoob bahot khoob.
aag lage iss chaar din ki jawani ko........kya kahoob bus lajawab hai.



dada jaan ki ye qaali kursi ,
khud se uktaya howa ye budha daraqath ,
tawil arse se sukha ye kuwan , 
charag ki maheromi ka matham karte ye benoor se taaq ,
ye dhundlai howi diwaren , ye nangle darwaze ,
char so viraani o bebasi , bus yahi rahe gaya hai hamari is pushteni haweli me ,,

aag lage ye char din ki jawani ko “Qadeer”!!
Chin Liya kambaqath ne Mujh se bachpan mera !!

Qadeertoopchi
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bhai apki mahubbath ka shukriya .. nazer saheb hausla afzai karte rahen to kahene ko himmat mile..dad ke liye behad mashkoor o mumnoo hon sahab..allah apko khush rakhe..

apka bhai
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«Reply #20 on: August 31, 2010, 09:23:13 PM »
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Wah Qadeer ji.bahut dard bhari nazm aapne pesh kiya.apne bachpan ke ehsaaso ko bahut khoobsurti se likha.great work.keep it up.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


tashakkur ke liye alfazon se qaasir hon...
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«Reply #21 on: August 31, 2010, 09:58:12 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Qadeer Ji
Aap ka nazm pa.dhkar apni bachpan ki yaad aa gayee
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«Reply #22 on: September 01, 2010, 06:11:51 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Qadeer Ji
Aap ka nazm pa.dhkar apni bachpan ki yaad aa gayee


tashkur bhaiye mashkur ..
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